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I broke free before I could read a hundred chapters, and the flow of reading felt like water. Rhythm, focus This novel is too "smooth", everything is so "smooth" Finally, I would like to ask, do the games played by the protagonist have anything in common with the released games?

[Book Review] The writing is solid and the ideas are great. [Advantages] The writing is excellent, the plot is novel, and the setting is complete. [Disadvantages] The main plot line is not prominent enough, and the details of the setting are not expressed naturally enough, making it appear complicated. [Evaluation] B [Remarks] I hope it will be helpful to the author. If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you like it, please add more.

. . . . There are too many conjectures and personal work mixed in. . This is truly a book that can't be read with your brain in mind. . If it doesn't make sense, just jump over. . The rhythm of things is one thing and many things. . Does the author have an outline? Weird. . I quite like the background and setting. Too bad it's too messy. If you have a lot of spare time, you can still read it. . I have only seen Chapter 16 of The Dark Iron Age. . Nothing yet? How come I can already make 5 games separately? . . The lines you opened are many and messy. . How about taking your time? Why did you speed up the progress again?

From a purely passerby's perspective, the title of the book is incomprehensible, the introduction is incomprehensible, and the conclusion: too unattractive.

In any case, being able to write this book to a million words is considered a strong person (๑>؂<๑) Learn from you!

To be honest, I insisted on reading Chapter 20, but I still couldn't understand what it was about... Could you tell the author, please? It feels like reading a philosophy book...

If your grades are not good, just write one. Anyway, you have already written a million-word book.

Haha, congratulations on signing the contract, front row seat! (The coins you invested are still used)

I would like this setting, but I can't understand it! What is this novel about? Forgive me.

Hahaha

Lin Yidong (female) (modern wear)

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It's over one million words. This perseverance is admirable.

My answer to you: The story of a puppet who thinks he has free will and searches for it.

I'm not saying that, I've stayed with this guy's book anyway, but it's absolutely impossible to read it. I've read it before and was confused, hahaha

Is it my problem? I can't understand it (#-.-)