Beast Tamer Chef King

The president of the cooking club seems a bit annoying. Taking someone else's knife, even though it was an accident, but not using it privately, was she so stupid that she didn't know the value of the knife? The president of a cooking club who was admitted to this school must at least have some foresight. He didn't even think about giving the knife back to others, but he still used it for cooking. To be honest, I know a cook who treasures his knife so much that no one else can use it. Everyone has different opinions on how to use their personal belongings. She is also a cook but she has no sensitivity to knives. Moreover, she had a taste problem, and she didn't want others to know about it, so she wanted to cook food that didn't taste good and harm others. People ignored her and tolerated it, and even forced people to eat it. Is the protagonist still used to it? As a chef, his sense of taste is very precious. Is it okay to just try some unsuitable and pungent food? And because the president eats all the food, shouldn't he tell the president from the position of a chef that there is something wrong with your seasoning? The above is my personal opinion.

The author's writing style is a bit thin, and the characterization is a bit weak. Whether it is the protagonist or a friend, the author's portrayal is described by himself, rather than expressed through events In the beast-control novel, pet interaction is almost non-existent, especially the black phoenix, and it is a bit exaggerated This book obviously focuses on cooking, but from a glance, it is all covered in one stroke. Whether it is inventing dishes, apprenticeships, the following food festivals, food is all covered in one stroke, but it is more focused on marketing, college Then I started to rewrite the battle The attributes added by cooking are too fake and empty, and there is no clear description. The only clear ones are detoxification and meditation, and the attributes added by combat, but the specific data are not detailed The protagonist obviously has an advantage, but the author has been suppressing it, and let him join the Jinyuan trio, which is a waste of time.

I saw this book again and decided to review it this time. First of all, let me say this. This comment only represents my personal opinion. Don't criticize me if you don't like it. I have only been reading books for two or three years at the starting point. I am not a great writer or critic. If you don't like what I say, you can treat it as complete bullshit. The characters are very thin, or boring. Basically, I can't remember any of the characters, there are no interesting interactions, and there is no interesting background story. In terms of beast control, it is indeed a very bold idea to use a poisonous frog as the main pet, but unfortunately it is of no use. The main pet, as the spiritual beast that spends the longest time with the protagonist in the whole book and plays the most roles, must have a certain combat power, certain characteristics, and most importantly, it must be kind and cute in the initial stage. It must be cute from time to time to make the audience remember it. It doesn't matter if it is ugly, but To take the ugly and cute route, a good example is the three families in the Pokémon series, but yours is also poisonous... I can only say that the person next door writes about cats and dogs as the main pets. When writing about daily interactions, you can just start masturbating. You... Let me tell you something, I don't understand what I am reading when I read your book. When you write about cooking, there are not many details about the cooking process, that is, the processing of ingredients, and the magical effects. The cooking part of this book feels like playing a game. You put the raw materials into frames and cook them in a pot to create a dish. There is nothing memorable about the color, appearance and taste of the vegetables. Of course, novels are far inferior to comics and animations in terms of the need for images to express themselves, so they have a natural disadvantage. In addition, there is no description of the training and daily interactions with the pet beasts, and the design is almost purely realistic creatures with no memory points. The only one I remember well is the vomiting frog. I only remember it because of its ugly name... Also, the integration of the two elements of cooking and beast control is also very general. It doesn't feel inconsistent to say that cooking is a low-level pill rewarded by the system. There are better books on beast control than this one. There are very few cooking articles and I haven't read them much. But this book definitely doesn't rank high, and the integration between the two themes is not good either. So I don't understand why I read this book. This book can actually be written better, as long as it integrates cooking, animal control training and character interaction. For example, if the protagonist makes a dish from low-level training materials, so that the low-level training materials can have the effect of intermediate or even high-level training materials, you only need to write that the dish is effective and related to the training of beasts. You can even write that eating the food makes the intestines laxative and the ability is greatly increased. There is nothing wrong with it. Also, for example, there is a female character in this book who has a conflict with the big family. If I were to write it as the heroine, I would write that she was depressed, wandering on the street, hungry, accidentally went to the restaurant where the protagonist worked, ate the food cooked by the protagonist, and was shocked, and then He was in a good mood and put his worries aside. Afterwards, the protagonist chatted with him and exchanged his views on pet beast training. The two chatted very well, so they planned to train together, and then got in touch with the protagonist. In this way, a heroine who was not blunt at all and corresponded to the theme appeared. In fact, it doesn't matter what character it is, as long as the theme of cooking is related to the interaction of the characters. Finally, I wish the author's writing will get better and better, and every book will become a hit. Thank you also for reading all the words I typed and listening to my thoughts.

The subject matter is quite good, but the writing is not very good. If it is a food story, why must the protagonist participate in a beast-controlling competition? Let the protagonist work as a supporter to help the beast-controlling competition players improve their combat power. The competition should focus on the school team members. To be honest, it is a beast-control novel. There are too few descriptions of pet beasts. I feel that there is no interaction with the protagonist. It is inexplicable to become stronger. There is no foreshadowing at all. It has a nondescript feeling. I feel that it would be much better to focus on one aspect.

In a world of extraordinary systems, it is best to improve your own strength before pursuing side jobs. If you don't have the strength to improve side jobs, this is not making a wedding dress for others. It feels like pig's feet are full of side jobs.

Is there a female protagonist? Don't want a heroine

I'd like to ask before I watch it, is there a female protagonist?

I became the author's 100th investment, how am I doing? 😏

The content is quite good, but the writing style is a bit..., It reads like a running account. I hope the author will work hard on it.

Open a spirit beast setting post Friends who have ideas can try it The following format is required [Name: Spirit beast name, don't be too outrageous] [Attributes: metal, wood, water, fire, earth, poison, thunder, ice, wind, rock, choose one] [Level: Recommendations are C~D, I can't arrange it if the level is high] [Skills: Simple names are best] [Description: Everyone's own information about spirit beasts, I may make some magical changes] PS: Ordinary is best, and I will probably adopt it.