The First Emperor of the Song Dynasty

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. There were a lot of typos and unlimited spoilers. What will happen to this person in the future? What will happen after I send this person there? There are too many poisonous points. I can't bear it anymore. I'm leaving.

Like in Chapter 4, you didn't explain clearly where you made the drawings. How were you able to draw the drawing of the crossbow? Have you seen it before traveling through time? Do you shoot one kilometer flat or high? Do you know what the maximum range of a sniper rifle is? There is also Chapter 8. There is no connection between the end of Chapter 7 and Chapter 8, so you just get a paraglider. I'm really convinced. Do you have Doraemon's treasure bag? Can you take it out directly? How about you let soldiers wear paragliders to sneak attack on food and grass, and also check whether there is wind and the direction of the wind? You didn't say anything, so you just put it on and launched a sneak attack. Aren't you afraid that you would be knocked upside down and killed just as you were about to fly? Your writing is so rough, I just read more than ten chapters. . . Anyway, I don't know if those 40 or so monthly votes were voted for by your friends. The key point is that you still have a popularity of more than 300,000, which shows that you are quite powerful 🙏

I'm a bit of a novice, crossbows are made too fast, paragliders are made too fast, and 300 people learn to paraglider too fast. I played poker without dealing with many things, and a difficult battle was written in two strokes, which was completely inconsistent with the sense of crisis at the beginning. Writing female characters can be completely interspersed with busyness, and the rhythm and feeling must be well controlled.

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. It's so brainless. It was difficult to recover from the hard work in the late Northern Song Dynasty, but it was easy in the author's writing. Is it so easy to solve the interest groups of the Song Dynasty's civil servant group and noble interest groups? Do you know where the Xiang army soldiers of the Song Dynasty came from? Is it so easy to carry out national and regional military reforms? In the late Northern Song Dynasty, when the Northern Song Dynasty was still in turmoil, it was possible to issue decrees that harmed class interests by just repelling the Jin soldiers. How could they be executed perfectly? If it were so simple, how could Wang Anshi's reform fail? Those who write about the late Ming Dynasty and Chongzhen, others think more about it than you do, and they can basically combine it with the situation at that time, and the writing is like an urban and brainless article...

Ridiculous, ridiculous, the author is a child! The ancient dynasties were not so simple. The scholar-bureaucrats had their own power, and so did Taoism. Whatever the protagonist did, he might die suddenly the next day. Since ancient times, no one around the emperor was simple. If you don't believe it, look at Zhao Gao, the First Emperor, the witchcraft disaster of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, and Empress Changsun of Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty. It is a miracle that the protagonist can live like this for three days.

You only know how to kill Hekun in Jiading. Do you know how risky it is to kill Hekun? The funny thing is that after killing the scholar-officials, they didn't fight back. Instead, they were afraid of you and showed off their power to the protagonist. There are also female killers. Male killers in ancient times were okay and had a little dignity. The female killers hahahahaha. Do you know how the military commander trains female agents? In ancient times, it was common for female killers to seduce men, and their chastity was only slightly more dignified than that of prostitutes who bought their bodies.

I can't stand it anymore. It's full of loopholes. Don't curse. When writing a book, check the information carefully. It's not that there is no information. Anyway, there are too many flaws. I can't appreciate it. Goodbye.

A piece of writing that you can read without thinking

What a ridiculous thing to write. If you write like this, you will write yourself to death. Finally, I want to ask you, have you graduated from junior high school?

Chapter 1: What he said was so true that I almost believed it ——The process of history——The Queen Wang failed to persuade Zhao Huan to become emperor? Zhao Huansheng's mother, Queen Wang, died in the second year of Daguan in 1108. Or in terms of historical development? Everything else is fine, but can't the author be more rigorous and serious?

History is all messed up, Temujin has traveled through time

After reading a few chapters I couldn't stand it anymore.

Anyway, there are no books in my library. Just watch it!

I couldn't find any comment on Creation, so I came here to say it. After reading the third chapter, I felt poisonous. You kill people when you first come up, and you are dismissed from office if you disagree with me. You are thinking about appointing and removing officials before you are even warmed up. Do others listen to you? If you do this, I'm afraid you'll have to be kidnapped to Jin Camp the next day.

Let me tell you, this book is purely a novice and I have abandoned it.

In fact, I want to say that the Jin soldiers have surrounded Kaifeng, and the Song Dynasty is about to be destroyed. Yue Fei is still a small soldier. At this time, the protagonist has traveled through time to help Yue Fei. Is it what if the protagonist does not travel through time? Is Yue Fei just a nobody? The Song Dynasty was destroyed, where would Yue Fei come from?

I only read three chapters. First, when Song Huizong passed the throne in history, the Jin army was still far away from Feng. It took at least ten days before the Jin army arrived in Kaifeng. Second, Zongze was not a minister of the Ministry of Industry.

You're stupid. You go out as an emperor and don't do anything to protect yourself. You just want to die!

If you are convinced by the people in the discussion group, just read it if you write it. If you don't like it, don't read it. You can just write it yourself. It's so verbose.

The strategy for revitalizing the Northern Song Dynasty starts almost the same

You didn't get off to a good start at the beginning. You just traveled through time and you still mess around without your own foundation.

During the Alliance of Chanyuan, the Song Dynasty had bed crossbows that sniped and killed enemy generals. If you show a picture of a chariot crossbow, others would not recognize it. The crossbow could be said to have reached the top level in the Song Dynasty. Otherwise, how do you think the Song Dynasty, which had no cavalry, could withstand the Liao Kingdom for so many years?

Recommend the book "I'm such a scumbag", a hilarious daily routine, everyone is welcome to watch.

I didn't want to read it after reading the first chapter. The first king and queen died when Zhao Huan was 9 years old. The second emperor Jingkang was frightened by the emergency inner meditation at night and was carried to the palace to ascend the throne. The third queen who couldn't bear the humiliation and chose to commit suicide was written by you as a woman who courted Qin Muchu. However, later she said that according to the historical process, her mother did not persuade him and you couldn't fall in love. There was Zhao Kai staring at Neng in front of you. You didn't want others to be happy. How would you do this if you read history? If you don't respect history, why don't you write about Yue Fei defecting to the Jin Kingdom for his own benefit?