Monster Park

I have read Chapter 16 so far Hmm~ How should I say it? Too bland? From the front, the core of the male protagonist should be his "purity", right? But... Is this setting too much? Complete purity? Gentlemen also pay attention to "repaying grievances with honesty". Too much purity will make people think of "white lotus", and it is really too bland and does not seem to have any character characteristics. As for Chen Xiao and the female supporting character, the impression they left on me is not as deep as the villain in a brainless novel. So many things have happened, parents disappeared, brothers betrayed, and the company was robbed. These are all plots that can cause emotional fluctuations in the viewer. But I watched it continuously and didn't feel any emotional fluctuations... The protagonist feels like parents are missing? No impact, brother betrayal? No impact, the company was robbed? No impact, so after experiencing all this, he can still go to the amusement park with the heroine carelessly. Although I know that he is not without influence, the pendant is also used in the article to reflect the change in the protagonist's heart, but don't you think it is too deliberate? Even deliberately to the extent of "White Lotus", I like fairy tales, and I also want to believe that the world is beautiful, but the male protagonist can no longer be described as "pure", right? And the plot of the girl in the back (ah, sorry, when I wrote this, I suddenly forgot what to add about the girl in the park, I'm really sorry), is it a bit forced? A person I just met, he still owes his family wages for a long time, and he has not paid off the wages owed. As a result, the male protagonist asked her to borrow money, and she just borrowed it? She didn't even need to ask her family members? She didn't even ask her father's opinion and said that her father would continue to stay. (Even if she mentioned this in one sentence when chatting with the protagonist, it wouldn't be so sudden.) The protagonist said that he was going outside and just followed him like this (like a white post)? Those employees, after being owed wages for a long time, and knowing that the protagonist has no money, are they still willing to stay? Do they have nowhere to go? Or are they all single? Don't need to support their families? I started to see the male protagonist's pendant beginning to be affected. I thought it was the male protagonist's mind that became a little more realistic after a series of blows, or that he was leaning towards darkness, and then he was influenced by the female protagonist and became pure again I prefer fairy tales and light novels, but fairy tales also have darkness. Now the plot is that everyone is serving this "fairy tale", and it even makes people feel like they are not a person, but a tool, so they can stand on the protagonist's side without thinking about anything... Fairy tales are very beautiful, but they are not suitable for things like online novels... My personal opinion, if there is anything wrong, I apologize.

It can be said to be very vicious. In order to show that the protagonist is pure, the protagonist's parents are missing and the protagonist inherits tens of billions of wealth. There is a problem with the setting. Someone in the chapter review has already said that the author does not understand the law. The protagonist is kidnapped and forced to transfer all his family property. I don't know if this is valid in the law. During this period, the best friend's girlfriend spent several years planning the betrayal and didn't even leave the protagonist a house. The protagonist also said that they must have something to hide and were forced to do so. Then they accepted the protagonist's house and drove him away. The protagonist just left and seemed ready to let it go? This is still a near-future world. This is not purity, this is just stupidity.

What can I say about this novel? It's quite imaginative and beautiful.

I read the first chapter and thought it was pretty good, but I haven't read the second chapter yet.

Book friends who want to complain, please come in 😏

The subject matter is good and the imagination is good, but it feels so inconsistent. It feels like a new author. Come on, save it on the bookshelf. I will read it when I have time. I hope the writing style is better.

Come on, author, stick to yourself to be true, it's really beautiful.

I am Shennong, and I bid farewell by poisoning him to death.

Goodbye, author Goodbye, author, I'm sorry for making this decision. Goodbye by fate. Because I encountered some unexpected situations, I formally bid farewell to the author. Thank you for the joy you brought me. Thank you, the author, for always being by my side. The most important thing is that I'm hungry. I'll read it in a while

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The writing is smooth A, the literary talent is acceptable C+, the plot at the beginning is a bit poisonous, and the follow-up is good B, but the plot progresses slowly. The updates are stable (one in the morning and one in the evening) A, but the length has been short recently B-. Overall, B, you can read it when you are free, but you have to be patient.

Return visit, I just read a few chapters, the author's ingenious conception and twists and turns of the story are suitable for reading by the author who is full of fantasy in his student days. I like it.

The novel is good, but it's still far from the Xiaoshuang novel 🤓 Come on💪💪💪

Shennong is dead😟