Starting from Ordinary People to Create Extraordinary Things

Your world is a bit short. If you want to write a world in such a short time, it feels meaningless. You just go to get some skills and treasures and come back without any idea of changing the plot. What's the point of writing a fan novel that follows the script? Any successful fan novel will It will significantly change the plot. It would be good to follow the example of infinite horror. If your mortal world is written in the first volume of the plot, then you can plot to seize the Sky Vase and walk your own path to immortality, instead of relying on charity from the protagonist and living in the sect with the help of the Heavenly Spiritual Root. This would be more exciting.

We all understand how the author wants to write Hey, but the author is a newbie and his writing skills are not very good, so it collapsed. The author probably wants to create a mysterious organization in reality. I really don't agree with the author's writing style, but it is better than me. In the first few chapters, I knew that this book deserved it. From the time I traveled through the first world, I didn't know what he was talking about. Maybe it's because of my poor understanding. But as a new author, come on!

Please give me some recommendations from book friends. What can I use to replace the Holy Light? The light in Ultraman, the power of the Phoenix in Marvel, the light of life in the white lamp in DC, the god of light in western fantasy novels... Please crowdfund

I don't know which Holy See the Holy Light was transmitted to in the author's introduction. If it was from the West, it would be extremely poisonous. In fact, where is the need for so many different organizations as in the introduction? That would be of absolutely no benefit except for the inevitable wars that will occur between organizations in the future. It is suggested that the protagonist establishes a mysterious organization. Different power systems can be established as different systems of inheritance under the Tiangong. In this way, you can even match them into a combat team with complementary professions like the Lord God Space Reincarnation.

I just saw a bug. When the protagonist returns to the main plane, where is the ancient demon? Why is it separated from the protagonist? The article does not mention it.

Originally, I planned to write about the aborigines who rebuilt the secret organization, led the world to resist the invasion, and moved towards the extraordinary behind-the-scenes boss flow The Goldfinger I joined was a travel between the heavens, but I didn't want to write about the heavens and the people, and there were too many mortal plots at first. The following Zhutian will be shortened as much as possible In fact, the balance between the two is not very easy to control. I can only refer to the Zhutian Pudu. If they are all about reading the same book, I will consider opening a pure Zhutianliu Let's talk about the suicide of the protagonist. It's like if you study abroad for seven or eight years, and you can't learn anything new without the opportunity. Don't you want to go home at this time? The function of returning to the city is to give the protagonist a way to get good things in front of the big guys in the world, so that he will not be snatched back Newcomer, new book, please forgive me for improper writing and plot control, I will study hard, thank you for your comments, and please leave comments Also, please recommend and invest in Sanlian

I think the alien world written by the author is pretty good The reality is written like a piece of shit

I would like to give you some advice, don't write too much about otherworlds.

Recommended collection... To put it simply, I originally wanted to combine the aboriginal secrets to write a story about the boss behind the secret organization. Unfortunately, the sacrifice ceremony could not be written, and the in-house project failed In a fit of anger, I published the book with nine random chapters. Came out, and then came the website shortcut, so this book has no outline, so the pace is too slow after ten chapters I'll just have to draw up the outline, explore the routines, and control the pace (Although I know they are all based on the QAQ of mortal fans)

A child who has not yet been weaned! ! ! Pig's feet are still children! !

Is the author a powerful eunuch? Don't worry, you might be surprised if you persist.

It's a real hammer🔨The author is a eunuch! ! ! ! ! ! !

There is a question, why does every novel have a madman who is devoted to cultivation? Feeling so poisonous

How should I put it? As far as astronomy is concerned, the writing is pretty good, but the title of your book is Creation Stream. In terms of writing, it is not on topic, and it is a taboo in writing. I hope the author will be more cautious in this aspect when writing books in the future.

The creation of a real organization has a very ferocious style among the natives of this world. I hope the author will not just imitate it, but write his own ideas, otherwise it will be meaningless.

I haven't updated in a day. I hope it's not a eunuch.

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Can we change the status of the book to completed if we want to accept the eunuch?

I said stop being a eunuch, the writing is quite good.

There has been no update for a few days, and the author has no explanation. Is he planning to enter the palace?

... Is it cool? Why haven't you updated it yet?

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I was quite optimistic about this novel. The result is 43 chapters. The last part is so disgusting to watch. It feels like the author is forcing a ** on the readers. So uncomfortable.