"If the world fails me, what will you do?"
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[Book Review Group•Shen Pinglou] "Jun Si Nan Xi" is a storm in the court, let's see if the author can control it
Book title: "Jun Si Nanxi"
Author: Bo Nanxi
Work link:
Commentator: If not a little bit pink
Introduction:
Today's holy emperor is not in good health, he favors noble concubines, and the prince has not yet matured. Some people are loyal and direct, some people are blindfolded, and some people have evil intentions and plot big things, trying to fish in troubled waters for the greatest benefit. In this golden scale pool, who is the final winner? Who is the most carefree one?
Book review:
The writing method at the beginning was like a TV series, with one chapter and one scene, and it was impossible to tell which character was the protagonist. However, when writing like this, you need to create an exciting point in each scene so that readers can keep reading, otherwise it will be like a running account. I recently watched "The Princess Married", and I personally felt like it was a bit funny and forced, but the addition of some rhyming lines and an allegro-like summary of the "Jin family spirit" will make people smile. Then I watched Gongshenshu (๑><๑) again. The feeling is similar to this book. The situation in the palace is treacherous. If you don't use harsh punishments and laws to highlight the etiquette, and don't use strong flattery and contempt to depict the characters, it would be difficult to write about the affairs of the court. Maybe this exaggeration is not true, but literature needs to bring out this mentality so that the audience can get it. Because chess spectators do not have the layout vision of chess players, how to lay out this position so that people can understand and figure it out requires more effort. I like hope Xing's "Jiao Niang Medical Classic" better. In other words, the author can try to create a character like Wang Xifeng, who has his own strong personality and taste in language as soon as he speaks, and has his own unique hobbies in dressing up: for example, the prince of a certain family likes to wear mint and smelly face, and the prince of a certain family wears a short beard, which will make the audience remember that supporting roles are a sense of accomplishment. It is recommended that more characters be added to the characters in the subsequent plot. Nowadays, plot singers are just skimming the show, how can they show up in detail later, and how can they make a foreshadowing now to make this company support this? What is the reason, what are the interests and favors? To keep the plot going, to connect the characters, the whole book will be enough.
Congratulations on signing the contract! 👍👍
This book will continue to be updated. A chapter is about 2,700 to 3,000 words. It will be updated every morning (if nothing unexpected happens). If you like it, just read it. If you have any opinions, just say it. I will definitely consider adopting it. Thank you again for your support. After all, this is the first work. There must be some imperfections. Please be patient.
Thank you all for your votes, reading, and comments
I will continue to work hard
Come on, junior, come and occupy a building (´-ω-`)
This article makes people feel very good. The author's writing style is very good, the words are gorgeous, and he has a majestic momentum. He is worthy of being the favorite student of the Chinese teacher. Keep up the good work and wait for the next chapter.
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Introduction, atmosphere!
The writing style is exquisite!
The plot is reasonable!
Chapter becomes a poem!
Author, put your heart into it!
Looking forward to updates!
[Book Review Group•Shen Pinglou] "Jun Si Nan Xi" is a storm in the court, let's see if the author can control it
Book title: "Jun Si Nanxi" Author: Bo Nanxi Work link: Commentator: If not a little bit pink Introduction: Today's holy emperor is not in good health, he favors noble concubines, and the prince has not yet matured. Some people are loyal and direct, some people are blindfolded, and some people have evil intentions and plot big things, trying to fish in troubled waters for the greatest benefit. In this golden scale pool, who is the final winner? Who is the most carefree one? Book review: The writing method at the beginning was like a TV series, with one chapter and one scene, and it was impossible to tell which character was the protagonist. However, when writing like this, you need to create an exciting point in each scene so that readers can keep reading, otherwise it will be like a running account. I recently watched "The Princess Married", and I personally felt like it was a bit funny and forced, but the addition of some rhyming lines and an allegro-like summary of the "Jin family spirit" will make people smile. Then I watched Gongshenshu (๑><๑) again. The feeling is similar to this book. The situation in the palace is treacherous. If you don't use harsh punishments and laws to highlight the etiquette, and don't use strong flattery and contempt to depict the characters, it would be difficult to write about the affairs of the court. Maybe this exaggeration is not true, but literature needs to bring out this mentality so that the audience can get it. Because chess spectators do not have the layout vision of chess players, how to lay out this position so that people can understand and figure it out requires more effort. I like hope Xing's "Jiao Niang Medical Classic" better. In other words, the author can try to create a character like Wang Xifeng, who has his own strong personality and taste in language as soon as he speaks, and has his own unique hobbies in dressing up: for example, the prince of a certain family likes to wear mint and smelly face, and the prince of a certain family wears a short beard, which will make the audience remember that supporting roles are a sense of accomplishment. It is recommended that more characters be added to the characters in the subsequent plot. Nowadays, plot singers are just skimming the show, how can they show up in detail later, and how can they make a foreshadowing now to make this company support this? What is the reason, what are the interests and favors? To keep the plot going, to connect the characters, the whole book will be enough.
Congratulations on signing the contract! 👍👍
This book will continue to be updated. A chapter is about 2,700 to 3,000 words. It will be updated every morning (if nothing unexpected happens). If you like it, just read it. If you have any opinions, just say it. I will definitely consider adopting it. Thank you again for your support. After all, this is the first work. There must be some imperfections. Please be patient.
Thank you all for your votes, reading, and comments I will continue to work hard
Come on, junior, come and occupy a building (´-ω-`)
This article makes people feel very good. The author's writing style is very good, the words are gorgeous, and he has a majestic momentum. He is worthy of being the favorite student of the Chinese teacher. Keep up the good work and wait for the next chapter.
🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 Introduction, atmosphere! The writing style is exquisite! The plot is reasonable! Chapter becomes a poem! Author, put your heart into it! Looking forward to updates!