Lord of the Nation Summons Thousands of Armies

Can you update it three times a day? It's not enough to read. The student party has no money to reward, but I only read the genuine version.

What should I do if I don't like Buddhism? I hate those Buddhas and Buddhas so much

I couldn't stand it after seeing thirty-five pictures The author's writing is very good, very good But the heroine's name is a bit... My best friend is also called Li Zihan The more I read, the more awkward I feel and I want to cry The book is so good, but I'm afraid I won't be able to look at him directly if I continue reading 😰

Come on 🙂, a few suggestions: 1. The character of the protagonist should be more clear, just like a brother who betrays should be killed, his parents can support him and don't make any distinction between black and white, and be more thorough if he wants to be black. 2. The emotional line is too poorly written. It was okay at the beginning, but then after being rescued, the emotion was expressed in one sentence. It doesn't work. I suggest you revise it. A good emotional line can complete the protagonist and the female supporting or heroine. Also, the female supporting character who fights when they meet seems a bit omitted. She was chasing after each other before meeting the monk? You should also write the foreshadowing at the right time Overall, it is good. I hope the author can improve the minor flaws.

The writing is pretty good, but it's too watery.

Well, the writing is really like a perfect world, but it also has a bit of my own style. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you😜)

There is Zhao Zilong from Shijiazhuang in the White Horse Army.

If you don't add more, send the blade, add more finesse, and alert the young ladies.

It was quite boring at first, but then it got a bit interesting. It can be seen that the author is indeed making progress. Come on.

Quan Ding, author, why don't you refine and update it?

Where righteousness comes, life and death follow! The sky is a guide, and the white horse is the proof!

I'll give you all the money, and it'll be even better if you add more.

The ambition to be trapped is to advance but never to retreat. The heart of being trapped is born towards death.

Are there any junk eunuch books that can be recommended now? They are all completed with hundreds of thousands of words.

I would like to have extra sperm, is that possible?

Rigorous articles can last a long time. After all, simple articles and cool articles will not achieve much results, so I suggest the author to have fewer narrations in the article, less comedy, and less old routines. Your definition is in the dynasty hegemony style. Too many inner narrations are too distracting. There is also the issue of your emotional drama. I don't know if you are a harem novel. If so, I won't say anything about your ambiguity. If not, doesn't it make people feel funny when you write like this? The first chapter was written so innocently, so I started to write this kind of confusing and ambiguous plot in the next few chapters. If there is a single female protagonist, it should not be silly and sweet. Such a character has no soul. Since it is a dynasty competition, then write more wars, talents, strategies, etc. If the emotional drama is not good, it is better to make it happen when needed. Arrange a sect or family with a strong background for the female protagonist, and let her come out to help the male protagonist when needed in the later stage. There are too few items in the altar. It is suggested that the five-color altar, divided into five colors, be divided into five blocks, five functions, and five ways to open it. Wouldn't it be better, such as the existing reputation, the future source of faith, the Heavenly Dragon of Merit (divided into heavenly merits, humane merits), the sea of luck, the killing blood pool, etc. This would be more macroscopic, and in reality, the dynasty is not a fool. It is impossible to force these lords to enter the state agencies. After all, their hearts are not here. , If it comes at a critical moment, it will explode and output. The country does not lack wise men, so in this environment of global mutation, there is no need to push the genius of your country out, so you must change this problem later. There is also the army in reality. Since it is a personal lord, wouldn't it be good for the national leader to directly gather the people of the army? Even if a soldier only rules three thousand people, millions of soldiers are hundreds of millions of residents. Are you afraid that there will be no rising geniuses? There is no shortage of geniuses in the world, and there is no shortage of adventures in the world. So what do the people of the country have to fear? It's not until the end. What you wrote is a bit embarrassing. There is also the issue of the cultivation system. You only have one martial art now, but there is also the prehistoric civilization Qin Dynasty in reality. So the cultivation systems such as the Qi Refiners of the Qin Dynasty should also exist in the False God Realm, right? There are too many scribes, soldiers, and hundreds of schools of thought. After all, this is a mythical novel. At least it should be a standout after a hundred flowers bloom. I suggest that you focus on martial arts and mix it with other systems. This way you can read it and have the potential of a divine book. If you can't master it and it's easy to write, then write less about other systems. Well, I will add more later if I have any questions. I'm going to eat.

Chapter 40 or so is so annoying. Don't focus on describing the heroine in a hegemony article. How many chapters have you written about a woman? It's so annoying. I always read it when I see the heroine.

The rhythm of torturing the master is about to start again, and it was the same in the last book. Someone discovered the real world, and then started to torture, tortured, and finally entered the palace.

A common problem in many rebirth books is that after rebirth, the mind is still like a child, like a young man, without the composure, sophistication, and maturity that it should have. Maybe many of the authors are very young themselves, and cannot understand and write about the maturity and life experience that middle-aged people or even old people should have. Some want to embody it, but after writing, it becomes pure pretense, which makes some plots embarrassing and awkward.

I really can't understand the real plot! ←_←

This author is so funny and your grades are not bad, but you are just a eunuch. Can you live up to your grades? Those authors whose grades are much worse than yours keep writing as long as someone reads them. Although the updates are slow, others just write as a hobby and to live up to the readers who send rewards. You are just making a lot of money and then opening another small account to write new works. I have seen too many

This is a scam book, it's already a eunuch

The protagonist is *****? He doesn't care what happens to his brother. I keep making people collapse and still say I know. Just like what Li Junyi said, Wang Zixi never regarded him as his brother. Li Junyi's mother even issued a death notice, and she was tortured without betraying Wang Zixi, but what did Wang Zixi do? He doesn't even trust his own brothers and only values ​​himself, and he even said that he will be his enemy from now on. If you ask me to leave, it is better to leave. If you are with the protagonist, you will die because of the protagonist sooner or later. It is better to leave.

I couldn't hold on until Chapter 44. To be honest, adding a heroine forcibly disgusted the readers, and now I added a best friend as a father and I couldn't hold on anymore. The subject matter is very good, but the author doesn't know if he wrote it like this on purpose to disgust the readers.

Which master will continue to writeone

It's almost the same. The protagonist never trains with peace of mind, but is still reborn. The protagonist Goldfinger is still a waste. What else is he thinking? Is this interesting to watch?

I just want to say that the protagonist is really useless

Does the author have any other books? I support

The creativity of the book is good, but some of the rhythm is not grasped well. Hey, it is really a pity that you don't update it now.

The new book makes an additional mistake. The area of ​​a semicircle of eight thousand meters is thirteen thousand square meters. This mathematics is simple. I didn't expect this author to permanently ban me. I really deserve to be thrown into the street. He didn't even bother to check for errors and still banned me.