Return of the First Sword

After reading the first chapter, tell me your thoughts. The author's writing style is okay, there are no flaws in the writing, but the sentence of death of the ascendant has buried a big hole, which is quite attractive. Looking at the back, I found that it is the popular spiritual energy recovery + interstellar cultivation. The selection of materials is still very safe, but I feel a little uncomfortable when I see the occupation division. I cannot say it is poisonous or embarrassing, but to be honest, these are the occupational names of online games more than ten years ago. The author really should carefully plan the occupation settings in the book. What I want to say is relatively scattered, and there is no order. Just write whatever you want. Seeing that the protagonist revealed his life experience and was a bit involved in breaking off the engagement, I hope he can write some new ideas. Furthermore, even if he really wants to go the route of pretending to be cool, don't be too forceful. If readers read it too much, it will easily become poisonous if he writes about it. Also, don't apply the adjectives exclusive to Long Aotian such as hehe, wry smile, etc. In the novel to the protagonist. The beginning of this book is quite attractive. I hope I won't write about collapse or eunuchs, and I don't dare to set a flag. I wish the author a great sale!

It's too watery, a weapon refiner pretends to be slapped in the face for four or five chapters

This book seems familiar. I seem to have read a similar book, but it was Eunuch.