Seven Dreams of Shaohua

You can support me😊. But I still finished reading it in 20 minutes😊. The author must have a compulsory education degree (don't ask me how I know this). Several poems in the article are well written, really good, with rigorous structure, far-reaching artistic conception, and concise writing style. The writing is like flowing clouds and flowing water, making people feel like drinking nectar, like bathing in the spring breeze, and will never forget it for a long time (this paragraph is copied). However, the plot is rather clichéd, and the changes to historical and legendary characters are unreasonable, but (yes, two "buts") the author is very good at absorbing life experience and integrating certain things in life into the article. If there are very few people who read this book and my comments, I can say that the biggest reason is that the number of words is too small, and the short stories are barely enough. They can only be super short novels. It is impossible for the author to be very productive in recent years. Therefore, it is recommended that authors "sharpen a sword for ten years" and write more. As long as you write more words and have some writing skills, there will be many people who will read it. 🤓 Finally, I wish the author to study harder in the non-compulsory education stage, hone his writing, imagination, and poetry (the writing is really good). I wish you success✌️

The author's novel has a good story👍. There is insufficient characterization, and there is little psychological description due to space limitations. There is very little foreshadowing for the occurrence of each event, and the reading is a bit abrupt (it's really uncomfortable🌚). But these shortcomings are combined with the title "Dream", which makes sense if you savor it carefully (forced remedy 🌝). Regardless of the story, the author's writing style is still good, and the poems are also very dreamy. I hope the author will make progress as he grows🙃

Seven different short stories, seven different lives, the plot is somewhat innovative, the article has a lot of charm, and there are many things to like, but I hope the author pays more attention to the natural plot and the deep shaping of the characters. In short, come on, Xiao Mo, and look forward to the next work

I found you 😂, your writing is good, I'm waiting for your next work ✌️

I found you, your writing is good,