The Lost Traces of the Clear Sea

Please comment, I would like to know where it falls short.

Waiting for updates, good books need to be fattened up before reading to make them good.

Cheers to the author, the writing is very good (✪▽✪)! Looking forward to

It looks good, but there are too few updates! Hurry up! Hurry up!

First, there are too many exclamation points. I suggest you learn mystery and aura. I am playing on a private server. Second, don't write out the outline. You can write a prologue Third, you are not persistent. No matter how bad the first book is, you still have to write 200,000 words Fourth, you must learn to follow the trend. What others say may not be right, but practice determines everything.