This Kid's Got Terrible Luck

To be honest, this novel can be said to be one of the most rubbish novels I have ever read. First, the main plot of the book is unknown. Second, what is in the diary? Let us guess? Want to avenge that Lily? I don't see the protagonist wanting revenge at all** Furthermore, the readers don't even know what happened. You want revenge on your mother? Third, I couldn't scold that Li Xue all day long. The protagonist wanted to take revenge. This woman kept blocking her and sealed the protagonist's memory. As a result, the protagonist was like a dog licking her head. I don't want to say anything more Fourth. That cuteness. I saw the protagonist killing her or committing suicide. I felt that it was a really good book. But in the end, I couldn't bear to say anything and I didn't dare to commit suicide. Haha, be practical. No one is like this. Wouldn't everyone commit suicide? As a result, the protagonist later threatened Mengmeng with suicide and said something. As a result, Li Xue lied to Mengmeng and said that the protagonist was dead. She actually said, "Well done, let's go have a barbecue to celebrate." I tm awesome p

It's Meng Xin's first creation, and there must be something that is not satisfactory. If there is something that the audience complains about, you can leave a message below. Knowing your mistakes can greatly improve it! 🌹🌹🌹🌹

Stay calm! Come on! I!🤐😁😁😁

Because I saw the author's posts in the new book investment circle, I hope that hard work will pay off, and the books of hard-working authors can also have better results, so I came here to read it and share my personal views. I hope you won't mind it too much. If it is a literary-oriented novel, I think there may be no problem with the author's writing. But if it is an online novel that is more relaxed and entertaining, I think most audiences would prefer to see the protagonist do things that are difficult to do in daily life, so as to get a sense of satisfaction. The protagonist can be unlucky, but as an ordinary person, I may prefer to see his extraordinary side while being unlucky. Whether it is using external objects such as the system, it is better to use one's own super strength to break the shackles of unlucky and make a comeback. There is a book called "Why is it the Circle of Divine Punishment Again" that has this routine. From the author's reply, I estimate that the protagonist will grow up and make a comeback in the later period, but the pace may be a bit slow. After all, it's only the first 8 chapters, and all we see is a seed falling in the middle of the road. The so-called germination and tenacious growth are now 10,000 words long, but we still haven't seen it, or it's not focused on it? I can accept that the first 8 chapters have been unsatisfactory, but in these 8 chapters, I hope to see the protagonist's own stubbornness. No matter how unsatisfactory it is, I will work hard to be stubborn, instead of affecting the people around me all the way because of my own misfortune. In addition, as for humor, my understanding is that it is a kind of Ah Q's optimist spirit. I am not afraid of bad luck. As long as I find the right angle, no matter how bad the situation is, I can perfectly resolve it through humorous language and gestures, strong thinking and handling. Another point that I don't quite accept is that "people who are good to you will be unlucky, and so will you who are good to them." When I read novels, I like to read "good people will be rewarded with good things, and bad people will be rewarded with bad things." Because this is very difficult to achieve perfectly in daily life. And people who are kind to you will be unlucky in the same way. Doesn't this feel a bit like repaying kindness with hatred? Of course, I admit these two sentences but there is some room for maneuver. You can deliberately play tricks on bad people to make the bad people treat you well, or for them to treat the bad people well, so as to achieve the purpose of punishment and gain a sense of justice. But what about those who are truly good to the protagonist? Finally, the above comments are only for chapters 1 to 8 of this article. The author's unlucky setting is still very good, and the writing style is also OK. However, as an online novel, from a personal point of view, I feel that the rhythm and refreshing treatment are not well grasped. I hope that I can see the protagonist's growth soon and that the author's efforts will be rewarded. Come on!

It means I have finished reading, and I will give you a reward of two hundred

After reading Chapter 30, I still don't understand what the author wants to write. . .

Collected, looking forward to visiting again.

Urban writing is very challenging, either mediocre or explosive. I wish you success like a volcano. Collect.

Now that I'm reading Chapter 19, I want to ask what exactly is written in Lily's diary?

You have been unlucky in front of you for too long. If you want to grow up, you should suppress it first, and there is no saying that you have always suppressed it. Looking at your protagonist, I really feel sorry for him.