I Have Supernatural Powers and Practice Martial Arts

The name Zhao Yanling is really talented. How old is the author?

The author's language organization skills are so poor! The protagonist is completely described as having an inferior IQ!

It is not easy for the author to write a good book. After all, it is just the beginning. If there are areas that I feel can be improved and considered carefully, please give me your comments here. I have read more than ten chapters before, and the main character described is relatively behind in the development of magical powers, which is reflected in the learning of swords. He can obviously use magical powers to quickly learn and master basic sword techniques, but he slowly learns from the video and only learns one stab. The same goes for the bow, which was used later, but the element of forced pretentiousness was too obvious. Also, since the supernatural power can see some things that others cannot see, and after obtaining the Emerald Sutra, I did not describe it anymore. After all, this function may make the protagonist rich overnight without having to borrow money. Chapter 123, the description of women is not pleasing, and Chapter 13 disgusts me even more. The heart is good, but the inner activities described are the success or failure of the writing. In fact, if the writing is not good, there is no need to force it. It is enough to write what is said and describe the body movements and facial expressions. There is also hunting out of the city. The plan is not clear. Hunting one prey is enough. After all, the danger in the wild is too great, and it is inconvenient to carry it. It can be sold again. At this time, the woman reveals that she has storage items, which can better reflect the personality of each character. In general, the main focus is magical powers. If the magical powers are not well developed and used unreasonably, it will affect the reading experience and reduce people's expectations for the subsequent storyline, plus other shortcomings, haha. One more thing, the protagonist's strength can be suppressed, but it must be reasonable, such as physical fitness, energy, mental strength, and training difficulty, etc. This is still relatively good, but with such a strong learning function of magical powers, a set of basic swordsmanship is not used, so the protagonist has not learned it completely, which is a bit unjustifiable.

Some inexplicable words make people feel uncomfortable

Isn't it a clairvoyance? How can it be transformed into mental space deduction 😥

It is recommended that the author change the introduction. When writing the introduction, it will give people the impression that it is another person who is ridiculing a halo. This kind of routine is very inappropriate to the times now.

One question is what is the function of the eyes in Tianyantong?

Forget it, I can't stand it anymore, it's too poisonous

Can't the protagonist be made more handsome? I really can't stand it if it's not handsome.

Chapter 5: Being released from the dark room, celebrating with flowers

I just want to say that starting in three years,,,,

I've read Chapter 20, but the author's paragraphs have too many words and I'm not used to it. The author can refer to the novels on the list to see the length of other people's paragraphs. Thank you!

This thing is of no use, no wonder no one looks at it. You can learn everything quickly with a dick, you have to lick women to make progress

I just skipped through a chapter or two. The golden finger setting is to my liking. The author is only level 1, so he must be an experienced author.

Is the protagonist's main means of attack a bow and arrow? I found several books that were either too big for Goldfinger or sold as dog meat with a sheep's head, so the Demon Bow was okay.

It's so hung up that I can't stand it anymore. Wow.

It is recommended that the author's paragraphs be shorter. It is too long and no one will read it. You will know the novice author at a glance.

He is so good at cheating that even a dog can be awesome