I Am Not Song Qinzong

The author's writing style is very good, and the language is ancient, but the plot is too childish. I can't stand it when I see the previous court asking for an inspection of the imperial army. How can I deal with so many big guys at the same time, and there is a prince who talks about ascending the throne at any time. Although Huizong is useless, he is a master at playing with power, and it is impossible for the prince to become as big as that. The plot is too unreasonable.

Dear author, you seem to have misunderstood! Who is Gao Qiu? Gao Qiu was just a scoundrel. In today's terms, he was a local scoundrel. A local scoundrel could actually become a lieutenant. What did he rely on? He relied on Emperor Huizong Zhao Ji. All his rights came from Zhao Ji. In other words, he was a dog used by Zhao Ji to monitor the court. Zhao Heng was the prince and the only son of Zhao Ji. Even if he killed Gao Yanei, let alone Gao Yanei, Emperor Huizong would not say no. This is like the difference between a pet and a son at home. The protagonist regards Gao Qiu as his enemy, which really brings him down.

I don't even know what the author was thinking. Because of the issue of the imperial guards, all the ministers were offended in front of the emperor. Number 4 also wants to negotiate terms with others. I don't know how to negotiate with others when your mother's life is in their hands. So what if the deal is settled? I was beaten back again and again. Until now, he actually still has illusions about the imperial doctor and the emperor. I don't even know what he thinks. So what if your subordinate officials in the East Palace give you a rank and raise your salary? So what if the Ministry of Household Affairs just finds any reason not to pay you your salary/Who is the person who went to find him? Either he is a rebel in Water Margin, or he is a talker from Qingliu. Anyway, you haven't found a single person with meritorious deeds in history. The position of the prince is so low, written by you. Also bala bala. It is not good for the stomach.

Overall it's okay, but the characters are too random, maybe it's the author's preference! Let's move the historical figures forward! According to the author's writing, when the protagonist traveled through time, Zhao Huan was in the eighth year of Zhenghe (1118), and the protagonist was eighteen years old! Moreover, it was also written that the protagonist sent people to find Lu Zhishen in Liangshang, so Water Margin came to gather justice in the three mountains! Song Jiang and Fang La both revolted in 1119! Yue Fei was 15 years old (1103-1142), Liang Hongyu was 16 years old, Yang Zaixing appeared in 1132, and was Cao Cheng's general, and Cao Cheng was born in 1113, so the protagonist was 18 when he was only five years old, and he could lead the bandits to capture Yang Zaixing! The biggest fear when writing historical novels is that the wrong people appear at the wrong time! And Zhou Tong died in 1119! According to the novel, it may be that in 1125, when Zhou Tong adopted Yue Fei as his adopted son, Yue Fei was seven years old, and after Zhou Tong retired and returned to his hometown, he befriended Yue Fei for six years (12-18 years old)! Yue Fei joined the army at the age of 18! I also made mistakes in some aspects, but this is what can be found on the Internet. The author is great. If you write a historical novel, you need to check the characters at that stage. If you write a Water Margin fan novel, you may not need to be so rigorous, but writing a historical novel requires rigor and careful consideration. I am not looking for fault with you, the author, just my opinion! Because historical novels are difficult to write

The strategy for revitalizing the Northern Song Dynasty was also written by Zhao Huan. It's quite interesting.

The capital should be moved. . . What do you think?

Zhao Kai's setting feels a bit broken. After all, he is the top scorer in the exam, and now he is number one in the country. Why is his emotional intelligence so low? Moreover, the protagonist's aura is a bit heavy, and only a few people dare to challenge him in court? Wen Chao Gong did quite well. Fortunately, it was the Song Dynasty, otherwise he would have been killed long ago. And what do you say about traitorous ministers? There are no permanent enemies and no permanent friends, only permanent interests. As long as the means are appropriate, at least they can make them dog-eat-dog. A full-scale declaration of war would not only offend them, but might also offend the family. How can you be the emperor without the support of a noble family? Look at Chongzhen without Wei Zhongxian. If this happens, the dynasty may perish faster.

Shi Naian wrote Water Margin, which was originally a scolding article. Water Margin was originally meant to be a place where garbage in the water collects. It was originally written that evil spirits came out from hell to bring about cholera in the world, (referring to Sang) Song Jiang was a general of the Song Dynasty (cursing Huai), and Zhu Yuanzhang was a thief of the Yuan Dynasty. The original version is not allowed to be published at all. After being revised by most of the scribes, it became what it is now (a demon in human skin). Otherwise, why don't you read Water Margin! Even if you change your face, you still haven't changed your heart. So most people read it a bit distorted.

At first glance, I can see that my historical skills are extremely poor and I am advised to quit.

The fourth chapter is to gain military power, the fifth chapter is to make a fortune, the sixth chapter is to change the numbers to Arabic, the seventh chapter is to establish authority, and the eighth chapter is to toughen the powerful ministers. No one has this speed. His father still has seven years of Zen status.

The Tao is Tao, very Tao. Does the author want to practice Taoism?

The author's writing skills are good, but the story concept lacks logic. In addition, Water Margin is a novel, which is very different from history. It is better for the author to base it on historical facts.

The modern military rank system is really easy to persuade someone to quit.

The author forcibly added drama, and he was not prepared for anything outside.

Is it writing history or a fan of Water Margin?

Invested, author, don't give up 🤓

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The main line of the article is unclear, each chapter is less than 2,000, and half of it is used to describe official positions and characters. It is really scary!

I have written a lot about characters, but I am not good at history. I am tired of looking up information.

The biggest failure was the introduction of "Water Margin"

Learn about Song Huizong's ten draws and one kill in Jiangnan

Doesn't this make the prince look too cowardly? From ancient times to the present, no minister dares to confront the prince who knows he will become the emperor. How dare a doctor disrespect the prince so much? He doesn't even do superficial work. Oh my God, this guy must be a eunuch and a prince.