The Legend of Douluo's Evil Soul

Douluo is very childish, so he has to control his temper. If the plot is too shallow, he will be dismissed, and if the plot is too deep, it will not be consistent.

Thank you all for your opinions. I am glad to meet you in the comment area. I will read your opinions and I will try my best to correct them. Maybe this book will never be signed, but I won't give up on it as long as there is one reader. Come on＾0＾~

That's why I've been recommending you for so long. . . . . . . . . .

Sorry, I want to ask where the time is now after Douluo II.

Introduction: What is the barrier between humans and spirit beasts? How to level up without hunting soul beasts? Are you kidding me? ?

The character design has collapsed in many places. Although I don't know what character the author originally designed for the protagonist, I know that some places are too outrageous. Especially the part where Yuki Lianluo gives the soul bone. The protagonist is set to be a six-year-old child. No matter how strong he is, he cannot bear the humiliation. Some of the previous fights in the Spirit Transferring Tower look very weird and a bit childish. The character of Ikko Guang has changed too much. The shaping of the protagonist's martial soul is very inconsistent with the theme of the evil soul master. That's it again. The previous question is that the way the protagonist defeats others has nothing to do with his martial spirit. It's really confusing. Personally, I think the martial spirit is a bit useless. I hope the author can delete it a little bit after reading it. But to be honest, the creativity of this book is very interesting. Many ideas are quite novel. Seeing the descendants of people I am familiar with appear in this novel, it feels like an extension of the previous story. I am quite happy. It is a white jade with a slight flaw, but it is quite interesting.

Eliminate barriers? Solve the soul ring requirements first

Getting ready to harvest, I thought it was very fat 😆 It's a good article, but it's a pity 😢

Try not to use the narrative method of running accounts. It is better to be more concise and have good punctuation and segmentation. It will be better. The book is very interesting and has the inner truth that the author wants to express.

The first chapter of this novel catches the readers' attention, which is very in line with the current readers' appetite, and there are many interesting places in the novel.

I felt so embarrassed after reading the beginning.

Delete the introduction. It's embarrassing to watch. The dismissal index is quite high.

Preliminary 😁😁😁 Wish the author and book lovers a happy National Day