One Punch to All Realms

First of all I would like to give a general review of my personal feelings about this book. Overall, it is worth reading. Of course, there are also areas of dissatisfaction, but after all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Let's talk about what I think are the advantages first. On the whole, the writing is online, the plot logic is smooth, and there are basically no intolerable poisonous points. Throughout the whole article, we can also see the author's progress, which can be said to be getting better. Of course, I think the advantages of this book have been discussed in other posts. The specifics are left to the readers to discover by themselves. In this post, I mainly want to talk about some of my personal views and suggestions. First of all is the change in the protagonist's mentality. It is understandable that the invincible power leads to the disappearance of emotions, but this does not mean that the protagonist does not have his own likes and dislikes, nor does it mean that the protagonist becomes a "blank" person in a relative sense. Especially since this is a novel after all, readers come to this book for fun, so writing this way would be boring. Moreover, the protagonist's thoughts have changed many times without much foreshadowing. The turning point is very sudden. Now it feels like he suddenly regards himself as a god. To be honest, it is not good to write like this. My mentality at the beginning was actually quite good. I'm not a good person, but I'm not a bad person either. I'll help you if I can and if I want to. I don't owe you anything, and I'm not your mother. I have to take care of you for the rest of your life. With a little more decisiveness in killing, it would be a very successful character, and readers would love to read it. At least I think it's pretty good, hehe. However, being decisive in killing does not mean that people are considered careless and people are killed without batting an eyelid. Now the protagonist has this kind of momentum. To be honest, he is not likable. You may indeed be invincible, but this does not mean that you are truly God, Heaven, or superior to others. Treating the opposing enemies as ants is called dominance, treating everyone as ants is called idiots. It can be painful to watch, especially if you watch it too much. Aesthetics will be tired, let alone some plots and settings that make people uncomfortable. Secondly is the protagonist's emotional handling. Invincible power doesn't mean eternal life, right? It is not so much that he has no friends, but that he has rejected everything, friendship, love, and even family affection. I think Chen Dachui and the others treat the protagonist as a relative, but the protagonist himself chooses to alienate all this. The biggest problem with invincible novels is that the protagonist is invincible as soon as he comes out, so there is no main plot, so various branch plots, the connection of small stories, the portrayal of supporting characters and the portrayal of emotions have become the main means of enriching the book. For now, the supporting characters do not have impressive characters like the old lion, the black king, and the iron feather king in the reincarnation paradise. The emotional subplots are often what readers like to hear. Third is the protagonist's "arrival". I think the author portrayed this matter very poorly for the protagonist. This is the most annoying thing I've seen so far. The reason why the protagonist goes to different parallel worlds is, to put it bluntly, to see different scenery and experience different lives, not to become stronger or to help people realize their wishes. However, as of now, the protagonist has a very poor sense of his own identity. He is like a bystander, controlling a vest and playing an RPG game. There has always been a sense of separation between him and the Advent identity, especially since the author has been deliberately mentioning this, which is not good. Let me ask, with such a mentality, can he really gain anything in the parallel world? How can you get the slightest touch from "Arrival" that has no sense of substitution? Take the first world and the current world as examples. In the first world, he could have brought himself into that identity, felt the family affection, and could also handle things better, but he didn't. He himself put up a wall between him and his "relatives" and didn't do the finishing work well. It was foreseeable that what he left to Wang Yu was a mess. And the current world, to be honest, is my favorite chapter, but the pace is a bit too fast. The protagonist can definitely learn more things to disguise himself, and why can't the protagonist bring himself into this "hero" identity? What's the harm in being a real hero in this world? Why do I always have to remind myself that this is a persona and the real me is not like this? Is it the power that makes you cold, or is it you who has rejected that ray of light? An invincible strong man does not necessarily have to be ruthless. I think more people are still willing to see a flesh-and-blood character, rather than blindly killing and simply being strong. Having said that I think there are problems with this book, I would like to make some small suggestions to the author at the end. 1. The end of each world is too hasty, and the beginning is also very abrupt. You can explain it in these two paragraphs. It won't take much pen and ink, but it will look much more comfortable, especially for a reader with a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder like me. You will feel like this No beginning and no end. 2. I still suggest that the author sort out the book reviews, because some people's meaningless negative comments really affect the reading experience of other people who are willing to read and want to read. It's a good thing to make serious suggestions, ask questions, and keep them, but as soon as you start this chapter, you see one or several comments like "Abandoned, xxxx", "xxxPoison, xxxx" and similar comments, which are really off-putting. Sometimes even people who think it's okay at first will feel more and more uncomfortable as they read. Don't think that it's better to say good or bad things than no one says anything. For some negative remarks, the person who posted them slaps his ass and leaves after saying it. It is the subsequent readers who suffer the negative impact, which will really affect the readers' stay. 3. Pay attention to typos and sentences that are not smooth in the text. Although these are just some minor flaws, they still affect the reader's reading experience. If there are too many typos and the sentences are unreadable, who would want to continue reading? Solving this problem is very simple. Just read it again after coding. It doesn't waste much time, but it is very good and is good for both the readers and the author. The last thing is that I hope the author can read my review and seriously consider my suggestions, especially about the protagonist's character and approach to things. Of course, This is just my personal suggestion and opinion, and it only represents my personal opinion. This is also my first time to write such a long comment. It seems a bit too long. I don't know if anyone will be happy to read it. Just let it go. I think this book is quite interesting, and I hope it will get better and better. PS: Update quickly, this is the top priority, and it must be slow enough 😏

