I Have an Enhanced Device in Dou Po

As a reader, I first read the comment section. Many people asked whether they wanted a harem. Don't flirt casually if you don't have any emotional basis. It's too disrespectful to women. Dou Po Shi Shi allows three wives and four concubines. It is okay to have multiple female protagonists, but it is not allowed to accept girls without restraint. In many harem stories, if you accept them, their roles will be reduced or even eliminated. At most, they will be mentioned by name. Is the meaning of their existence just to be accepted by you? The heroines of the novel are not robots, nor are they tools. They also have feelings and their own lives, and they do not exist to completely serve the protagonist. So don't be cool just for the sake of being cool. I can accept a harem, but I don't want to see all the female protagonists being tools.

I think that for Dou Po, the heroine, the Little Medical Fairy, is pretty good. Medusa is good as the lover, but I don't think it's very good as the heroine. Xiao Xun'er won't say much, it's not good to steal the heroine, and it's uncomfortable to watch. As for Yun Yun, because of the villain of the Yunlan Sect, it's easy to fail. As for Ya Fei, I believe that most people don't like it either. Therefore, I think the best candidate for Dou Po fan fiction is the Little Medical Fairy as the heroine. Let me say it here. If you think what I said makes sense, give it a thumbs up. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Although I haven't read it, I think the author also knows that there are reasons why many books have been trolled. Of course, some minor trolls don't matter, as long as they don't go too far. After all, it's impossible for fans to copy all the originals and add them to the bookshelf. Then I hope the author will work harder to code. It's really not easy to code. I have tried it.

I am a newcomer to writing online novels. It is because of your support that I have the courage to continue writing. Thank you! I have tried to learn two books before, but I gave up after writing about 100,000 words. But I don't want to give up on this one. I will continue to write it regardless of whether anyone reads it or not. Updates are slow during this period. It can be said that there is no time, or it can be said that I am lazy. I get up at 6:30 in the morning, work until 7:30 in the evening, go home, and finish eating, which is almost around 9 o'clock. I spend some time washing up, etc., So there is less time left, and sometimes I don't want to code. Actually, I don't want to explain anything, but after seeing the data in the background, I feel sorry for not explaining it. I hope you can understand. When I wrote the third chapter some time ago, a staff member from China Literature asked me to sign a contract. However, I thought that I was not sure that I could update on time every day, so I did not sign a contract. This is quite a pity. I hope you will continue to support me and give me suggestions, thank you!

The most useless protagonist I have ever seen, he is a bit idiotic, mentally retarded and often a bit neurotic. Not only the protagonist, but most of the people are mentally retarded, and most of the people are brain-dead. The protagonist, a great fighter, has to chase a fighter for two or three streets before he can be killed or defeated. This is the most useless Taoist priest or the protagonist I have ever seen. How can I put it in my opinion? It is obvious that the strong is beating the weak and it is always unbeatable. It takes a long time to defeat someone. Not to mention that like other protagonists, you are challenged by transcending realms or being challenged by several classes or being invincible at the same level. I just want you to be an ordinary protagonist or an ordinary person, and you can easily defeat the strong against the weak and high-level fighting skills against low-level martial arts. However, the protagonist cannot defeat an ordinary person with his heaven-level skills and earth-level fighting skills. It will take dozens of minutes to fight. This is the trashiest person I've ever seen. Even if he is obviously the protagonist, even if he is a little neurotic, and he is an idiot passerby and the protagonist, why do he still have to fight for a long time against an ordinary person with a lower level of cultivation than himself?

First of all, cheers for the author💪, it's rare to see Dou Po fans, usually they are secondary creations such as sequels. It is very good to start from the beginning before Xiao Yan lost his fighting spirit👍. Few people write about that period of time, but please don't forget the basic personality. Xiao Yan II is a person who is often calm to others and harsh to himself. You may be arrogant and arrogant at the beginning as a proud man, but please don't ignore his intelligence. For a person, Xiao Yan is considered smart. When writing a book, you must also take the character's personality and intelligence into consideration.

After seeing the protagonist drinking with Xiao Yan, his identity as a time traveler was revealed, so he gave up. The protagonist is just a second-rate B. Look at Xiao Yan. No one knows his identity except the readers. He has no authority at all.

What would a DouPo fandom be called DouPo doujin if it didn't involve fighting Xiao Yan? After all, the IQ of the protagonist's opponent, the Soul Clan, has been lowered to an infinite degree. If another fandom also fights with the protagonist Xiao Yan, what's the highlight? Is it such a sense of accomplishment to defeat the mentally retarded? (The Soul Clan captured Yao Lao and kept it at home until Xiao Yan came to rescue him. Then Xiao Yan went and killed a bunch of younger brothers from the Marriage Clan. Xiao Yan said, "I'm helpless too. They forced me to go..." Then Xiao Yan captured the Marriage Clan members. Who cares about him first? There was a sound of strange fire burning the body, and then the soul clan came. After seeing this situation, they shouted: "Xiao Yan, how dare you!" Then Xiao Yan burned the person into ashes. Xiao Yan sighed: "They forced me and threatened me!!!...")

