The Last Part of Lao Ma's Life

This is my first book review for you I read the first three, and it can be summed up as "bringing the old horse home". I feel that this one incident alone has 10,000 words. Although excessive descriptions improve the literary nature, they also increase the difficulty of reading. It is difficult for readers like me to calm down and read carefully, but I will definitely find readers who like it. Some dialogues are unnecessary, such as the introduction of tobacco poles, which have no effect on promoting the development of the article. They are just a corner of life. When I read the introduction, this book should be one of twists and turns. This is the highlight and what most readers like. It's not easy to review a book for the first time, so feel free to point out any mistakes.

The writing is great, and the writing is beyond the control of ordinary writing skills. The strong writing style is mixed with the smell of earth. The author should have sufficient life experience.

I just read a little bit, and it feels like it's still broad enough. However, the author's writing style and content make me feel like I'm reading a literary novel from a publishing house, which is not suitable for a commercial online writing platform like Qidian. .

[This is a long review from a newcomer in the same field] I saw a lot of attention earlier, so I made a return visit out of curiosity. Attracted by the top comments, I clicked on the novel. I just saw the title of the book "Lao Ma's Last Life". To be honest, my first reaction was that I had submitted it to the wrong category. Even though modern writing has changed over the years and is no longer limited to the categories of CEO articles and campus articles, I think this book may be more in line with the classification of reality than romance. In other words, this book actually does not conform to the general environment of online literature. It is more suitable for published readings. When writing this long review, I have been reading this book for more than five hours continuously, reading it word by word, and I have not caught up with the updated position. Da Da's writing style is very powerful, allowing me, a child who has lived in a big city since childhood, to understand the emotions of Lao Ma, an old farmer who has come through difficult times step by step. This is something I failed to realize even though I read many books in order to write an article. The last book that I admired so much was "The Golden Family" by Zhang Henshui. I saw that many people in the book review area are looking forward to the movie adaptation. I don't know what the big idea is, but I personally think that this book may be suitable for adapting into a sitcom like "Family with Children". However, the situation of this kind of production has not been very good in recent years, and good producers are not very willing to do such projects. Finally, I hope to see a physical hardcover version of this book one day. It would be even better if I am lucky enough to attend a big book signing. I also hope that I can learn from the great writing style. I really admire it. The text is confusing and the words do not convey the meaning, but I hope Haihan will do it!

Reality channel is really not easy. Most of the authors I came into contact with at the beginning were realistic. When I understand reality more, I want to try writing. 😊

Good luck to the author, the writing is really good. Maybe it's because the audience of realistic novels on the Internet is relatively small. This is probably going to be published. This kind of writing is really comfortable to read and makes people feel that it can be endlessly memorable. I don't want to read it once and finish it like other Internet fast food. Work hard! ! ! !

Shocked, a real-life writer actually writes a novel on a female channel 😂, so I can only vote for female recommendations

I'm a bookworm, I read all kinds of books! This is really a good book. I have read it for many years... To be honest, this is the best and most realistic book I have read in the past few years. Come on, author!

It's hard to write your own story, but come on, author.

In this market-oriented red ocean, it is full of connotations and life, and its philosophy is unique. This is the reason why I put it on the bookshelf in the first place. 🌹

I have been following this book for a long time. It is well written and I like it very much. Thank you so much for the author(ง •̀_•́)ง

Maybe I've read too much about time travel and rebirth, which has resulted in a lack of interest in reading the article. I recently read this article. There is no bloody blood, no daily battles with top-notch relatives, and no high-level top families. I feel that it is very close to life. It is really beautiful.

Support "Lao Ma's Last Life" and support Bai Daxia

Number two is in my permanent collection. Come on 🤝

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Your works are delicate and tranquil, they have withstood the wind and frost, and do not follow the current. They contain the customs of Chang'an and the wind of the South China Sea. They should be written by Mulan. I feel that you are both a teacher and a friend. I have nothing to offer as a gift. I write a song and hope to reach a higher level: The lights are dim and the night is still dark Two cities share the moon and are exquisite The south wind shines in the sky all night The cold stars in Xisai illuminate the poor words The moonlight is light, the frost and snow are in the sky The horse walks in the wilderness and smiles calmly The wind, flowers, snow and moon dial the harp Neon lights appear in the border town in the misty rain

Because the author paid attention to me, I read the novel out of curiosity... What the hell! Collected!

Bai Shilong is a very thoughtful writer. There is a bit of romance in the tradition, and words can really reflect an author's personality, gender, and age. When it is not easy to see through words, it means that the work has reached a high level. I don't want to give her a portrait, I just want to encourage her not to give up and stick to her own characteristics. This is an era when everyone can write novels, so the author's connotation of experience, skills, and character behind the words are his few advantages. Come on! Come on! Come on!

It's so awesome. It's still being serialized. Cheers for you.

Collected. I was strolling over to read the chapter reviews of "Poor Front" when I suddenly noticed the author's attention. I quickly returned to leave a trace... I found that the comment area also contained all kinds of wonderful things about life. The author said that he "writes the rest of his life with pen". These few words suddenly hit his heart, so blue and thin 🥺🥺🥺. . . Realism themes are relatively niche in online literature, and it is not easy to move forward. I hope the author will work hard and persevere, and become a god as soon as possible! 🌹🌹🌹

This book is so good, I feel like it shouldn't be here. I found the feeling I had before when I read a physical book and couldn't put it down.

Surrealist themes often make people think deeply when looking at them. Especially when people reach middle age, they may think more. About society, life, family, and life and death. Great writing! Very true! Works that are thought-provoking are good works. In my opinion, this is beyond the scope of online writing and is more like literature! Learn from the great ones!

Hello, Mr. Bai, I would like to give you my small vote. I wish you a happy New Year and may the sales of your works skyrocket.

How are you?

It's really not easy. How much effort and persistence it took to write a book. How many days and nights of hard work have finally come to fruition. Let's celebrate the completion. But for me, the road to the sea of ​​books has just begun, but there is one less person to travel with. Therefore, I am looking forward to Bai Daxia's new work, and I will wait for you on the road.

When will Master Bai come back?

Daxia Bai appears... Oh my god

Continue to support and never give up, come on, Mr. Bai💪

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In terms of writing, I would like to call you the strongest.