Rebirth Store

Forget it. I can't stand it anymore. It's so long-winded that I don't get to the point until Chapter 21. Halfway through, I help a girl become emperor and then start talking about other things. I'm tired of reading and don't want to read the following. The author's logic is not good and the story is not well constructed.

The author explains too much beyond words. He insists on writing two pages when he can finish it in one paragraph. Looking tired. Also, I feel so embarrassed when "without him" appears frequently.

If it's a quick wear, I think the name could be changed to be more interesting. For example: My store in Quick Travel is a bit buggy. It is interesting and can capture the hearts of current readers in no time. There are all the golden fingers in the title novel genre. This will make it more popular. Or the quick time traveler is forced to take the road of salvation. Because I think that the mysterious object is the god, and I think he will be saved. And it can also be the main line of fast travel. After all, only by traveling through the apocalyptic magic and immortality realm can you get big trading points. I'm just guessing haha, but you can refer to this opinion. If you are not going to wear it quickly, I suggest you change your name. Because it is easy to conflict with the title of the book. I have seen the Plane Mall of Quick Travel and the Plane Merchant of Rebirth 😂 and funny names are the way to go now, after all, there are many middle school students reading now.

It's super nice. If you wear it quickly, you can have a carry-on space in the future. And I think it might be a rescue stream? Save the male protagonist God? If there is a male protagonist. I think this profile should be marked with or without CP quick wear, as these are signs of attraction. Also, if you want to quickly wear the best name, bring it with you. If you search for books at Qidian. Com, you can search by name. QQ Reading can search for tags and introductions. If I didn't search for Kuaiwen in QQ reading, I would have missed this article. Because neither the name nor the introduction can be seen at all, otherwise it will be delayed. It is actually very good-looking and can be popular. Because the heroine has a cute personality, it's best to be shady and make Knazi take revenge, otherwise she will feel a little soft.

I've read Chapter 18 and it's really long-winded. Personally, I think the author wrote 2 useful chapters and used the remaining 16 chapters to explain why he wrote the useful ones.

I saw Chapter 35, I came in for the trading plane, but the writing was so messy... I know it's not easy for the author to write a book. I thought it was quite interesting before traveling through the planes, but the writing was so bad after traveling to the first plane... I can't stand it... Is the cultivation of immortality so casual? Is merit so casual?

I see there is a quick wear label on most of them. I think it should be marked in the introduction so that everyone can search for it by searching Kuaiwen.

Moreover, the name of this book is called Plane Store, but the content of opening a store and selling things is covered in one or two sentences, and the rest is a mess of non-nutritious dialogue. Abandoned