I'm a Phd Student in Rhode Island

First! I think it's great, the logic is fluent, the language is fluent, and the characters' personalities are not broken. (๑`･ᴗ･´๑) If I really want to make some suggestions, is it true that the protagonist's name changed once? Moreover, the perspective often changes in each chapter, making the whole text look a little confusing, not very coherent, and the sense of substitution is much weaker. The last suggestion is whether "Kelsey" can be changed into "Kelsey". I feel quite unhappy every time I look at it (ー ー゛) Come on, author! Take good care of you~

Some of the expansions are very interesting and well written. I support them.

The writing is quite good, and the rhythm is very good for me. It is no worse than those so-called great masters. It would be better if it could be deeper. But it is a pity that the author chose this niche subject. If he had chosen a more pleasing subject, he might have entered Sanjiang.

Let me help you detoxify. After reading the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was very unpleasant. Reading this novel could not relax me. Of course, the protagonists are like this at the beginning of many novels. Although this novel is a bit too much, the protagonist will always grow, but after reading it, I found that it does not seem to... …The author of more than 200 pictures has been using the excuse of being true and relevant to reality, but I think most people read fanfics to see another development to make up for the regrets of the original plot. If I really want to see something that is realistic, I shouldn't read fanfics that are just two-dimensional games. The performance of the protagonist in this book is not even as good as in the original version. He just follows the plot, keeps saying that he wants to be saved and changed but cannot see his actions. He knows that the plot has pitfalls but still jumps in. Finally, he goes through the plot again and is unable to get angry. Then he is questioned and used as a tool. So this is a book about abuse of the protagonist?

Broken Bones died under Chen's knife. Amiya was the assist. When hesitating, Old Chen snatched the head away ()

As expected of me, the cover is so handsome.

Another name for this novel is "Happy Toolman Life"

What's all this? It's so confusing.

Anyone, is this book a pigeon?

Newcomer question: Who is the heroine?

I have already watched Dragon Gate 24. Why do I feel more and more frustrated the more I watch it? When will the Doctor be able to rise to prominence? I am not here to watch the fan fiction to read the plot again, and why do the Doctors you write about feel more uncomfortable than when I played the game? I want to watch the pretense, and want to see how the Doctor who knows the plot in advance can recover from regrets and plan for the future. Now I only see a tool man who is questioned everywhere. He talks about saving, but I have never seen this doctor think seriously. He keeps following the plot and repeating the tragedy of the game. I don't want to see Shuangxing die again, but looking at the protagonist you wrote, I no longer have the confidence to continue reading. He can't bring people confidence at all, and he is incompetent and furious every time. If the plot behind it is really interesting, then just think that I said some nonsense.

Isn't that system called prts? It's all PTSD

Rhode Island's internal intelligent AI is called PRTS, not PTSD. PTSD stands for post-traumatic stress disorder.

That's okay, but Shi Huaiya's surname is not Shi, Shi Huaiya's surname is. Don't think that all Longmen people's surname is the first character of their surname. Well, Xing Xiong's surname is not even Xing.

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Real Doctor, Crisis Contract 27, Fake Doctor, High-Quality Copying Job Crisis Contract 18

Halfway through reading, I suddenly remembered something yj wrote in Chapter 6 that Faust was already infected before joining the integration movement The author wrote that Faust was infected in Qicheng. The author was stabbed in the back😰

The author has given up

Hold on, author, I'm not asking for explosive updates, but I'm begging you not to end it badly, come on!

Oh, come on, author 😁

Is it possible that there is copywriting planning hidden among the readers? Maybe the author's imagination will become the basis for the next activity? Hehe (ºº ) Author come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I quite like the writing style. . . . The book is gone

I found it from station B. Did I find it in the wrong place?