A Wisp of Blue Silk Ribbon and a Wet Dream

The writing is smooth, the language introduction is clean, and each character has a very three-dimensional feel, which is impressive. It's a good book. Give it a vote

The writing is good, the story structure is clear, well-organized, the narrative is clear, and the plot is compact. Not bad.

There are flaws, and the logic is a bit illogical, but the author's writing style and writing skills are very good. So, the above is not a problem (laughs) After that, I plan to implant it maliciously. But considering the author's issue, it's not very polite. So, I put the link at the bottom. Ahem, let's get back to the topic. After reading the introduction, you will know that this novel will be very interesting. In actual reading, this is indeed the case. But there is a problem. Why did Lord Yama issue tasks that would cause more trouble for him? It's the one who didn't drink Meng Po soup and had the third way of reincarnation. If I were the King of Hell, such a troublesome guy should be dragged to Abi Hell... I told you not to drink Meng Po Soup... Tui, you deserve it! I really can't understand the series of operations that follow. It's okay to go back to the past, but there's no point in planning carefully for the future. Now the King of Hell's business is very broad, and his hands are stretched very long, right? But of course, as I commented in the article. It's a fantasy novel, so it doesn't matter if it's a little bit ridiculous. Well, other than that. The character of the heroine is well described, and the plot is very interesting. As long as you keep updating twice a day, you will be popular~ (If you feel good, add more)

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is excellent and the writing is smooth. The story setting is very interesting and can be eaten and nourished. I have collected it. The introduction is a bit unattractive, and the rest are all at the level of grass jelly, so I'm very optimistic about it, keep up the good work!

Emmm, I think I'm here to complain 😂😂 The author apologizes for the unpleasant things I said 😥😥😥 Let's talk about the advantages first, to give you more confidence. First of all, I think the subject matter of this book is quite novel. It is a system time-travel flow in the underworld. Although the content is still a bit nonsensical, it is more logical than ordinary time-travel flows. Secondly, the writing is not bad either. Didi didi, high energy ahead, please pay attention. In my opinion, there are quite a few shortcomings. Although I watch relatively few female videos, I still want to share my intuitive feelings about this book. I don't know if all female porn books are like this. The most important thing is a question of personality. If nothing else, first of all, let's talk about the character of the heroine. At the beginning, the 32-year-old history professor did not suffer any mutations, but committed suicide by taking pills because she felt bored. This is actually quite strange. Then when I arrived in the underworld, the character design felt a little different from the previous character design. I don't know if it was because of death. But I think the most ridiculous thing is after time travel. Most of the time, the heroine feels a little naive, silly and sweet to me. Occasionally, she has some calm and logical analysis, which completely changes the initial character design beyond recognition. Then there is the dialogue where the heroine dies and is seduced, which I think is also very strange. It's entirely possible that Gui Cha made the mistake of hooking up, not that he died because he took the medicine. This is simply untenable theologically. Because now that there is the underworld, I think it's better to follow the destiny itself. Even if I didn't drink Meng Po Soup, it felt a bit like forcibly subduing my wits. Emmm, I admit I'm a bit arrogant. The following content does feel a little different from the general time-travel flow, but it is also a bit cliché. Personally I don't like it very much 😂😂. However, the subsequent plot feels better written than at the beginning, and the character design itself has been taken into consideration. As a man majoring in science and engineering, I am a bit harsh on certain aspects of logic. Actually, I think that as a boy, I may not have a good perspective when watching female videos. 😂😂 Actually, I'm quite surprised why you didn't sign a contract. I think your writing is better than some female videos that have signed a contract, in terms of creativity and writing style. Finally, I would like to give my personal advice. In fact, both theology and science must follow their own logic at the beginning. Of course, time travel itself may not be very logical, but you should try to pay attention to what you can notice. Then there is the character design. It is best to have events to show the changes in the character's personality. It is easier to just write a silly and sweet time travel. It is also an elite character design. The more you have to pay attention to it, otherwise it will feel like you are forcibly subduing your wits. As for the subject matter, the idea is actually quite good, but you can show it a little more. This will make people look more attractive. Since the subject matter is innovative, it is best if the content is unconventional 😂😂 Otherwise, it will give people the impression that they are trying to sell dog meat with sheep's heads. That would be worse than simply traveling through time. emmmm, that's all I have to say, just look at it with a smile. Although I haven't signed a contract, I'd better go for it. If you really like the story you wrote, just write it for yourself and not for others. If you want to be able to sign contracts yourself, you can look at better signing topics and compare them with yourself to see where you are lacking and where you are better than them. Okay, that's really all, come on, little sister! (Asking secretly, the young lady should be around 20, right? 😌😌😌)

The plot alone is very attractive. This is an author with a story. His writing is skillful and the plot is natural. If you like to travel quickly, please read it.

The idea is wonderful, and the overall framework is pretty good. It would be even better if more details were done. Try not to have too much dialogue, otherwise the article will look a bit scattered. Overall, it's really good-looking and attractive, and it's a well-written masterpiece 👍 (only personal recommendation)

A good book I discovered accidentally, I have been following it silently, cheers to the author 🌹

I've signed a contract, I'm so excited, I'll change the cover to show off🥳🥳

I want to know if anyone is really watching 😭 I... I have no confidence...😭

I changed the cover again🤭 The previous one was too ugly, so I changed it to a better-looking one!

Good book, good book, highly recommended, big applause to the author👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

I really like the character setting of this book, it is very unique and the plot is interesting. Come on💪keep updating! ! ! !

Come on, the author. It's a very good book. The plot could be more in-depth and sublimated. Come on!

From the introduction, we can know that this ghost is destined to Jiang Ci. It can be known from the fantasy that the heroine is a heroine It can be known from the romance that this abyss (ghost) will be pushed. It can be known from the mission that the heroine will be reincarnated It can be known from the underworld that there are immortals and gods here It can be known from the ancient world that this worldview has multiple worlds. So—Nv Xia = the male protagonist is a victim                                                  Bai Qian Shangshen By the same token, what I wrote is the truth 😀

I just found out today that I signed the contract 😂😂😂 I only have 500 starting coins left, which is a little embarrassing 😳😳😳

The writing is good, and it will become smoother as it gets written. It would be better if the scene descriptions were more catchy and the rhythm was tighter 👍

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Watch it every day😁😁😁 The plot and characters are very good, I hope the writing will get better and better🥳🥳🥳

I have achieved 3,000 daily achievements, and I feel like I can be lazy now🤭