My Wife Has Recovered from Her Illness

To be honest, it's really too long-winded! Some things don't need to be written in such detail, and too much description will be verbose. And you said it yourself, for you, 15 years is just one sleep; except that your parents are getting older and your children are getting older! You yourself and your husband haven't changed much, they just look a little more mature. As a result, she was squeezing her husband again, feeling that this was not good and that was not good! You look very unfamiliar with your man, as if he just got married! Don't you find it contradictory? To be honest, when I saw you writing this paragraph, I really thought it was too pretentious and disgusting!

Stop narrating, just like Naruto, start popularizing science or reminiscing at the critical moment

There are three chapters every day, most of them are memories. The plot can't be moved forward and it's not enjoyable to watch. Alas, it is a pity to discard it, and it is tasteless to eat. Let's see if it's still like this later. . .

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I found a few unreasonable things that I couldn't bear. The first one is her eldest son's marriage. Her eldest son's previous refusal to break off the engagement was probably because he was angry that the heroine was making fun of his marriage. She was the one who helped him make the decision, and she was the one who persuaded him to break off the engagement, so she didn't want to break off the engagement. But as the author writes, it turns out that her eldest son is interested in the marriage, and then he actually hunts for the marriage and proposes marriage. What is the point of this pretense of marriage that makes people interested? He can't just like the way the Shen family's mother-in-law gets scared when seeing people. I know that the author can write her well, and maybe after a while she will suddenly no longer be afraid of people, but I don't know if the person you write will be good or not. To put it bluntly, even if the Shen family is not sick, it is not easy for a girl from a small family to have the vision, style and magnanimity of a noble girl. This marriage is not suitable at all. Yes, the heroine feels that breaking off the engagement will ruin the girl's reputation, but has she ever thought that if you let a fish live on green land, the fish will die, if you let a bird live in the sea, the bird will die. With her temperament, marrying her will be harmful to her. Therefore, it is not logical for the marriage to take place within the same month. The second thing that is intolerable is that the male protagonist and the female protagonist were married for two years and had three children. Later, the female protagonist was absent for fifteen years. In my opinion, the only thing the male protagonist owes is a few children. He has nothing to do with the female protagonist. The heroine, although it is not her fault, she can be considered a victim, but she not only has to make up for the child, but she should also feel sorry for the hero who has arranged everything for her for so many years and has guarded her for so long. But what is she doing? She whipped the male protagonist three times when she came back. Well, it is understandable that the misunderstanding has not been resolved. However, after going to the incense, the misunderstanding was resolved. The male protagonist is also willing to change his habit of being silent and not liking to explain for the female protagonist. Isn't this a good reconciliation? You have been waiting for you for 15 years, and you have been worried and scared for 15 years. You are a mother of three children. She has never done anything. The more the male protagonist confesses, the more she becomes more and more aggressive. She has explained everything clearly and is not allowed to sleep in the house. What kind of trouble is going on? It's not a good habit to hide when you hear love words, and you're not a little girl like Tian Jie'er. What's more, those are not explicit love words. The person who said these is none other than her husband who has had so many skin-to-skin kisses with her, and he is the father of three children. Shouldn't he be moved or happy?

It's too pretentious. If the male protagonist is unfamiliar and uncomfortable, it feels about the same. After all, there is a distance of 15 years, but the female protagonist just woke up after giving birth to a child. It doesn't have to be like this at all. It makes it seem like she is the one who has passed 15 years. It's like the day before when the male protagonist brought a strange beauty back, he was jealous, angry and awkward. When he woke up the next day, although he felt unfamiliar and uncomfortable with the child, it must have just happened yesterday to the male protagonist. The chatter was endless and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Author, have you read the comments? All your books have this problem. There are problems with plot conception and writing skills, but which teacher taught you how to write? Don't always intersperse psychological activities, okay? For a simple matter of two chapters, you have to write more than ten chapters, which dilutes the main content to be expressed. It makes people irritated, and a child cannot distinguish the key points when writing a composition. If you correct this problem, you will become a great person. The IQ of reading a book in one sentence is not low, you are too wordy.

