Fight, You Foul Chicken!

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The writing is good and quite engaging 👍

2.23 Million words... Although it is for self-entertainment, it is still nb

The writing is good, it has been collected, please visit again!

Sorry, after reading the public chapters, I have no desire to pay to continue reading. It felt like the world was spread too far and it was a bit foggy. I said before that I would get to the front line within 10 days, but then I stayed on the road and got a map that was used by deserters more than 10 years ago. Then suddenly it changed from the system flow to the adventure flow. It's like the kind of RPG game where you take on a main mission and arrive at a certain place within a limited time otherwise the mission fails, and then the protagonist starts wandering around. If you see a monster, fight it, if you see a copy, fight it. There is a side mission here, take it. Then the exciting and tense atmosphere created previously, and the full sense of expectation for what will happen after the protagonist arrives at the front line, are all gone. The most important thing is that I originally thought that I would start writing war scenes later, but as a result, the plot suddenly changed and I felt that this war was completely unnecessary. I guess the protagonist just went to the front line to make soy sauce, and there was no sense of expectation at all. It's the same as shown in the trash idol anti-Japanese drama: After receiving the information, the Japanese army is about to launch a general attack, and the protagonist needs to rush to the front line within 3 days. The journey is long and time is tight. The protagonist sets off with the heroine, and then halfway through, the heroine quarrels with the protagonist and runs out to relax and is captured by the bandits. After that, the plot begins with the protagonist outsmarting the bandits. The TV series filmed for more than 10 episodes. Finally, the heroine was rescued and ran to the front line to spread a wave of dog food. The TV series ended. The reason is that war scenes are too expensive, and smaller scenes are more economical.

This system is too real, and it is very similar to a movie. It is a female writer and the male protagonist. I forgot the name! Originally, the female writer liked tragic endings very much, but she was forced to change it to a normal ending by the protagonist!

With this title, I almost thought I had entered an unspeakable website.

Received, received from each other, and encouraged each other.

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