After just reading a few dozen chapters, the protagonist gave me a feeling of hypocrisy. No matter what he does, he has to find an excuse for himself. He is a very contradictory person. He does not eliminate evil and does not help when good. He always waits for evil people to do evil before eliminating evil. He waits for kind people to be hurt before helping. He kills people to find spiritual sustenance for himself. Generally speaking, it is hypocrisy.

The first three chapters just talk about the daily life of a dog licker... Haven't you seen enough in reality? Fortunately, my poison resistance is quite good. After reading ten chapters, if I am still a novice picking up girls and romance novels, my routine will disappear.

The writing is a bit interesting. It is not easy to write Invincible Style. However, I have always believed that although people on earth are not so capable, they should still have normal EQ and IQ. After traveling through time and space, even if they are invincible, they cannot lower their EQ and IQ too much, right? ! ! 🤔

The author said that this book is a gentle story. I really don't know what the author's understanding of tenderness is. All I saw in this book was violence and killing. The definition of a good person is not much different from that of a bad person. The protagonist's character is unstable. The author wants to write a Saitama template, but the more he writes, the more he writes. Sometimes he has feelings but says he has no feelings, and he has no feelings but insists on writing someone with feelings. And what is the definition of a protagonist? Good guy? But he kills without mercy, killing a bunch of people, and the protagonist is the protagonist, why must he imitate Saitama? The main character is still possessed by a god of death, killing people wherever he goes. He refuses to save people when he can, but insists on pretending to save people until all the people are dead and only the beauty is left. After that, he has to be given a model of a good person, and he has to teach his younger brother how to be a good person, which is not ordinary! The further you go, the more crooked it becomes, a dark novel in the skin of a good guy! There are a lot of things I can complain about later that I won't go into…

I read more than a hundred chapters in one go. Except for the character changes in the early stages, the feeling in the later stages is very good. You can see many tricks of great writers in the writing, which is very good.

Except for the protagonist's character and code of conduct, everything is pretty good.

I have read more than ten chapters, and I feel that it is bland and the style of online writing is not obvious. I am afraid that I will not make much money, but I like it very much. It's so uncomfortable. If the author learns the routines of writing online articles, he won't want to read them. But if he doesn't learn them, will he be able to persevere?

