Professional Practitioner

Whether the writing is good or not depends on persistence. There will definitely not be many people who will read it after three or four hundred chapters. As long as it is good at eight or nine hundred chapters, there will be people who will read it. If it is updated with thousands of chapters, more and more people will continue to read it. Come on, come on.

I threw it away when I saw the part about Shi Shaojian's apprenticeship. Did you mention becoming a disciple when we first met? ? ?

A great monk at the Golden Core Stage is still just a dwarf, but you, a novice, have only been cultivating for how long and how long have you grown?

The writing is very good, the writing is smooth, the logic is smooth, and there are no poisonous points yet. Come on, don't collapse.

Let me tell you what I think about your book. I just started reading, and I feel like it's okay. I don't know why, but sometimes I just feel less and less like reading it, until I see almost 100 pictures and I really can't stand it anymore. No, I don't know what it feels like. I don't want to watch it anymore.

To be honest, every time I see scenes that praise Qin Shihuang so hard, I feel bored. If Qin Shihuang is so powerful, then our great *** is not the Lord of the world. The parallel world used to be just an ordinary world, and the historical figures in the past were just ordinary people. What you are writing is not the return of ancient myths. It's better to write about the present as much as possible. Human beings are constantly moving forward. Modern times are definitely better than ancient times. This is obvious.

This kind of protagonist is really a white-eyed wolf. Whoever trains him is worse than raising a dog. He also deliberately found a disciple of the Eight Banners to lead the nominal master into evil, haha. I still think I don't teach you, because he's not your father, he owes you! !

Author, don't write about teaching people, and don't write about classmates, especially female classmates. Otherwise, even if what you write is not poisonous, it will give people the feeling of being poisoned.

Although it is not written explicitly, the aura of Long Aotian is revealed between the lines, brother, beauty, close relative, Nilin...

It was okay at first. What did you write in the middle? ? ? Can you decide on a theme?

Ang, first of all, I have watched the first copy. Although Shi Jian is more annoying in the movie version, I can still accept the behavior of the protagonist. But back to reality, what is the protagonist doing, fat man? Zangzhuo, vampire, netizen? Seeking Taoism Group? What is the protagonist doing, other than doing business? Fatty can barely accept it. Does vampire have anything to do with you? If you don't seize the time to upgrade, what are you doing? Now I really doubt whether the first copy was written by you. A person who can write that Shi Jian is arrogant and has a good face, and can humbly hold his breath to apprentice with a guy like Shi Xiaojian, will he use this kind of thing to disgust me when he returns to reality? Yes, to be precise, I think this is called character collapse!

When I wrote about the netizen type at the end, I felt very unhappy and felt like I had collapsed!

Does the author have no outline? It gets more and more confusing as it goes on, and I don't want to read it after less than a hundred chapters. Alas! Don't think about it, the collapse will be severe and uncomfortable later.

I really feel that there is too much water in this part of the game. Although I have ordered all the books, I just skipped and read them, consuming my enthusiasm and interest in this book. I hope it won't happen again in the future, otherwise I would really rather watch pirated copies.

After being tainted by the plot of the game, I had no feeling at all after reading it and wanted to delete the book.

570,000 Words. There is a reason why there are so few recommendation votes.

Goldfinger fails, the career fails, it's like a game and a cultivatorimmortal

Before I read a book, I like to read the number of book reviews. For example, this book has 300 chapters and only 96 posts. There is a high probability that it will not read.

There are too many forced settings at the beginning, including lifespan calculations, inexplicable crows, and then dark skills. It's too confusing...

The monthly vote has been cast. The protagonist's IQ is online. I quite like it... I don't like the map of "Fantasy Westward Journey" very much... I suggest you write less.

It's been a month and you still haven't come out? I'm still planning to raise it again, but it's been cut?

Are you the author of Wizard of the Void?

It's been so dull lately that I haven't been able to write about my passion for games.

Is it quarantined? I hope the author is safe and sound

It's not good if the little talisman is too perverted. Recently, I played 1.13 In an Internet cafe with my friends. It has a big backpack, HD patch and full screen. I also modified a mercenary file so that Uncle Mishan can do whirlwind and jump chop. The last is the small talisman, the most classic formula is: +7 all skills Increase mf Increase money Increase running/walking speed I think it is a little bit insufficient, my formula +7 (I am holy, other magic) +7 passive branch skill tree +7 all skills Add 63 levels of teleportation/acceleration Add mf, money and the same affix is and Level hook Increase running/walking Increase attack speed Increase chance of blocking Increase accuracy (forgot what the original word is called) Five dimensions Increase casting speed And the cutest thing, release the search item when killing All affixes have a small net amount, but they are still very strong, especially yesterday when two people saw us having fun, they also added a wolf druid, a bone spear and curse