In the Wilderness, You Become Stronger While You Are Alive

1. Weekly gift packages are sometimes better than monthly gift packages. 2. The issue of points in the first hundred days. At that time, the male protagonist could kill two tigers with 24 points, but could not beat a bear with 20 points and was almost slapped to death. It used to cost 20 points to kill a bear, and it was quite easy. Now I can't beat a bear with 20 points. A lion with 12 points can defeat two tigers with 12 points, so why are they all 12 points? The division of strength and its value here are not equivalent. 3. The character description is confusing. Before the end of the hundred days, I decided to form a team with four other people, and then made a random match. One of them was not matched. Although they will cooperate later, this step is completely redundant. I matched with two unknown passers-by, and then began to survive after one hundred days. I really don't understand what the operation is here. 4. Extreme lack of attention to some details. For example, there is a paragraph that says that Su Yan studied it with a microscope and found that there were indeed no microorganisms. So the question is, where did the microscope come from? Pay attention! That time was a hundred days ago, and when I went in on the first day, only my underwear was left, and nothing else was left. May I ask where the microscope comes from? Then there are almost a few typos in every chapter. It feels like we readers haven't read the book 5. There are no monthly gift packs on the 124th day and weekly gift packs on the 126th day. I'm not particularly sure about this, because I haven't verified it myself. I read a chapter review, but I don't remember it. 6. Regarding taming, when taming a weaker beast, it must be successfully tamed six times before it becomes extremely loyal and can obey orders. If it is only tamed once, it will be very disobedient and attack others, and the wild nature of the beast will still remain. Then, later on, if you tame a more powerful beast, you can tame it once. If you succeed, you can give it away directly. The issue of obedience is not considered here. I feel like I've been hit by a mental shock. 7. It is also about domestication. Level one can tame Erha at level two, but later it is said that it cannot be domesticated beyond the next level. Dig countless holes and then jump into them like crazy. 8. The specific level represents unknown combat power, and the effects of some techniques are unknown. It was previously said that it can simulate the brain core of a ferocious beast, and then you can have a protective shield. It did not say that the level is not enough, nor did it say when it can be obtained. There was no overview of the effects of any items, and no overview of any newly discovered resources. I won't write more. I really like this 500-day survival novel. The author also writes a good world structure, which is my favorite type. Otherwise, I wouldn't keep reading it. The progress of the author can also be seen. I was really almost persuaded to quit the writing of those chapters before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it gradually improved a lot and the progress was obvious. I hope the author pays attention to the details. A good book not only needs a good world structure, but details are also very important.

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After reading the first chapter, it was like rubbing my IQ into pieces

I read it in one sitting. Overall, the storyline is good. The first 200 days are relatively interesting, but after the 300th day, there is nothing interesting to watch. Repeatedly, there are some routines that don't lead to anything! Actually, by the 300th day, I no longer had the desire to read anymore, but because of the lack of books I still insisted on reading 💀. I would also like to complain about the author's numerical control (not good at mathematics) and the before-and-after comparison of the plot. The author may have some misunderstandings about the weight ratio of biological volume and spatial volume. I don't know how the author understands the cubic value. This part has a very poor sense of substitution. In addition, some plots do not correspond to the before and after! Finally, I strongly complain that the number of typos of the author is among the highest among the novels I have read. There are so many typos! The rating for this book is 7 points (on a 10-point scale).

It was quite interesting at first, but the writing got worse and worse later on, getting further and further away from survival in the wilderness. The plot was the same as a primary school student's journal...

What rubbish is written? The male protagonist is eating from the bowl and looking into the pot. Lu Ke returns the favor to the female protagonist? I think the heroine is Su Yan, right? The male protagonist is even more arrogant. He kept explaining that he liked Su Yan because of his predecessor. However, as soon as Su Yan came back, he couldn't wait to find someone to form a team with, without even asking the female protagonist for her qualifications. The strength is also written in a mess.