Overall, I think this book is pretty good. From the beginning to the end, I slowly feel the change in the protagonist's mentality. I wonder if in the later period, he will really become a saint with the same concepts as Mr. Saitama, rich in emotions, and living in the world with flesh and blood. But there is one bad thing. During the soul descending time in the middle, I am not invincible? I read it because of Teacher Saitama's invincible attribute. I believe that most book friends here are like me. Without this attribute, I feel that this book has no soul. What's more, the title of the book is One Punch and All Worlds! So I hope that the author can incorporate this invincibility attribute throughout the entire text in the future, and I will continue to support it! PS: Teacher Saitama's invincible attribute is that no matter how powerful the opponent is, he can blow it up with one punch if he is serious about it. No matter how powerful the opponent is, he cannot cause any damage to himself. It is truly injury-free. So don't be like other invincible novels that use Saitama's teacher's attributes. It's hard to win in a tie or you're injured and bleeding? That would be too poisonous! ! !

I like this novel very much, and the author is also very diligent, but I am poor and can't give a reward, so I can only subscribe silently 🙂 Cheers to the author

Will the future title be---Forcing Wang. Yu?

Isn't this bug a bit serious? Have you forgotten the plot two chapters ago?

It was good in the front, but it was basically the same in the later stages. Come on.

This book is really good. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. I really like this book. The author must keep writing it. I will always support you and never give up on this book.

This is Jianghu. Bitter, sour, sweet and spicy are all Jianghu. Those who keep saying that the Holy Mother wants to kill them all. You watch war movies. The effect is very good. The so-called Jianghu is not just fighting and killing. The author writes about Wang Yu, a man with upright views. Don't make a fuss when you see a protagonist with upright three views. Do you want to watch a dark murder story about Fighting and Killing? Do you lack these in the starting point? You want to come here to impose your own things on others.

If you have anything you want to say, come here and say it, whether it's scolding or complaining about the plot, I won't delete or ban you. If you have any good suggestions, you can tell me here. Thank you very much.

Having read so many books, this book is indeed a masterpiece. Speaking of which, I haven't read books written by great masters for a long time, because in the past, those great masters wrote quite well, but after so many years, some great masters have not changed their writing style. To put it nicely, it means not forgetting the original intention, but to put it unfavorably, it means being old-fashioned and unable to keep pace with the times. Like me, many readers have changed their tastes after reading the book for so many years. This is normal, but what is abnormal are those masters who refuse to change their writing methods. Of course, many people may say that I am wrong, and this is normal. After all, those great masters make a lot of money, so naturally they don't want to improve their writing methods. However, this book is really good and makes me want to read it. Although the previous supplementary points are not included in the introduction, I also want to read it. What I want to say to the author is that if your later parts are as exciting as the first, then I will keep following you. Speaking of the reasons why I can't read many books, the first is that the logic is confusing, and in the end the author doesn't know what he is writing. The second is that it is too cliched to pretend to be a slap in the face, as if the protagonist did it when normal people would never do it anyway, and the villain is not intelligent enough and actually let the protagonist run away. Third, the hole was dug too big and not filled in properly. He smashed his feet and hit his face. It was mentioned earlier that this character was a great villain, but later when a larger map came out, it was discovered that, oh, it turns out that this was just something that was casually dealt with by someone. The fourth is plot stomach medicine, for example, the heroine or important female supporting role is written to death or given away due to some normal or abnormal reasons. I'm sorry, most of us readers have a very difficult life and want to find some solace in novels, but you still write like this. I don't know about others, but I will never read any novels written by that author again. Don't give readers stomach medicine. Such a story that is plain with a little storm, a little turbulent in development, and finally reunited may be the story we want. After all, ordinary life is life. Finally, if the author thinks what I said is acceptable, please add more details.