I think it is very inappropriate to beat your husband in front of so many guests, especially in ancient times. If you want to fight, you have to fight behind closed doors. The princess is still there. I think it would be more interesting for the couple to work together to fight against the enemy. After making the princess angry away, they can then turn against each other and beat her behind closed doors. Let the male protagonist go to heaven first, then to hell, and then watch him please the female protagonist, which is more interesting. Now I feel that the heroine's design is a bit broken. I wonder if it's my imagination?

The plot is too drawn out, with repeated memories, elaborations, and explanations, and no real progress at all. Is the author too straightforward, or does he treat us readers as novices? Judging from the style, this article will also be a very long article. It is not easy for everyone to make money. I am very poor, so I decided to give up the article.

It's so good... Tell me a few chapters about a little bit... This plot is so dragging...

I don't like the heroine anymore. No matter how angry you are at the flower viewing party you hold, you cannot let everyone watch the monkey show

It feels like the plot is inappropriate. It's understandable how the female protagonist feels when she sees the male protagonist, but as a setting for a mature woman, it doesn't feel very appropriate to hit someone in person.

The subject matter is very innovative and the writing is good, but I still feel that the author is lost. The heroine was inexplicably lost for 15 years, which means that the heroine's mental age is in her teens. The heroine from fifteen years ago became a relationship expert when she came back. She made various analyzes and took advantage of the situation. She came back and understood everything that she didn't understand fifteen years ago?

To be honest, I'm a little annoyed. I posted before that the psychological change of the heroine was a little too much. Now I see that it's more than just a past. On one hand, she is the master of everything, a delicate and caring mother, and on the other hand, she is a domineering little girl who is pampered by others without knowing it. And the heroine's attitude towards her husband is even more speechless😓. Here I only see a scumbag who is stubborn and refuses to admit her mistakes because she has done something wrong. Let's look at it again. If you don't succeed, you can only give up.

The description of the protagonist is too much. It seems that the whole world cannot survive without her. She comes from an aristocratic family and is one of the top figures in the country. How could it be any worse? She is only a little girl in her teens, no matter how powerful she is, how powerful can she be? They have more than ten years of experience than her, and they are all first-class people. How can they be worse than her? I can't stand it anymore.

Uh... Possessed people do things that are mindless, and according to common sense, they can never happen. Since freedom of love should have reached a certain age, is it really such a nonsense at that time without any logic?

The heroine must be sick! A treat is just to invite someone to watch a joke? She also whipped her husband in public, so she can divorce her.

The subject matter is good and the writing is good, but the plot is too slow and long-winded. I didn't understand anything from the beginning. It will be more exciting if it is compact and concise.

It's too boring and lacks focus. It's a good idea, but it's a pity.

I'm so tired of looking at it! There is too much exposition, which buries the main thread of the story. Each node has a large explanation. It has become a lengthy article.

The subject matter and setting are quite good, but I couldn't stand it after seeing the charging chapter. There is really too much nonsense and it's not to my liking. It's a pity that this subject matter is too good.

The plot is too procrastinating. You can guess the causes and consequences even if you skip it. There are 180 chapters! The introduction is attractive, the content...

It's so long-winded. I feel like I have a lot to say but I can't explain it clearly. It's all a mess. Is it really written with a smile?🤔🤔🤔

In order to go to the border, the female lead singer had to practice and fight. The royal family was too suspicious.

Why haven't there been any updates in the past few days, sir?

Compared with the previous novel, it feels like it was not written by the same author. It is much slower. It has not been updated in the past few days 😆😆😆

I read Chapter 17. Is this really written by Wan'er? Is it so watery? ? ? Don't you want to change it? ? ? ?

Even if they are princesses and the head of the county, they can do whatever they want. The emperor is still hesitant and cannot convict them.

Some people's novels are slow-burning, and then the world view or layout becomes larger and larger (and may collapse) Some people's novels are fast-burning, and then they can't be written (they collapse) What type is this novel?