Up to now, the overall feeling is good. I am deeply concerned about the fate of Xu Yi and Xiaoyao's groups. 😁 It is foreseeable that Xu Yi is the main force in obtaining planets. How will the territory be divided in the future? How many voices? . In theory, mental power and enhanced physical training should be practiced secretly, and advanced skills should be cherished, right? They will definitely be the backing for the development of our clan in the later stage. At this stage, shouldn't Xu Yi gather together to find his own team? The two guns can theoretically fight against the upper limit of 40 heads at a time, which should be able to carry out rescue operations of the same race. It is unlikely that a foreign team would willingly join Xu Yi's team. Why demand reciprocity when supplies are scarce and care is lacking? , The hidden danger is huge, it feels uncomfortable to bring foreigners to play together. 😁

I've read a few chapters, and I hope you don't think too hard while reading it, otherwise your IQ will drop.

The first hundred chapters are good to read, but setting up a world-saving setting is a bit out of touch with the wilderness theme 😰

I thought I was the worst if I persisted for 20, but I didn't expect to be considered a master here

Brother, this is a book that has the potential to become a god! I hope you can finish writing about him,

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The writing is really good, and the monotonous life can be described in detail. The writing style makes people feel like returning to nature. Although there are some minor bugs, it is undeniable that it feels very real. It just feels like it lacks a bit of mental description. I have read a lot of survival books, and this one is my personal favorite. It has the feeling of a steady flow of water.

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First of all, the only unpleasant thing is the typo, which gave me the illusion that I was watching a pirated version. Secondly, the wilderness is too routine in the early stage, but hunting large carnivores later becomes exciting. The only thing is that the author is a bit unable to grasp the plot of the battle, and the writing is a bit bland. He can learn from the battle plot techniques of some novels. Third, properly describe the harshness of the wilderness. The poisonous point in the early stage is that when there are no cleaning tools, there will be a faint fragrance on the clothes. This is really poisonous. When exercising in the wilderness, there is only the odor of sweat and sweat. Girls are also human beings and cannot be transformed into flower fairies. Most things like body odor are a kind of smell that can be emitted in the later stage if people have certain cleaning ability to wash away sweat stains. There is nothing else to say. The IQ of the protagonist and heroine is all online, and there is no such thing as a brainless fool.

How did the writing turn into a fantasy about surviving and becoming stronger?

There is something written on the back that I can't understand.

Keep writing better, reduce cliche plots, and establish a complete world view of the novel to attract people to read it.

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It's too poisonous. The female partner is a 22-year-old brain specialist, an outdoor expert, a surgeon, and a hospital run by her own family? The protagonist was delivering food and was hit by his female partner and stayed in the hospital for a month 🤫 Is this a fancy thing? No one with brain cancer can participate in the challenge. After walking for 20 minutes and there was no movement at all for a long time at the beginning of the late stage of brain cancer, the diagnosis was wrong? Chapter 5, 4 beauties, stud route? ! If you can be teleported away in danger, there is a 40% chance of death? In Chapter 5, there appeared a big star traveling for inspiration and a survival guru brother who protected her, a brain expert and medicinal diet expert who came out to relax with terminal brain cancer 😅, and two unlucky guys who were teleported away in time 😅. Is this a live broadcast upgrade to save the world, travel, talk about love, struggle, and stallion streaming?

To be fair, I really like this book because a lot of people criticize it. There are some poisonous points, such as what the comment section said about a 22-year-old surgeon suffering from brain cancer, but it really doesn't have much impact. This is not a fan fiction with a wrong setting. In the final analysis, it is just to establish the character image. It doesn't matter if you feel you can't accept it, but I really feel that this little poisonous point is nothing. Isn't those little white writers more poisonous than this stallion? Secondly, this book is not a stallion. Throughout the whole process, the protagonist has come into contact with and has had long-term contact. So far, there is only one. Finally, let's talk about the highlights of this book. The first is the setting. The setting of an alien planet and an environment that changes every 100 days is quite brilliant. As for many people complaining that one billion is unreasonable, they probably haven't read it seriously. This is about all human beings immigrating to alien planets. It has been a failure for 499 days. Why is it dangerous if you can withdraw? Because it may be too late, such as a flash sale or something. The second is the characterization, which is very good. Only one female character is created in a large space. But now, Lu Ke can indeed be regarded as a drag in the early stage, but she is not a burden and plays a great role. A little bit of hard work, a little bit of improvement, and now she can be regarded as a good helper. This is very good. The third is the setting of the mission. This is the finishing touch. The reason why many wilderness novels cannot be written is because after building the campsite, you can stay there forever. This setting of forcing you to go out is great. Finally, after typing so many words, why don't I add some details~~~~ I haven't read it for a long time, so I just flipped through it. Anyway, this book has not included women until now. It's just that I have a good relationship with Loli. It's obvious that I don't have a harem. Thank you.