Fuji is just a newbie, and with the recommendation in the previous paragraph, some things made me very nervous, so the quality may have dropped. If you brothers are patient and willing to give me expectations, I will continue to work hard to write it well. If I really feel that it is not possible, there is nothing I can do. As I said before, I will work hard to write and strive for progress. I don't know whether it is good or bad. I will take it one step at a time. Here, I am very grateful to the friends who are willing to stay and read my books. Thank you very much. Even if it is for you, I will work hard and not let you down.

The protagonist wants to learn from Qi Jingchun. Then what I wrote is the epitome of the two novels Xue Zhong and Jian Lai. Among them, Persimmon and Laohuang have already come out. The following pictures show Chen Pingan taking Li Huai and others to study. Not bad. The main thing is that villains just don't get attracted to beautiful women. Chen Zhenghua didn't even dare to write like this. . One last thing. He Chen Zhenghua knows nothing about swords

Thank you for the recommendation, brother. I really appreciate it. Thank you all!! I wish you happiness, good flowers and a full moon, and early birth... Ahem, code words, I will work hard to make it as comfortable as possible for you. Thank you, my gratitude cannot be expressed in words, thank you very much.

He died of poison in the first twenty chapters. In order to save a second-generation martial arts girl who was raped by a young man, the protagonist's friend deliberately said that she was ugly. The rescued girl and her father came to take revenge. They knew that the protagonist's friend was actually the girl's savior, but because of the sentence "she was ugly", the girl wanted to teach the protagonist a lesson, and her father wanted to kill the savior who was resented by the girl because his daughter did not like it. Then the protagonist's friend was seriously injured and was about to die, so the protagonist stepped in to save him. At this time, an elder teacher appeared and taught the protagonist various principles of life, asking him to stop fighting and to be reasonable. The protagonist then stopped in frustration and distress. At this time, the girl who wanted to retaliate against kindness was rude and rude to the protagonist, but the protagonist did not react at all. I don't know what is in the author's head. Anyway, I want to break the hands and feet of its relatives and then talk about the truth to make it understand that fighting for world peace is wrong.

What a nonsense, a town has a powerful blacksmith, an enigmatic teacher with a story behind it, and the mysterious so-called powerful family of Li Yi? It feels like it's just a place where the protagonist appears, and any dog ​​that walks by might be a mythical beast!

I voted for monthly votes and recommended votes, please improve.

This book is full of the author's personal stuff, and talks about some truths that seem to be correct but are nonsense. I read online novels for entertainment and pleasure. To get an education, I might as well read serious literature or documentary literature, even if I successfully learn it!

I think this article is quite touching. There really aren't many like this anymore, keep at it! What about today?

I've read dozens of chapters, and I've been making a fool of myself. I've never been sure what the protagonist's camp is. He says he's evil but doesn't do evil things. He says he's good and won't give a damn if someone dies in front of him. He says he's both good and evil. And he keeps saying that the protagonist has a ruler in his heart and has a clear conscience. So what the protagonist's ruler is is never made clear, which makes people feel like he's been setting up a memorial arch.

Why does the protagonist always encounter a child or a dragster? This routine has been repeated so many times that I am tired of aesthetics. Isn't it possible for the protagonist to go alone?

I was poisoned for my hair? You almost starved to death in the mountains for months and don't want to become stronger and think about your hair? Aren't you afraid of starving to death in the mountains next time?

I have read about a hundred chapters so far, but there is one thing I don't understand. The protagonist has never encountered any of them, including the horns, teeth, poisonous insects and poisonous insects in the car and boat shop. Is this still a river and lake? If you know you can't beat someone, but you don't use poison or use dirty tricks, then this river and lake is less ruthless and more gentle. Jianghu, where there are people, is Jianghu, especially inns. There are rich sources of information. There are many low-level characters. Generally, big forces will set up inns to gain intelligence capabilities, but the protagonist cannot touch any of them. Is this still a Jianghu?

Author, if the follow-up plot is still as boring and rubbish as it is now, we will all meet again, and we will see you later.