Douluo's Legend of Evil God

Why is the protagonist so weak? I feel like the protagonist is not as good as the heroine. Can you make the protagonist more powerful? Otherwise, it feels like it's worthless.

I hope that after polishing it carefully, it is still a bit sloppy and rough! The combat description is too rough, or perhaps too difficult. Secondly, your article should be an invincible article, but it's not that exciting! I also need to write more about the protagonist,

So what's first? I don't want to pick on the traditional shortcomings of a newcomer's book. I don't think you have an outline. The eight pages you jump to are too fast. It feels like you are not writing a story. And yours, speaking of, there are too many additions. There are more than a dozen in one page. The content is relatively rough and the plot is weak. I can only say that your book is only suitable for beginners. This is good enough for your first book. Don't use it to make up the word count. You don't have to publish it every day. You can craft it carefully but the content must be enough.

I hope you, the author, can write well. I will always support you. Come on.

Some people said there was something wrong with my setting, and some said I made the male protagonist weak. What I want to say is that the settings I wrote are all from Baidu. The versions may be different so there are different opinions, but Baidu does have the version I wrote. Is the male protagonist really weak? Do you know Yuji Sakai, the male protagonist of Shakugan Shana in the first two seasons? Also, I wrote this book just as a hobby. If you don't like reading it, just don't read it. It would be low-quality to criticize others.

I think Taotie and Xuanyuan Sword can each add a special skill. Swallow; you can devour soul beasts or soul masters to increase soul power. Xuanyuan Sword Royal Way; Establishing a force and then leading the force to fight can increase the attributes of teammates. The more teammates you have, the more boost you will get. Extract one thousandth of the increase of teammates 45% of teammates I suggest the author create a group. I hope the author will adopt it.

Don't care too much about other people's opinions. You have to walk your own path. Some readers are too selfish and only care about whether they like it or not. You are not writing a book for him or her alone. You must never forget your original intention. You also said that this is your first work, so don't regret writing it and finishing it. Most people still like to read it and their opinions can be adopted. You don't have to care about trolls. Come on!

I hope the author will not write this book with hundreds of thousands of words before it is gone.

What does it have to do with using an artifact as a martial spirit? If you give it a very ordinary martial spirit, people may not be able to read it. I support the author. Reading novels is just for reading fun stories. Whatever makes you happy, just leave if you don't want to read it. Don't target the author.

The author wants to create a KouKou group. Friends who agree to the group will be deducted 1, and those who disagree will be deducted 2. If a group is created, the group number will be posted below this post.

Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! My level is not high enough, otherwise I would definitely recommend it to you. You have to wait for me.

The author wants to create a KouKou group. Friends who agree will be deducted 1, and those who disagree will be deducted 2. If you create a group, I will post the group number below this post.

Why do you care so much about him? Come on💪, come on💪, come on💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Why is the 7 main character so weak and sometimes seems like he doesn't exist.

If I add the DNF wet nurse skill to Donghuang Bell, can I hunt down a Celia spirit beast? The attack skill is written as the nanny's unique skill and the bell cannot shine...

Woohoo, I think there are too few people with single martial souls. At the starting point, the average per capita is double martial souls.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The artifact martial soul is really nothing, but the protagonist is really weak. You should refer to the settings in Xianxia novels, not the ones in anime 😅

The heroine is prepared for the protagonist in the first chapter

As soon as I saw Dual Martial Spirits, I had no intention of reading any more.

Courage and blessing, isn't the Donghuang Bell the magic weapon of Emperor Jun Donghuang Taiyi? It's all attack type no matter what.