I found that Nalan Yanran was miserable. In the context of fighting, was it wrong for Nalan Yanran to break off the engagement? ? ? The first time I saw this in the original work, I felt very happy. When I read it again, I felt that Nalan Yanran should have done this. I don't like you, and you haven't expressed anything for so many years. Xiao Yan's parents didn't seem to tell you about the engagement, so you don't care. So now that I have a better background than you, it's easy to break off the engagement at home.

If the author has ideals, he shouldn't write harem stories! There won't be more than 500 people watching, so I didn't tell you if it was more than 500 people. Many old book friends are disgusted with harems and books about male and female plots, and they will vomit after reading too many of them. Hope Mouse Tail Juice

My parents are all done! I want to come back and lick the protagonist! You have already suffered in the Xiao family and have no sense of belonging. Moreover, a time traveler has no parents and is bullied. The original owner is indirectly killed! Isn't it okay to practice together with the little medical fairy and go to the mainland? Why is Yun Lanzong the villain? You, the author, have such a strong sense of agency! He has a fiancée who is over 30 years old and yet he treats a girl of several years old! And the author, you are very good at water words! Strong people talk nonsense! Typical villain characteristics! Also, compared with people in any realm, they don't spend more time, otherwise they will write less words!

It's rubbish. I'll just ignore the troublesome plug-ins in the front. Upgrades are so slow. Upgrades are all dependent on strange fire. I just want to know what the purpose of this plug-in is. Later, I started to kneel down and lick it to reduce inflammation! Grass!

The protagonist licking the dog is disgusting! Everyone else is at odds with you! Isn't it disgusting for you to lick evil?

My predecessor was killed by Xiao Yan, and you are still good brothers with him. You even told him the secret of your time travel. I simply can't stand it.

What the author wrote is simply disgusting. He forcibly cleanses his cultivation and licks Xiao Yan even more.

If you don't beat Xiao Yan in Time Travel Po, why don't you just use a hammer?

The author's first chapter about pig's feet is a bit disgusting. There are many poisonous aspects. For example, you want to avenge the original owner. This is a poisonous point. Also, the direction of your revenge is wrong. It should be those who flatter the anti-inflammatory instead of anti-inflammatory. You were so stupid that you asked for a golden finger in the air, and you even bullied Xiao Yan, whose rank will decline in the future. Your pig's feet are even more disgusting than Xiao Yan's.

The author is really poisonous. He said he had a grudge against Xiaoyan before, and then after a few chapters he said he wanted to reconcile and then revealed his identity as a time traveler. How do you really think this is okay? You are so naive. Do you think Xiaoyan is a child? If you say you don't hold grudges, you don't hold grudges. Also, you yourself took someone else's body and you didn't help the original owner to avenge you. Did you want to be possessed by the original owner's soul at the critical moment of your cultivation? Everyone has inherited his memory. Don't you know how he died? Reconciliation means reconciliation? It's poisonous, I'll cripple you and humiliate you, and then I talk about reconciling with you, you know how poisonous it is, not to mention that you can still snatch his opportunity, defeat your opponent, and put the shame on you on your opponent, so you choose to forgive him like a saint? If I slap you and say I'm sorry, will you forgive me? The writing is really poisonous.

I couldn't stand watching it from Qingshan Town on, the main character is a complete dud.

Looking at the fic, the main character's last name is also Xiao, so I'm speechless.

A novel that you can't read after reading the beginning

The protagonist is just like your mother

The thinking of this novel is confusing, and the main plot is completely invisible. The writing style is okay, but the biggest problem is that it is illogical. Well, if you want to read it as a mindless novel, it is okay.

It's a bit silly to write it this way. He is already on the right track and you make him weak again. Besides, Xiao Yan and the protagonist are the same, so they should be treated differently.

A useless book with no bright spots, a bad book within a bad book. If I want to read Harem, should I read it in Qidian? Laughing to death

What a broken book. If you want to be fantasy, just be fantasy. You have also developed high-end weapons. Atomic bombs are just toys. The master of broken books.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

It has to be a rubbish start. A rubbish start. Isn't it better to watch Battle of the Sky than this one?

Starting from 157. What are all the things in the back? I don't think it's recommended anymore, it's better to delete it.

A little watery🤔