Traveling Through the World of Lin Zhengying

I thought it was good to be able to write more than 2 million words, but I didn't make it through even two chapters.

Today's authors have to set a certain level when writing books. Also divided into front, middle and late stages. It looked very awkward. There are also some words used that are very inconsistent with the background of the times.

New theme! New ideas! Don't be the same old movie! 😁! Go your own way!

Also, high realm does not necessarily mean high mana. Realm does not represent everything.

I don't know what to say. First of all, I felt like I had no beginning or end. I hope the author will reorganize the first few chapters. Otherwise I won't be able to watch it

The iron-clad Jiu Shu, the protagonist of Liu Shui

This is the protagonist who has been practicing for three years at the eighth level. I was so embarrassed. He was bullied like that by a kid 😤😤😤😤

What makes me most uncomfortable about this book is that every time Uncle Ninth calls the protagonist, he always calls him by his full name, "Zurich, Zurich" (for those who don't know, he thinks Su has passed away). When he calls his two apprentices, he calls him "Qiushui, Wencai." Imagine that when Lin Feihong calls his apprentices, instead of calling them "Ah Rong, Ah Kuan, Ah Qi", he calls them "Lin Shirong, Liang Kuan, Guijia Qi". Doesn't it feel weird?

There are pitfalls, there is a realm, but you are still afraid of ghosts, and there are no tricks.

Chapter 3: Dissuading people from retreating, a group of chaos Poisonous point 1: It is said that the protagonist will soon become a heavenly master, and his eyes were slightly surprised for a moment and then disappeared. Damn, you are the most talented earth master of the ancestors of Maoshan. It feels like breaking through a small realm, nothing extraordinary. Poison point two: The realms are divided again, but the realm of the protagonist is not clear in the first three chapters. I don't know if it is mentioned later. Poisonous point 3: As mentioned in the previous article, the protagonist quickly becomes a heavenly master. Once the plot is over, it is of no use at all when messing with the four-eyed customers. He feels like a mortal and inconsistent.

The author actually wrote that Uncle Jiu eats steak, be careful that Uncle Jiu takes you away.

Chapter 1 The design is not rigorous at all. The world of Uncle Jiu is considered to be the Republic of China, right? In troubled times, there are so many refugees who cannot afford food or a place to live. How could they just take in a stranger? Are you still being accepted as a closed disciple? The closed disciples are not ordinary disciples. They are those who want to pass on the mantle and support their master in old age. Don't they need to examine their qualifications and character?

There are many protagonists in Qidian who worship Uncle Ying as their disciples and embark on the path of monasticism, but why has no one written about Mao Xiaofang in Zombie Taoist Master 1 2? I feel like Mao Xiaofang should be the strongest among the zombie films made by Uncle Ying, right?

I just want to say that Mao Xiaofang's time is a bit confusing. Although the first and second parts are mentioned, in fact, he fights Cixi waiting in front, and Xuan Kui chases after him! After all, when we were fighting Cixi, the Beiyang government came out at that time, and when we were chasing Xuankui, the Anti-Japanese War had been over for a year...

I feel like the writing is very plain and the writing style is average, so I won't pursue it anymore.

The protagonist is so stupid, haven't you watched the movie and read the plot? The writing is so fake that I know the plot at one moment and not at the other.

What does Qiu Sheng mean by liking beautiful women? Shouldn't it be Qiu Sheng who likes female ghosts?😁

You're so bad, Uncle Jiu can't even beat a ghost, tsk tsk

This chapter is so cut off! Isn't this finished?

Are you kidding me? The author is a great person, at the peak of his skills, but he still can't deal with a ghost?

This book is full of sick sentences! Also, after reading dozens of chapters with the same name for the protagonist, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Where is Senior Sister Xia Yi? Why didn't it appear later?

The protagonist's name is hard to remember and hard to pronounce!

This book is still readable, and the plot is good. It's not like other books that have a little zombie plot and become immortals. I hope everyone can support the author. After all, it's not easy to write such a book.

Are you too useless? What does it say? Is that ghost the King of Ghosts?

The first story dissuaded many people and did not respect the original work. The reason why fan fiction is attractive is that it can be told directly without using your brain. The writing style is secondary, and changing the name is too much.

I've traveled through time and went to trick-or-treat like an idiot.

The same uncle Jiu, the familiar taste, the author is greatly encouraged

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The only novel about Uncle Jiu that travels through the zombie world of Uncle Jiu is interesting, the other novels are too toxic.