The Holy Sword Career Begins from Ark

I think your character's OOC is a bit serious, and it's a bit different from the original. Especially Skadi, the character's personality is completely wrong. Also, Skadi has white hair, not blue hair, the blue one is a hat.

Can't you write starting from Arknights? I thought the first world was Ark Survival Evolved

I think your similar books are all well written. The protagonists are really good, and the people you choose are not random. You first become a powerful weapon, but you don't show any skills, making others think you are just a garbage weapon with self-thinking. In fact, the first person you choose is simply unimaginable. These are some of my opinions about you, but I really can't stand the rest. The writing style doesn't need to be changed. In fact, the writing style is not too bad. The key to the plot is that the person I was thinking of was beaten to death by others in the end, and he was not willing to take action to kill those two people. If there is no halo of the protagonist, the protagonist will be dragged down and directly broken.

I have no intention of **. If you can see it, you can reply below or delete my post. Just let me know. The key is that some poisonous points can be touched, and some poisonous points really cannot be touched, such as the harem or sometimes there are some brainless villains, and the protagonist sometimes has no brains. Occasionally, someone may give you advice, but no one will give you a low score because of it. However, the protagonist of the Madonna is like a dog, especially if you write this series, even if the protagonist himself is not strong in combat, you have to keep bragging. Talk about what kind of ancient artifact you are, and then create a sense of force and mystery, and then focus on being cold and cold. Occasionally say a few words to him. Choosing people is also crucial. Even if you choose someone who is kinder, it will be fine, but if you choose this one, you are completely a virgin. This is a serious mistake, and it does not say that this person cannot be left alone, and then find another person to hold the weapon. For example, in Chapter 13, the protagonist obviously had hundreds of friends, but lost them because of one word from that person. Then the person chosen by the protagonist is obviously an infected person, but he still can't kill anything, especially when that person obviously wants to kill himself, but he still can't kill him, and the protagonist is too talkative. Not only is he talkative, but he also has no real character. For example, in Chapter 20, the protagonist was even scolded by the sword-wielding man. Not to mention it was unqualified, I would believe him even if he said it was a pet. Although this may be a bit serious, in the eyes of those of us who put ourselves into the protagonist, it is simply too poisonous to watch. Generally speaking, even if we cannot put ourselves into the protagonist, we can also put ourselves into the hands of the person holding the sword. But the first person holding the sword is a pure woman. There is nothing we can do about it, but it can be brought in. After all, I have read this series of novels, and many people choose women, and then kill everyone, but coupled with the incomparable Virgin Mary

I feel disgusted when I see the character of Eyjafala in Arknights. He insists on blocking the path chosen by others, and almost kills himself. It's really disgusting.

I'll leave you with the following sentence: Arknights is the same in terms of abilities, but everything else has been changed 😅

You are so kind, are you a child in an ivory tower?

Why are there people talking about running away? The foundation is great, okay?

Not at all like Little Sheep. Disgusting to see. Feeling like a holy mother bitch.

Have you really played Arknights? Still haven't seen the character settings?

Update! Renew! 🔨

The Holy Mother endured it in the early stage. I hoped that it would darken later, but it was a pity that it didn't happen. Don't think about it, how could it be possible? The one on the back is not only the Virgin Mary's, the one on the back is ***, do you understand? Don't tell me that the protagonist's mentality can't be changed. If the protagonist's mentality can't be changed, then why would the god find him? If you can give him this thing, at least it will be related to it in the future, or the god simply wants to find a group of cannon fodder. Of course, it is impossible to find some particularly kind people, even if it is better to find an otaku. At least we still know how to build a strong character and become stronger faster? You can beautify the second dimension infinitely, anyway, it was originally created by us. Wonderful place. But you can't also disappear the protagonist's IQ. From what I read, this book is just okay in terms of writing. There is no market for low-grade fever, the main character has no IQ, and all the sub-protagonists are ***. If you really can't help it and want to make fun of it, I'd better read something else.

At the beginning, everything was done for my sister and so on. I was so annoyed. It was like this every time. Watching without any intention at all. Not pretty at all.

What is written here? The protagonist is pure iron, but the captain can kill anyone in seconds. You have been transformed for three minutes without making any achievements. It makes me laugh.

Suddenly I found out that my results were terrible. I had already written 1 million words and only had more than 200 recommendation votes. I was afraid that the author would suddenly become a eunuch one day.