Purana

In fact, I discovered this article by chance~ After clicking it, I first felt that the author's writing style was very comfortable. It can be seen that he has a certain accumulation of experience. It is not straightforward and boring. On the contrary, it will entice people to continue reading. Let's talk about the plot. In fact, when I watched it for the first time, I felt like I was swallowing everything. I didn't pay too much attention to it, but the further I read, I felt like there was something hidden. After re-reading it, I found that there are a lot of foreshadowings buried in it. It needs to be carefully considered and connected by oneself. This is another highlight of this article. Talking about the characters, the heroine Jiang Sixeng is not a traditional silly sweet person, nor is she a born strong person. She is a character who has gradually grown up like ordinary people, and will be more realistic. Next, let's talk about my most favorite male protagonist Su You. He has many identities and different sides, all different, but they are all very attractive. Although he does not have too many scenes now, he is also very popular! Although I haven't written much now, I still like the author for his great efforts (｡ò ∀ ó｡) and hope that he will work harder and persevere for more! ! ! 😜

[Vicious Tongue Book Review] I am an unusually poisonous tongue, so I ask the author to be very prepared. 1. First impression A serious book title, I'd give it a six out of ten. There are no disadvantages and no advantages. The cover... I won't say much more, just go check out my previous post for cover analysis. 2. Introduction I think the introduction can be more streamlined. The previous paragraph "Do you believe in ghosts and gods..." Does not have much practical significance. When writing an introduction for a newcomer, I strongly recommend the introduction to the theatrical version. Refer to the introductions of "The Immortal of the World" and "Senben Junliang" 3. The first three chapters Let's talk about the wedge first. The suspense is well set up and arouses the reader's curiosity. It feels like Ning also has a humorous style, and Xianxia is very suitable for this style. But being cheerful and humorous does not mean that you are a novice. Ning is a fairy after all, and I personally think that the words used should be more sophisticated to avoid being too modern. Ning's writing has a strong sense of substitution, but the artistic conception is lacking. Environment rendering is zero, could use a little more. In addition, Ning's punctuation and paragraphing have quite a few problems. In one paragraph, the character pauses and speaks twice, so why can't Ning divide it into two paragraphs? If you want to express compactness of speech, you can occasionally use it a few times, but most of them are like this, which makes Ning's paragraphs look tired and messy 4. Writing Unconsciousness is due to insufficient rendering, and writing can be practiced. [Taken together, Ning's writing style is acceptable. The humorous style is very popular, but I would rather read more articles to make my ability to throw out jokes stronger. The author please hold back your venomous tongue and hit me hard. ——Cheng Yici

Author, I love your writing so much! The writing style is superb! Bixinxin(੭ु›ω‹)੭ु⁾⁾♡～

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I will just stop updating, not abandon updating. Dear readers, can you love me a little less briefly 😢 Just leave me a comment after reading it, I love you!

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Thank you Little Angel Zuiluo Xifeng L for voting for me! ! ! And all the cuties who have been paying attention to "The Purana"! ! ! Love you all Niannian has been busy recently, she has been taking online classes, and school is about to start 😭, so there are few updated chapters. I have been optimizing and catching bugs in previous chapters. I hope that if you have any ideas about the characters, plots, stories... You can leave more messages in the comment area~~

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