Koi Enters the Fairy Gate

Hello, here I come~ First of all, the storyline is quite good and attractive, and can keep readers reading. The writing is average, a bit immature, and the accuracy of words is not good enough. The detailed description needs to be improved~ The paragraphs are reasonable, great I don't know if there are some common sense problems deliberately or accidentally written wrong. Maybe this village is unusual Keep up the good work (ง •̀_•́)ง

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