Dream Mountain Guest

After reading the little chapter, tell me your feelings. Xiao Lemu's writing has improved, but the plot is still relatively immature. The setting of Sweet and Salty War is very interesting. I thought it would be a grand development, but I didn't expect that it would still describe some details of vegetation. Not very eye-catching. Looking through the whole article, it can be seen that Xiao Lemu's writing has improved recently, especially the description of Xiao Bu Dian and Si Bai next to the campfire after arriving in Xian Village. The little one is in the shadow, and the four whites are in the firelight. The contrast is very sharp, and it feels like a movie shot. Obviously they are two hostile forces, but they get along very well. Although the people in Xian Village are demons, they are very kind to the little ones who are new to the village. The people in Tiancun have little ones' blood relatives, but they treat the little ones worse than domesticated pigs. This kind of irony impressed me deeply, and I sincerely praised: Xiao Lemu has made great progress!

Reposting this post, this is my first time reading Shamu's novel. This novel gave me a bright feeling. After all, the word "dream" is very illusory, and the subject of "dream" is more novel. The author's writing style still has room for development, and the plot description is okay, but the character description and conversation are still a little immature. Overall, this novel has the opportunity to become a dark horse, and it is a rare good book. And the author promises not to be a prisoner (with tears in my eyes).

After reading the Winter Peach chapter, I am here to write a book review again. This is a short dream. There are only a few scenes in the dream. The dormitory, the classroom, the bus, and the braised meat shop are gone. The content of the dream is also very simple. Li Haiyan plans to celebrate Xi Tu's birthday, but it has not been completed yet. My favorite scene in the whole story is where Xue Yu cleans up the peach blossom demon. Xueyu is so awesome, so powerful, and so awesome. Xiao Lemu is not good at describing grand scenes, but this fight was beyond my expectation. It was actually very good. The difference in volume was used to show Xue Yu's strength. His writing skills have improved! Come on Xiaolemu! Looking forward to better dreams. Say silently, I found two hints in it, has Xiao Lemu become so naughty?

It feels good to write, even though I don't read much novels. But it feels very clear. The entire structure should be the author's inner feelings and memories of past experiences and the yearning for positive energy in the future. Quite like it. I hope the author will update more frequently. The writing becomes more and more perfect, and the life becomes more and more happy. Friends who have just watched it, take a closer look. Very immersive. Absolutely a dark horse. Loyal little fans stay. 🤭

By the way, Shamu's voice is very nice! 😁😁😁😁

Hey, Shamu has opened a new book. After reading a little bit, I can say that the writing style has improved a lot compared to The King of Tricks and The Pet Witch, and it deserves encouragement. There are still a lot of shortcomings, such as the characterization is not good enough, the daily plot is too watery, and the typos and grammatical errors are not corrected, tsk tsk tsk. In short, I still encourage Shamu to keep working hard and don't interrupt the update or let it be unfinished.