Zheng Ba Chunqiu

The first chapter was full of confusion and I had no interest in reading it. The first empress dowager in Chinese history was Empress Dowager Qin Xuan, and the titles of father and mother were only used after the Han Dynasty. They were usually addressed to father, mother, or adults. How can I continue reading like this? You still claim to have a good understanding of the history of the Spring and Autumn Period in the article, but you don't even understand the most basic terms. You are deceiving people 😅

Why do you write that the hero Zheng Zhuanggong looks like a fool?

Zhuang Gong is a posthumous title, which is given after death. Secondly, where did the time-travelers bring in the family affection? So fake.

"The writing is too naive, I don't understand why the protagonist is being pretentious in killing a common uncle?" This is a life-and-death battle for position. It's enough to put on a show on the surface, but in the end, the author actually shows real emotions in his writing?       ？ It was the public opinion of the country that affected the political hall, but directly taking Wu Jiang back would be equivalent to admitting that he had done wrong and the justice of Duan's rebellion. Those who had admonished him before were either ill-intentioned and deliberately stirred up trouble, or they were really stupid and couldn't speak because of their studies. When Yingzheng was replaced, they were directly chopped off. Uncle Yingkao and Mao Jiao were qualified politicians who knew the root of the problem, and together they co-directed a warm political show of "a loving mother and a filial son"

Seriously, you are not qualified to write this. In that era, if you were not ruthless enough to leave nothing behind, kindness to others would mean cruelty to yourself. What was the right way to behave? What is domineering?

Family love is so poisonous to me. You, a time traveler, talk about family love in all kinds of ways even within a year of traveling back. Let me ask you. Suddenly, a mother and son you don't know come to you and say they are your mother and brother. Then they do all kinds of things to ask you for money and a house. Would you talk about family love in the same way? If you were a baby in time travel and lived together for more than ten years, it would be reasonable to talk about family affection. If your family affection is so sudden, it is too fake to tolerate the other person doing this.

Great God, "Tang Sheng Chun Qiu" is here to gain popularity, please improve it and recommend it!

Convinced, how old was I in my previous life? Then I traveled through time and my brother wanted to harm me, but I still protected him. Modern people are not so stupid, right? 🙂

Don't use Zheng Zhuanggong instead of the protagonist's name. It's better to use his first name. How can anyone use a number?

Yes, I guess you will soon be short of site, but some words must match the identity, such as referring to territory as a fiefdom. The other thing is to write down the emotions of the characters. The emotions will be less monotonous.

The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth. The author needs to calm down for a while. It is really difficult to have a sense of empathy.

The decline of Zheng State was actually due to the same predicament as Lu State. The state affairs were controlled by the official office and had no ability to expand outwards.

The title of the book is fine, but the introduction doesn't play a role. I thought it was a historical drama, but when I saw a young man, I immediately felt a sense of immortality and time travel. Forehead? Was it time travel? But this subject is not suitable for time travel. The beginning is a bit bland, and the dialogue between Yisheng and his mother is even blander. Later, the descriptions used to advance the plot are even more bland. There are only a few historical allusions about Zheng Zhuanggong. They should be well organized and add some conflict, suspense and fiction. The most important thing is to make the story vivid and the plot attractive.

Is this the end? ? A novel has 93 chapters in total? ? ?

There are so many classical Chinese texts in "Being the King of the Western Jin Dynasty" that I can't understand them at all. So I think it's fine as long as it's not too modern. To my parents, this is a question of address.

This is a novel based on history. Why are you reading your book after it is reenacted? No wonder you are a eunuch.