My Imagination Leads to Other Worlds

You can still be so stupid even after wearing it. I feel like my life of more than 20 years before wearing it was in vain. I have no social experience at all. I am just stupid.

What a big loophole! Is the country independent? I was drunk when a warrior came to the school. Why is the main character so strict? This book is already half-completed. He doesn't know how to innovate and will only follow the public. I vomited when I saw it. I came here by endorsement and revealed that he is a bit ruthless.

Can we change the beginning? Will the wastes have to fight for another ten years or a hundred years?

Originally, it was a good book. The first 26 chapters can be compared with excellent articles, but chapter 27 is a failure. The biggest failure of this book is chapter 27, which kills so many classmates at once! This is a huge failure! First of all, the world where the protagonist kills is the main world of the novel. Secondly, this book should not be a mafia style, and then it should not be a demon style. The first 26 chapters of the protagonist portray a rational, patriotic, filial, cherished, slightly higher IQ character, but that knife instantly restored everything in the first 26 chapters! Secondly, if the first cut is a natural reaction, a conditioned reflex, then it is understandable, but if there is no consideration behind it, then this is the biggest failure. The protagonist of the current novel cannot be written like this. How dare you write like this, awesome, awesome, That cut destroyed the protagonist, and also ruined the book.

This book mainly describes the psychology of the characters, which is very illogical, so the performance is very poisonous. It is recommended that the character image should be determined first, and then imitate how the master writes in detail and appropriately. Your sudden emotional outburst without foreshadowing or development will be embarrassing for a normal person.

The protagonist is well written, and the author has successfully created a twisted world view. The bad guy enjoys everything before death and is guilty only after death. The protagonist is a good citizen who abides by the law and lives like a dog.

Damn, this is a great book, no tricks. I thought the protagonist was going to enter college again, a cliche plot, but I never expected that the author could do it! I suggest changing the introduction to another one, as it is not worthy of the content of this book. I speculate that the protagonist will bring over the cultivation systems of those two worlds in the later stage. . . One operation

The subject matter of this book is good, but the character of the protagonist is artificial and a bit fake.

Although the writing is okay, the protagonist is definitely a fool and looks irritating.

The protagonist is a useless template. This was written by a novice many years ago. It's poisonous. Just make it a human being. That'll be fine. I really don't understand why you have to create a piece of trash! Have you ever written something where others laughed at the protagonist, and then pretended to be cool and slapped you in the face? Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Will young people be poor? It makes me laugh so hard

I just don't understand. Does the person who writes this kind of article never watch military exercises? After watching it a few more times, you won't belittle hot weapons and exalt so-called warriors.

Forget it's cliche. The plot often has pitfalls. The content is too loose and contradictory.

Congratulations to the trolls, you have finished trolling another book, 666

The writing is pretty good! Don't care what others say, just write according to your own ideas. Come on＾0＾~

When I first saw this, I wanted to complain. How can a person with low strength guide a strong person? On a path that has long been taken, in martial arts practice, you have to ask researchers for advice, instead of asking people who are stronger than you. If you want to ask for advice on improving your physical fitness, that's fine. You also want to ask for advice on sword skills, footwork, etc. What other martial arts practitioners have practiced? Do you really think everyone is Wang Yuyan? If nothing else, is it reasonable to see Wang Yuyan in martial arts novels? First tell me what others are using, then analyze the pros and cons, and then give guidance on where to hit it. Others have cut it a few times and you haven't finished talking yet. And isn't fighting just about two people attacking each other? If you hit me, I'll block it. Or you might want to chop off my leg, but according to the cheat's move sequence, my next move should protect my head, so I don't care about the knife you use to chop my leg, or should I continue to protect my head according to the cheat? This is a real-life version of military boxing. After a set of military boxing, you were chopped dozens of times?

I took a look at the introduction and added it to my collection. I'm looking at 60 pictures.

Well! There's nothing wrong with your plot. If I change my account and post a new novel, I'll send you a message.

Come on! ! The next book will definitely work! ! ! 👍👍👍

Too few fans have been devoured, author, please don't be affected.

Everything else is okay, but the updates are not strong enough. I hope there will be more updates without eunuchs.

Everyone has their own opinions, I think it's pretty good-looking, keep up the good work

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I didn't want to read the book after reading Chapter 31…………

To be honest, if the author can polish it a bit, this book still has some potential.

? ? ? Will someone else write the third world? Why does it look so awkward?