Self-Disciplined Hero

Storytelling Bar The protagonist's ideology is an adult, and he is not naive about people, things, or even emotions. The details of the characters in the uploaded chapters are not broken The writing method of career type is clear and concise. Unless the plot requires it, the writing is more detailed, and the performance is quite good. It can distinguish the key points between heroic writing and business writing The characterization is a bit weak, not three-dimensional enough, not energetic enough. Tone, small actions, attitude towards different people. A short description may have a completely different effect Excellent supporting characters can better highlight the protagonist. Passers-by are just like Weibo usernames. They don't even have official names and genders to be fans of passers-by Nowadays, the characters in Shenhao's novels often don't live like Shenhao. The only one I have read so far is Wei Kun whose life attitude is more consistent. It's a pity that he has been blocked Who has a book to introduce it? Chat

It's a very good and interesting novel. It gives me the feeling of growth and stability after experiencing it 👍

Already followed, please update, it's too young

The opening chapter feels amazing, and the various behaviors of the protagonist after his rebirth are very realistic. I think if someone is really reborn in reality, it would be correct to handle it like the protagonist. But when I wrote about the appearance of many female characters later on, I felt that the whole book began to collapse in an unpredictable direction. Those female characters who may have a relationship with the male protagonist, such as the girl named Bai who got the male protagonist from his friend and said she wanted to post ugly photos on Weibo, the female coach who secretly said that the male protagonist may be gay, and the female employee recruited by the protagonist, all gave me a strange, awkward and disliked feeling. These female characters are not likeable, but the author still gives them a lot of scenes, and they look like they are about to become the male protagonist's harem. In the modern harem, every woman in the harem truly loves the male protagonist. I have always found it unreasonable, because no woman who truly loves a man would be willing to share his man's possessions with other women in a monogamous relationship. Those who are willing to share must have other reasons, such as money. So when a modern male protagonist opens a harem, either the male protagonist has the ability to make all the women think that they are the one and only for the male protagonist and do not know the existence of other women, or these women value the male protagonist's property and are reluctant to give up and leave, and have other plans. I love you so much that I am willing to share you with other women. If any man is willing to believe such nonsense, then just wait for cuckoldry and bankruptcy!

In the beginning, there was still a matter of self-discipline, but later on it was basically like a running account. Although there are less anchors from other Shenhao series, they are obsessed with,,,, beauties and spend money randomly. But this book seems to me to have nothing to write about, and the author may have forgotten to borrow money from relatives and friends (I saw the party part but didn't read the rest, and I don't know if there is any more later). Maybe I paid it back later, but it still took some time after I got the money, which will indeed make some readers feel uncomfortable. And the title of the book is very attractive. I also hope that the plot will be more colorful and less trivial, so that it really fits the title of the book. Come on! Personal opinions, feel free to comment.

I don't know if I have read too many other novels. Now when I read the updated chapters, I feel so unfamiliar. I don't know what I am writing. Alas, the updates are too slow and I no longer feel it. I deleted it. Goodbye, never see you again.

If you work hard and exercise more every day, you will have more than 10,000 yuan, but it is just a waste of five days, and you have to borrow money and spend favors everywhere.

The new book has been suspended. Is it a eunuch?

I'm a eunuch, I won't update for a week.

The chapters about surfing have no meaning other than pretending to be sexy. Also, maybe it's because I'm *Sis. Who would accompany their parents on a trip and bring a stranger with them?

I think you will be a eunuch! ! ! The update is unstable every day...

It's boring. If you want to travel with your family, you have to take a girl with you. You just take her with you. If you don't write about how to have fun with your family, you will always stare at the girl and talk about it. Why don't you have a good trip with your family? You can't make it without a girl?

One chapter a day, please recommend,,, keep it, and when I die, let my grandson burn a mobile phone for me, and I will read it underground 😆

I just want to know what kind of business the pig's trotters are doing. I can make a net income of 30,000 yuan in just a few days. I also want to do such a business

Copy and paste and check it out! Tasks, data, etc. Are all a mess!     ，！ 😎

Now the company is starting to make money. I borrowed 20,000 from my roommate. Later, I said that when I invest in the shares, I need to figure out how much money I will invest one after another. Don't make confusing accounts. It's best to be a sole proprietor first.

Author, please post the new group!

It's very well written. Why don't you write it well? You don't update it regularly...