Heavy Gold Armor

The setting and opening scenes are good, but the writing style is a big problem. Of course, it may just be my personal opinion. It's just my cousin, that so-called genius' hostility is too abrupt. Would a genius who is famous all over the dungeon lack a pass? This is just one scene, but I have a feeling you'll be writing about plots like this often. Summary: Going to do something The villain pops out to stop The girl comes out to protect Bet with the other party Shock everyone's attention The whole process should be fully interspersed with the dialogue of passers-by. Reference content of the dialogue: Isn't that...? ! I heard...! As expected... What? ! Actually... Brother, if we had written this kind of thing ten years ago, we might have been able to catch the wind of the great masters. But that's really not possible now, unless you are someone like Tang San who has been famous for a long time. Or I think you could lower the temperature a bit to make it more natural and less awkward. I actually want to write about it, but I dare not do it. You can write this kind of results for so long. Your perseverance is admirable. It must be due to your amateur interest. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Why do you always write about the bottom class? How many years have these novels been written?

1.31 Million words, 481 recommendation votes, the author also has perseverance

Is this book so low-key😰😰😰

There are over 1,000 chapters, no one reads it?

Introduction: The most powerful 🙂

If any of you saw this, please help me step on the thunder.