Hang up Great Immortal

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, she moved a small bench and sat down. She brought her own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book~

Brother, are you just playing and want to cultivate yourself? Or a cultivation simulator?

Are you playing Xuanyuan Sword Immortal (˘•ω•˘)

The beginning of this kind of plot is extremely poisonous, almost like feeding. This kind of plot is the same as in other novels, where some great master or mastermind pops up before the story begins. For example, you are playing a game, and the server has just been launched, and the rankings have come out. When you look at it, you will see that some people are still at full level, wearing magical costumes, and are still alive. You are the only one working hard to upgrade and improve your appearance. Then someone gives you something, and you are so happy that you think it is a golden finger. As soon as the spiritual energy began to recover, people all over the world became immortals, even ants. You should be the protagonist, so you are still an ordinary person and you have to upgrade slowly. You said that as soon as the plot of your novel started to develop, the ceiling was exposed directly. Who is in the mood to read it? There is absolutely no pleasure in upgrading. It is not popular now. The system is smart. If it is not popular, someone will give you a cheat. Keep it simple and direct. If you write more, you will make more mistakes.

It is wonderfully written, allowing people to enter the situation, and it is interconnected and logical thinking is appropriate.

I can't stand it anymore, so let's briefly summarize the problem Although everyone knows that there must be no good things happening around the protagonist, the author has gone too far. The novice village has not left yet, and the sect has been wiped out. The whole state has been wiped out, and it will be the same later. Although it is not so exaggerated, there are heavy casualties. The protagonist is a misfortune, but he is not called Tiansha Lone Star, okay? Secondly, the character design The problem is, the aborigines and time travel are never mentioned. It looks like time travel, but when it comes to stupidity, it is no different from the aborigines. I read 140+ chapters without saying it. If it weren't for the book shortage, I would have given up without mentioning it in three chapters In the end, I like the subject matter very much, but the author wants to break away from the system. As a result, the golden finger of the main plot has no sense of existence, and always pops up at critical moments to disgust people. I just read a fantasy novel and am I so tired? Others are nothing compared to

It's okay😄, come on, it's been collected

Reserve a floor in advance. Come on!

I hope there won't be any interruptions 😄

Very interesting. I like you, the author.

😁😁😁😄😄

Come and visit, Shui Gequn.

I wrote 1 million words, but not 100 people were reading it. . What a perseverance

The writing is rubbish, Mo Yan can't save it. It's a good YY theme, but there is no pleasure in writing. The whole process is torturing the main character. The whole family dies first, then the whole sect. The system has no sense of existence at all, and the protagonists are even missing in many places. The novel about cultivating immortals has only reached the second level of Qi training after dozens of chapters. It is not hooked up to the system, nor is it cultivated. It is the result of being tortured. What kind of bullshit is written.

I was persuaded to leave after the first few pictures. I came here to read the novel, not to see you reason.

The whole world wants to kill the protagonist series.

The first one was dismissed. I watched the meat-suited mage and was looking for some idle articles 😭, but unfortunately there was no one I could read! Since you are writing a system, don't mess with what anyone gave you. Very discouraged!

The number one fan is mine and no one can take it away from me!

I will become a god with one million dollars. My next book will become a god. Congratulations. Congratulations٩(๑òωó๑)۶

The plot before going down the 10,000-meter pit was good, but after going down the pit, it felt like it was a different book.

Written by the boss of Xuanyuan Sword Immortal District 38 Mobai, the younger brother of the True Immortal in District 48

What the hell Chapter 1. . Looks so awkward

If the hole is too big, especially the flowers in the first few chapters, even if the subsequent writing is good, it will not attract people. I suggest that you don't need to be too pretentious and dig too big a hole in the early stage.

If you have played Xuanyuan Sword Immortal, you may want to check it out 😁😁

Horrible! ! He actually had the courage to write a million words! ! ! It's a pity that this kind of book was great 15 years ago 😁😁because I was still a primary school student at that time

This writing is an old cliché. If you read the first few chapters, you will know what the plot is going to be, and there is no point in quitting it.

How dare a gangster? Even if it is a rubbish sect, so many people are looking at blackmail and want to take away things that are part of the sect's mission. What is the identity of the old man? How could it be possible if he was just a gangster. To put it harshly, even if you kill him, you won't be able to get a p out. Why would a handyman blatantly hang around with a storage bag? Do you want to die?

Alas, I have read other gold finger articles about automatic idle cultivation, and I can tell the difference when comparing them with this book. The single idle function of their gold finger is very awesome, but the so many functions in this book are simply superfluous. The protagonist of gold finger with so many functions is still so useless, which makes me feel frustrated.

Can't I post pictures as well?