HP Dark Night Glory

The author's writing style should have a Western feel, and it also feels like a Japanese light novel narrative feel 😁. The author's words are very pictorial, and it is recommended to add some descriptions or psychological descriptions to expand readers' imagination 😄 Come on!

Let me write a long review after reading it~ For me, who has read the original work, the degree of restoration of Dark Night is really high. There is indeed a pure-blood aristocrat named Foley in Rowling's "Twenty-eight Pure-blood Families". The author is also very well-researched! But I was also very surprised that Foley had silver-white hair, but this can be regarded as a characteristic of the heroine! Also, Foley lives in seclusion in the Muggle world, and happens to live on the same street as Dursley. The heroine can be regarded as Harry's childhood sweetheart! It definitely added a bit of color to Harry's unhappy life. He was super happy to have such a girl by his side during his unfortunate childhood! Finally, come on, I'm optimistic about you~

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I like the character of Bertis very much. She may be just an ordinary pure blood, or an ordinary wizard. She is very ordinary and goes to school at Hogwarts... But she is so extraordinary. She is Foley, with unique silver-white hair, and she is Harry. The light is Draco's favorite, Blaise's heart's aspiration, and Theodore's sunshine... Bertis is a Slytherin, and her friendship with Gryffindor goes beyond the academy. She is very similar to Lily Evans, Harry's mother, you ask me why? Because Lily also has a friend in Slytherin, and their friendship has almost risen to love. Yes, it is Professor Snape. He loves Lily. He did Mission Impossible for Lily. His patronus is the same as Lily. This is a sign of deep love for someone. I love the story of Harry Potter and the story of Dark Night. I believe Bertis will create her own miracle!

Come on, come on 🤓

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The writing style is good and the ability to control words is very strong. Indeed, as some reviews said, the writing style is very similar to Western novels, and it should be based on some experience. The characterization is good, but the story cannot be said to be successful, and it is a bit not deep enough. It has a sense of painting, but the oil painting that should have been thick and colorful now feels like a light pencil drawing. Given the author's writing skills, there shouldn't be any typos or punctuation errors that shouldn't be made. It is recommended that you proofread it carefully before posting. 😊 I moved it here as instructed. I wish the author good luck in coding! 🙂

Well written, keep up the good work and keep an eye on you.

Added to bookshelf. Self-recommended "Mysterious Engineer". The author can take a look.

Received, thank you to the author!

I am so envious of female channels, I really can't write about them. Write well, come on.

Collected, get rich starting from the coloring game and return visit

Collected it, thank you to the author

Here comes the copyright seeker. Ahem, I'm Luo Lin. Open the door and check the water meter.

The writing is good, support the collection.