Leaving One's Home Behind

It's well written 🙂, but it feels a little weird 🤔. It's the first time I've read something like this. Maybe I've read too many routine articles. Reading this kind of thing is just like reading a text 😁.

Come on together (ง •̀_•́)ง

If you have any questions or suggestions for discussion, you can tell me below the post. This is my first time writing a novel and I am very inexperienced, so I need a lot of advice from my book friends. 1 The current story framework is quite messy, it's just a mess and needs to be sorted out 2 The main plot is Qisang Coal Mine experience, the branch plot is Qisang's past experience (Please give me some advice on how to arrange it properly and reasonably) 3 When is the appropriate time to introduce the story of the ancestors and the storyline at home in the book (please give me some advice) Sang Ye would like to thank you all!

The introduction is not good and cannot effectively guide the readers. The writing is quite good, but the characterization of the characters is a bit thin. There should be no archived manuscripts. This is a taboo. It is difficult to ensure quality and retain readers if you write and publish at the same time. The subject matter is very dangerous, so pay attention to the red lines.

It's well written, and the protagonist Qi Sang's image is described in great detail!

I've been keeping it for a few days to see why it's not updated anymore.

If you like this kind of reality, come on

Realistic novels are really hard to write, come on

No one 😢

It's well written, but updates are too slow.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I won't write anymore. It's a pity that someone with good writing skills is missing.

We can visit each other and recommend each other.

I like it when I see realistic themes! ! Come on, let's encourage each other!

However, I would like to make a suggestion. A book friend also said that the introduction of the work really needs to be revised. The current introduction cannot let readers know the type and general plot of the book, and it is difficult to attract new people to click and read. I have revised the introduction of "Heirs Across the World" four or five times, and I am still not satisfied with it.