If you want to become a great god and reach the recommendation position, you still have to pay more attention to quality. The theme is very good. I like the wilderness. Fighting many ferocious beasts in Alien Awakening is quite good, but it has a few shortcomings. First, there are too many typos, really many! The second is that there is less character interaction. More people in the team should be given appearances and corresponding characters should be shaped, so that the book will be enriched. Unlike now, in addition to combat upgrades, there are combat upgrades, which is very boring and the same as the assembly line. Also, except for Lu Ke, if other characters die, we will not Heartache will not cause waves, because it is just as if there is nothing, and it is the same, which is a failure. I believe you, the author, should know this problem, because in the early stage, there were a lot of words for Su Yan, Lu Yao, and Wang Jin, and you did it, but in the end there was almost no text, which is very strange. The third is the image of a ferocious beast! It's very important that the author spends a lot of time on it. Most of us don't know what the ferocious beasts look like now, so we don't have a sense of immersion! Because I believe that many people are pursuing this book because there are all kinds of ferocious beasts and mounts, which is very attractive to those who are into the beast genre and those who control mounts. For example, I control one mount (the price of buying a mount in various online games is at least tens of thousands 😭, and there is also the second version of World of Warcraft where you can get rid of mounts until you vomit), but you have not described many ferocious beasts well, so for readers, there is really no sense of substitution and no way to imagine, which is very bad. This set of sequences will have a huge impact on the author's performance, very big! I hope the author will work hard! I quite like it myself, at least for now. Hope this can enrich the article! Finally! Awesome! 🙏🙏😳😳

Come on＾0＾~Although I'm tired of writing about the wilderness survival theme, I found someone new writing it, so I'd better support it. As someone who has written two high-quality books on the wilderness, I think it's easiest to get high-quality books in the city. I'm optimistic about you, come on!

I still have more to say. I hope it will be updated soon. It was very comfortable and I finished it in one day.

I haven't read it in a few days. I just checked it and it showed that I have more than 300 chapters that I haven't read. I was shocked. I thought the author was awesome. There are more than 300 chapters in a few days. . . As a result, the starting point was not refreshed, so I was happy for nothing.

In fact, if I don't teach the skills to people other than teammates, I can still insist on watching. But I can't stand it anymore when I see such selfless help for outsiders, and the outsiders don't take advantage of it! This is not in line with the human heart! And if you give hope to some people who have little hope in the first place, isn't this creating strife? If the gap is too big, there will be no bad intentions, but if the gap is not big, conspiracy will appear! Do you want to help others become stronger and create obstacles for yourself? I think there should be three categories if you are still a human being. You should give it to yourself, level 2 to your followers, and only level 3 or even 4 items can be released for exchange! There can't be no distinction between inside and outside and no difference in treatment, right?

It's okay to write, but the author shouldn't be influenced by those in the comment area, come on.

The writer is so diligent, I like it

Hmm... I want to share my thoughts. I have been reading the two books "The Wilderness" and "Big Player" recently. The general structure of "The Wilderness" is quite good, but some flaws are in the emotional structure. The author can refer to the relationship structure in Big Player. I know that according to the general idea, it is a bit too early to develop the relationship line between Lu Ke and Xu Yi, but it is also relatively early in Big Player. In fact, many readers also like to see the behavior of spreading dog food from time to time (although most of us are alone 😂). When reading the book, the characters in the book are like children raised by themselves (wouldn't it be better to explain this 😊)? I am still very happy to see them achieve good results... —The above is a personal opinion, I hope you will adopt it (big cheers, the writing is very good)