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Number of chapters on the drug test: twenty Evaluation of the work: A suspenseful work lacking in atmosphere Text: This is a time-travel novel with the correct basic structure and opening, making it highly attractive to readers. The protagonist survives in the time travel of Nasha Film and Television and obtains various rewards. The best thing is that after completing the first time-travel copy and returning to reality, the tension still has not completely subsided. Many time-travel authors' realistic writing is quite bad, like boiled water. The female nurse episode is a minor irritant for me, but it's not too big of a problem, and I personally feel like it's a foreshadowing. I look forward to the follow-up performance. As a time-travel novel, the most important aspect is the content of time-travel. This author's writing method belongs to the category of fast time travel, and he can complete the time travel in a small world in a dozen chapters. There is a sense of tension, but I found that the author's entry speed was too slow. Entering a new world often takes three or four chapters. Three or four chapters are okay, but these three or four chapters are out of touch with horror. In other words, the structure of the world view and scenes is not in place. The following takes the first dungeon of Curse Paradise as an example: This is the first entry dungeon, but I feel that the entry is written better than the second bride. The gatekeeper maintained the tension at the beginning, but after entering the park and before the main plot began, the whole atmosphere collapsed. However, this copy was handled well, and the plot of A Piao will soon be picked up. But in the second copy of The Bride, I really can't feel anything about the first four chapters. Back to the Curse Paradise, there is a paragraph in the author's original text: The giant clown's smiling muscles are a bit scary... There are many things worth describing in this briefly mentioned scene. How big is this clown face? What does it look like? What color is it? Is there any dust? How is it different from an ordinary clown image? From this point outward, what is the scene around the clown face like? Are there any weeds shaking around? A dilapidated fence? Classic horror movie elements such as hanging wires? Author, you have a blueprint. You can watch the movie first, then pause a few key points you want to describe and describe them carefully. What? What if there is no scene? As an author, it would be very pitiful if you can't edit it yourself. Next is the plot of entering the house. What about the coldness of the house? What's the interior of the house? The weak light, the strange cold wind lingering on the neck, the unusual noise? The feeling came right away. The sudden sound of the kicked incense burner in the silence is also a good description point.     ， Next are my thoughts: With a God-like system of fast travel, what I am most worried about is the collapse of the power system. Especially for this author, if he has a map in more than ten chapters, what level of movie should he make in the later or even mid-term? When I saw the reward for Yin Yang Eyes, I knew something was wrong. It is true that the later stages of Supernatural are filled with battles between gods and gods, but I am afraid that the author's pace will not be able to control it until it reaches 4 to 50,000 words. There is a mystery between me and me. Although it was originally planned to be a battle between gods and gods in the later stage, I felt quite uncomfortable when I actually wrote it. Already on the bookshelf, there may be further reviews

A little thought. After the protagonist (with his parents (emphasis)) gets into a car accident, there is no obvious mood change in the second story. Also flirting with girls. Is this what a newly orphaned person did?

The later chapters where they are at home are really scary, and there are some unexpected feelings, the kind that can provoke Commissioner Zhang.

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I have finished watching the second story. The plot is well controlled. Now that Xiaobai appears, it is so interesting. The dialogue feels like Hu Bayi and Fatty Wang!

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