Book of Forerunners

The author reads here I fell in love with this book at a glance while browsing through a certain book review circle. The encounter was fate. I have read Chapter 17. Overall, it is not bad, but there are still some advantages and disadvantages that I hope the author will take a look at. 1... First of all, it is a very unusual article. The protagonist is not a single person, but a group of people, who have changed from generation to generation. This is why it is very eye-catching. (1) In the early stage, the protagonists come one after another, and their names are all single characters. In the short term, it is okay. In the long term, it will be tiring whether it is a single character or not. It is recommended that the author should write a biography of the times for every important discovery related to the work to record the protagonists and discoveries of each era. 2…………The story is very compact and the writing is smooth, giving people a simple feeling. (2) But the progress of writing is a bit fast, such as how Tu's idea was put into practice and how he invented it. I read a little faster, and in a blink of an eye, Shen Tu was dead, and it was still Miao Miao. It ended in a few words... I was very confused... It was like Hua fighting with the previous boss. It was obvious that Hua was not strong enough to kill him instantly, but after a few words from the author, Hua won. However, I didn't see clearly why they started fighting? ? (Maybe I didn't read it carefully enough and overlooked it, but this kind of thing doesn't exist in other books) I don't hope that the author will be more generous, but I hope that the author can focus on some details. Even if it doesn't work, it will have to be longer, otherwise those who can only read a few lines at a glance I can't understand the plot at a glance (3) The story focuses on a simple tone, but the author's emojis (? (-.-///) Type) are very dramatic, giving people a very out-of-touch feeling. According to my experience, punctuation marks are counted in the word count, and the author has a good word count Suspicion (suspicious jpg·) 3…………Final personal opinion: The author does not follow the routine, keeps updating well, keeps updating more and more, does not use poison, does not be obscene/trivial and out of context, and often interacts with the cuties (such as me) in the comment area, it may not be a famous book. However, it is not enough to create a new genre. After all, this kind of story cannot be copied... To put it bluntly, the author's goal should be higher: for example, if a book can confer gods or something, my expectations for the author are still quite high I hope the author will work hard💪

I will briefly write down some of my feelings after reading the existing chapters (after all, it is just a personal opinion and I don't know if it is right or not) Generally speaking, it is okay. For me, the subject matter is a lot of points. With my personality, I will mainly focus on giving opinions. One is the rhythm of the writing. As far as I am concerned, the article has a strong chronicle atmosphere, and the details are not enough in many places (the previous book friend seems to have mentioned it). My personal suggestion is to read a chronological general history such as "Zi Zhi Tong Jian". After all, the author also mentioned that he is writing a history book. I have a good grasp of the center of the article, and I didn't waste too much pen and ink on things that have nothing to do with the "cultivation system." Second, it's about the characters. The personality characteristics of the main characters are quite different (but I think the depth of the characters is still a bit insufficient because of the length). I hope the author can keep improving in the future. In this regard, if you want to create a deep character, it is actually a relatively easy way to use the people around you as a template. If you are more ruthless, you can start with yourself and analyze your character and causes The third is about society. I hope to see the author's description of social systems, cultural characteristics, etc. It is also important to highlight changes (well, there are already changes in names, and the one about vassaling people from other tribes is also a bit of a slave) The shadow of society) and social systems also promote the "cultivation system". The influence of the "cultivation system" on social systems and culture is quite important (there is a saying that "economy determines politics" when extended to your novels, I think it is also applicable) Fourth, regarding some details, your work mentioned that the person who painted the mural "really" was water. I feel like there was no foreshadowing in the previous article (well, maybe I missed it)

There are two fixed chapters every day, and they will never be updated. Brothers and sisters, come and collect, come and invest.

I think it's ok, just invest in it, don't stop updating it.

Wu Jin, in ancient times, witches were called "witches" and wizards were called "Ji". They were collectively called "Witches".

Sure enough, after asking for leave, I became a eunuch. I was right. There has been no update for two days. I swore before that I couldn't be a eunuch. What about now? Huh? Um? Um?

The writing is great, creating a cultivation system and developing civilization from scratch.

Come on, recommend it every day, watch it once every two or three days, I'm just making do, I hope there will be more

Zhizhi is now sealed. If you want to break the seal and get out, Shui needs to strengthen the seal and go to the human world to learn and impart knowledge related to the seal. This is where sealing talismans come in.

Water wanted to kill Zhizhi, and tried every means, including breathing techniques and learning how to control body energy. However, the skills he used failed to kill Zhizhi, and Zhizhi became stronger and stronger, and the power left on the earth became stronger and stronger. The surviving heavenly beings created by water also learned the knowledge of water and became stronger and stronger. Doubles fight, these are the two superpowers

Shui looked for a way to kill Zhizhi in the void, and found the heaven or something, but now he can't think of it.

Come on, boss, invest 😅

Emmm, you are stuck, secret realms, magic weapons, talismans..., The era when they were popular, a generation of genius legends, a catastrophic reincarnation... Come on!

Confucius "deleted the books from Tang and Yu, so before Tang and Yu, Confucius got and burned them. "Poetry" has 3000 chapters, and 311 of them are preserved, so Confucius also got 2689 chapters and burned them." The legendary "Three Tombs", "Five Codes", "Basuo" and "Nine Hills" are said to have been deleted and burned by Confucius (ಡωಡ). Can you write about the two ancient dynasties Tang and Yu?

Vote~(￣▽￣~), congratulations on the finale ^_^♪!

The chapter titles are well written, but unfortunately they have nothing to do with the content.

I am weak and very poor... I made up my mind... I invested the small amount of money I spent to write a book as an apprentice... A few coins... And then... I became poor again... I was so poor that my funds on the ios end were less than 100 points. I hope... The author will sign a contract and put it on the shelves as soon as possible...

Some time ago, an author also said to update twice a day, then it became once a day, and now it is updated every 3 to 5 days. You may be next.

I climbed up to the starting point today and cast a vote as usual. Suddenly something didn't feel right. I was gone for five days. The author went from 61 to 67. I promised two tickets a day. This number is not right.

Collapse along the way, outline and start a new book!

Hey, I've started asking for leave, and I'm not far from the eunuch soon. Eunuchs all start by asking for leave.