Shura Dragon God of Douluo

The writing is quite good, but please note that Ning Rongrong is only six years old, unless she is also a time traveler... But, how is that possible ()

The writing is great and I like it very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard. It has been collected and invested.

The writing needs to be improved, it's a bit too white, the plot advances too quickly and the writing is a bit rough in most places.

He just gave away his special skills as soon as they met... Tang Xiaosan had such a good relationship with the Six Monsters that he didn't dare to teach them Xuantian Baolu, and no one would doubt him if he showed such a bad skill.

Writing Douluo doesn't necessarily require Shrek. It may feel too closely related to the original work, which makes it uninteresting and has no desire to read it. It needs to have its own characteristics. ,ψ(⃔ ๑⃙⃘ 'ω' ๑⃙⃘ )⃕↝♡︎ʾʾ

There are too many flaws. In Chapter 11, the protagonist used two ropes to take away the two pills of ice and fire? After eating, you jumped into the spring to fight poison with poison to absorb the power of the medicine. In the original book, Tang San almost died there for these two medicines. Not even a titled Douluo could stay in those two springs for long, so you still jumped in? ? ?

Can the author stop making the heroine so artificial and speak more normally? Why does she look so coquettish at all times? Is it because she doesn't have the plot of the original Shrek? She still has a bad temper... It looks disgusting.

I know that many authors write novels, and one of their favorite things is to open their minds and fill in whatever they think of. Just like the soul skills you are writing now, without considering the later development, you can think back to Tang San's soul skills, entanglement, parasitism, spider web restraint, blue silver cage, and blue silver overlord gun. You see, in the early stage, he completely followed his own control system, and only added attack methods later. As for the soul skills of the subsequent soul beasts, if you look at the direct violence of his Clear Sky Hammer, the attack method only adds a slight defensive soul skill, and the only elemental bonus comes from the Titan Giant Ape's second soul skill of 100,000 years, the power of the earth. Think about your Seven Killing Sword. I hope to think more about soul skills later on.

If he passes his kung fu to others, doesn't it pass down the family line? I'm convinced.

Haha, just because you have watched Douluo Dalu, you just casually pass on your magical skills to others? You have to know that a book is a book, reality is reality, and people's hearts in real life are not the same as in the book. Tang San and the Seven Monsters are so good but they didn't pass them on. It would be a good idea for you to pass on the magic power to others the first time you meet... Haha.

Everyone in the original work has improved so much, and Tang San is now level thirty-seven! Does the protagonist have any advantages?

After reading Chapter 9, I want to complain about the author who is too casual about the protagonist being beaten to death by a group of people at the beginning. Sometimes I thought he was an old man who gave away cheats as soon as we met. The two lives combined are almost forty, and I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not taken into consideration. I'm done complaining

As soon as I saw the Dragon God, I thought of Gu Yuena😅😅. Whether or not I accept Gu Yuena is all related to the dragon, so accept it😏

The writing is very good, very good, but maybe my level of appreciation is not up to that level yet! I really can't appreciate it! What a pain! I'm so sad that I can't stand such a wonderful novel. Alas! I can only leave with tears in my eyes

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. He didn't look like an evil boss at all. I gave the protagonist a good guy card.

Author, please stop writing, don't come out to disgust people, don't post it after you finish it, keep it for yourself to enjoy

It's poisonous and gives away the skills indiscriminately to seize opportunities.

I suddenly discovered why 99% of Douluo fandoms have to write that the protagonist is a weapon soul? Some people also use the beast spirit as a weapon spirit. For example, the book about Yu Xiaogang who traveled through time (of course I haven't finished reading this book, but I stopped reading it after seeing that the protagonist's martial spirit could not be possessed. If there are any discrepancies later. Sorry 😊) I think the beast martial spirit is quite good. The protagonists of the Douluo series are all beasts with martial spirits. 😃

It's so disgusting to write, just teach the exercises casually