I Really Don't Want to Be the Lamp God

The mourning group from the Three Gods came😥😥

Let's take a look at when the author was milked to death ~ God's three funeral professional teams?!

Does the author know that Pan Jinlian and Wu Dalang were county magistrates in history? Wu Dalang is not short-lived, he is very tall and handsome, and Pan Jinlian is not a prostitute... She is a lady, okay?🤫🤫

The sentences are not fluent and a bit confusing.

This book is so good at word count, complete with the inner monologue of the main character.

Okay, this is a good beginning and very attractive. The writing is finally smoother than before, and some descriptions are more accurate, such as the characters' demeanor and behavior, etc., Which are all good. I just hope that there can be more depictions of characters, such as descriptions of appearance and clothing, and even more psychological descriptions of characters such as Pan Jinlian. This will be very helpful in shaping the independence of the characters. There is also a need to follow up on the description of environmental scenes. It's quite interesting. I can use my brain to understand this plot. Remember to make steady progress in the plot, and don't make it too confusing. Please pay attention. I wish the new book progress! —Your dear old wet

I didn't feel immersed in it. The tone was like writing an essay. It was very confusing.

I can't understand it. Writing the name is quite confusing.

The Qing Emperor should be happy to punish Ming.

Which three sentences have you heard that men least want to hear?