Nightfall Quota

After reading two chapters, let's talk about it. The protagonist's credit card in Huabei was all maxed out. There was a quarrel at the company. The landlord changed the locks and threw away the luggage. On the way, he met a grandfather who was seriously injured and was about to die. He sent the system to the system. He activated it at night and saved a child's life. The protagonist fell into a well. The protagonist's medical expenses were also paid and a red envelope was given to the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist went out and wanted to rest. Instead of going to the hotel, he lay in the park for several hours. When he woke up, his mobile phone and wallet were gone. He was poisoned in Chapter 3 of Gold.

It's so miserable. No one has read this book. Is it a problem with the protagonist's character or something else? When writing about supernatural beings, don't be too sentimental about the protagonist's character. No one likes this kind of character, and you don't want a virgin. Just write about the selfish one. Reality: Benefit yourself at the expense of others. Reality is like this. If it's beneficial, you can choose to get together, if it's not beneficial, choose to be separated. How can there be so much sentimentality and emotional lines? Except for relatives, friends, brothers and sisters, no one will help you if something happens to you. This is reality, not chicken soup.

The writer's assistant is here... It's so miserable, brother. I'm really in awe that you can write 1.5 Million like this...

When I saw the published chapter, I couldn't understand what the qualifications meant. It was too advanced.

Damn it, what's the reason for the author to persevere?

No wonder no one is watching. He has god-like abilities and still finds a job. This is amazing, the author.

I found your book in Writer's Assistant, and then clicked in to read it. As a desperate author, I admire your perseverance very much. Well, I will give you a recommendation vote to comfort you.

A bad start, indicating that I didn't understand

The story is not clear, and some of the plot lies in the author's mind. But the words he wrote could not express it.

There is a problem with the protagonist's character in this book. The plot unfolds like a fairy. Only someone can figure it out after reading it ~ The character is completely unlikable and there is basically no logic. There are problems with his character and outlook.