Immortal

Overall, it's good. I'd like to mention my own little experience. When I publish a book, I will first read it in the background to see if there are any typos in the chapters and whether there are periods or wrong symbols after paragraphs. You can also learn from it 😁

Fat Yuyu 🙏🙏 Dear book friends, Happy Mid-Autumn Festival, reunion, and have a good holiday.

Just saw a wonderful place. . . . . Alas~~~~~~~ Is this life😭😭😭

The novel of literature is thought-provoking and touching; the wonder of literature makes people fascinated; the essence of literature is all in vain if the sentences are deleted; the truth of literature touches stone hearts with passion. The extraordinary literary skills are shown in the ordinary, and every word is precious. Gorgeous rhetoric creates an atmosphere. Hope to continue working hard👍

This book is not finished but has been updated in different places. Thank you to my friends from Qidian. Thank you for your companionship for a month. Thank you😊, Tomorrow this book will say goodbye and thank you at the starting point. My new book will still be updated at the starting point.

There are no major problems, but there are some minor problems. In short, it's okay, I hope to continue working hard. The realm is too fast. This pit must be buried, otherwise it will be difficult to live in the future. This Xianxia is the best one I have ever seen, which shows that the author is very careful. If he keeps it up in the future, he will not be much worse than the great master. The protagonist's personality is introverted and feels a little flawed. He's just human! No desire. Still that sentence, why are you cultivating immortality? The early stage has been well prepared, and then comes the colorful world. Don't say I don't take care of you. Cultivation of all the methods of immortality is not very powerful in the early stage, but there are many methods. For example, there are pets, weapon refining, poison poison, elixir refining, and formations, all colorful, but if you don't have a golden finger, you can only choose one, and the others will be your opponents! Okay, I'm done. Finally, simply pay attention to details, drive slowly, there are many scenery on the road.

In the book, I also interspersed a lot of my own ideas and several short plots, which are very good and the finishing touch.

So hardworking👍Recommend a ticket, come on✊✊✊

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Return visit with a pen in hand and the Heavenly Soul Sutra - has been collected! Come on

After reading it, the environment, character descriptions, and scene details are very well done, and the writing is acceptable. Please note that there are some missing punctuation marks in the double quotation marks. Come on.

I've seen Chapter 57 (Volume 2, Chapter 51)

It's him, it's him, our hero Xiao Luo Bang.

Come on＾0＾~, "Time Traveling into Li Yuanfang" is here to visit

Already collected and expected to be recycled

Which book are you writing now? Let me go and take a look.

Can Yuyu's other book be released?