Lu Yuan's Wonderful Journey

A good start, there will definitely be different results. A hard work, a harvest, a genius idea, and the soul of the work. I will always pay attention to it.

Once you have a starting point, you have a direction. If you have an idea and you can write it down and let more people understand it, it's great 👍👍👍

Continue to write some different stories that readers want to know✊

I feel that the author's writing is delicate, eloquent, clear in thinking, and fluent in expression.

The characters gradually gain life and vitality. Although the storyline is unremarkable, the entire article is still worth reading.

The main character's name in "I Really Don't Want to Be Famous" seems to be Lu Yuan

Author, please break up each paragraph. Generally, a paragraph should not exceed three lines. A page cannot have more than one paragraph or more than three lines. Otherwise, just looking at the screen will make people suffocate. Making it easier for readers to read is also a sign of respect for readers. Otherwise, just make a draft and enjoy it yourself.

When I opened it and saw the neatly filled screen, I immediately didn't want to read any more. Should the author write well in exam essays? When writing a novel, you have to let the reader breathe.

😥😥😥😥😥There are still too many typos! Some of them have reached the point where you can't even guess the original meaning. Can you please find a book friend to help catch insects?

A running account chapter; there are many narrations that blur the timeline; there are typos.