Bailian Hongchenke

Come on, don't be discouraged, hard work will pay off, persistence is victory.

Unknowingly, it has already reached 100,000 words. Today I applied to sign the contract with an uneasy feeling. No matter what the result is, I would like to thank all the book friends for their support and collection.

Since it was a new work by a newcomer, many of the ideas were not yet mature, so I immediately made up my mind to rewrite and reconstruct the plot. Since the volumes cannot be modified, I will start directly with the second volume. Please forgive me if there are any flaws. All book friends are welcome to join the discussion.

Newcomers report, please take care of me, and set up a building to welcome discussion.

It's a very good book. I recommend it. Thank you very much!

I'm a little depressed. I really can't figure it out. They actually said that I was involved in pornography in Chapter 27. Is it really because my thoughts are too simple? Can't keep up with the rhythm.

All the soldiers of "Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" came to report: It is well written and has been collected✊

Looking forward to stable updates and supporting you.

Brother, have you seen Mr. Jiu?

Book friends who have read this book, please leave a comment, whether it is good or bad, it will make me die clearly. At this moment, I am in confusion.

After reading a few more chapters, I feel... How should I put it? The pace is too fast! Where are you going? What to do? Why go? Your protagonist gets the opportunity too quickly! My cultivation level has improved rapidly! I even wonder if I am missing hundreds of chapters! And the characters are not distinct, I don't even know what they look like and what their personalities are. Moreover, I was confused about the plot, and I only half understood the setting. Forget about the character design, the focus is on the descriptions I read, which seemed very cumbersome and made me a bit unreadable. Well, having said this, let's say something good. Your description is actually very good. You express some magnificent scenes vividly and carefully. If your plot rhythm is well developed, it will definitely be a highlight. But if you keep reading and reading, the plot jumps so fast that I thought it was all description. No matter how exciting it is, it will cause visual fatigue! By the way, say important things three times and have a clear personality! The character should be distinct! The character should be distinct!

Why is it over again?😰 Forget it, let's do a circle first, hum~

La la la! I'm taking this book with me too!

I've just read a few chapters, but I don't think there's anything interesting about them. It didn't catch my eye all of a sudden. I don't even know what kind of person the protagonist is now. You can actually set up contradictions just at the beginning to make it fascinating. It's the same as Xiao Yan's decision to break off the engagement. You should know the three golden chapters. Second, describe your protagonist first. What kind of person is he, ugly or handsome? What's the general temperament? Does he have a golden finger? What is golden finger? Wait... Of course it's okay to lay out the overall situation from the beginning, but it's just a bit tasteless. These can actually be said slowly in the process of the protagonist. This is my experience just watching, I hope it can give you some reference. I will continue to read your content later. I also hope you can take a look at my work and point out the shortcomings that others in my game cannot see. Thank you🙂

Emmm, he wrote down the key points as soon as he came up, the strongest technique... This way, there is no curiosity at all.