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After reading three chapters, I didn't understand what was written. The male protagonist is in his thirties. He was fired after being blamed for a construction site accident. His daughter's tuition and medical expenses are all borne by one person. He was also evicted by the landlord. It can be said that he is under great pressure and living a difficult life! Then in the second chapter, the blind date mode was inexplicably turned on, or was it an old joke teasing a gold digger? The strength persuades me to quit before I finish reading Chapter 3!
I've read five chapters, but it's not suitable for a low-cultured person like me. My ability to understand is too poor.
I don't understand, the culture is too low
To be honest, I didn't mention the writing style, let's just say that there is a problem with the early settings. They are already so poor. They should find someone to publish a book for their daughter. The author himself set the country to vigorously develop literature. The male protagonist does not work hard for his daughter. Don't say that he has forgotten. A father can do a lot for his daughter, and the characters The setting is that of a maniac who loves his daughter. In such an environment, the male protagonist cannot think of such a way out. The author himself has set those attributes for the male protagonist and will not forget them. This leads to a problem. It feels very awkward. If this is popular, it will be a ghost. The more you read this book, the more awkward it becomes. Do you think you can continue reading it?
I haven't even finished the first chapter. I've been confused and don't know what you want to write.
Relying on dialogue to develop the plot is basically a novel routine, but after reading three chapters of dialogue, I really can't understand it.
The lines are too complicated, so let's get rid of the line of making movies first, and focus on writing books.
There is too much dialogue and it's hard to understand
What did you write? I don't understand →_→ Commit suicide
I don't understand. I don't dare to admit it when I write a book. I don't dare admit it when I make a movie. Is it illegal? It's just a pretext for fame and I'm afraid of getting into trouble. It's an embarrassing thing to watch.
It's hard to understand... Maybe my literary quality is not high enough, but that's not how online articles should be written.
After reading a few chapters, I felt weird. The subjects are "daughter", "woman" and "man", and in some places the subject is unclear. Looking tired. Abandoned