Struggle in the World of American Comics

I don't know what the first point is about, it's a mess. The second point is that the protagonist is so weak, it's just a joke! The third point is that this golden finger is as useless as it is! It's okay to put the skills directly, the bullets fired can only be fired for a few rounds, and I want to kill Thanos in seconds after awakening, so it's such a rubbish golden finger! Fourth, your introduction is really messy, and you are a fucking weakling with a golden finger!

A stallion story wearing the skin of DNF and Marvel. I feel like I shouldn't have subscribed to even one chapter. Buying a steamed bun for 5 yuan can still fill your stomach. You are doing no good and polluting your mind...

The first part was okay, but the second part didn't want to watch it after Daozu Hongjun came out. Marvel is just Marvel, and Eastern Prehistoric is just Dongfang Prehistoric.

I fell asleep with the main character after just a few chapters. Are you a killer or a duck? The super-killer girl must have been booked. If you want to write about a killer, just write about a killer. Don't do anything like selling sheep over someone else's head.

When I reached chapter 300 of the DNF career, I only saw the initial skills, subsequent skills, and weapons. If this doesn't work, I should change the introduction. The golden finger is useless, the plot is not bad, the core DNF is gone

After reading a little bit, I always felt that there was something wrong. After looking at the title of the book, it turned out that the setting was too broken. Too many movies felt like they were forced into it. We, Snake and Shield, are not allowed to have such a ridiculous alliance.

If you don't conform to mainstream values, you deserve to be thrown out of the street If you don't respect the plot, you don't change the plot and your brain is full of mistakes, you deserve to be thrown into the street Drawing a tiger cannot be an anti-dog, this is what this book is about

I was in a book shortage and saw this book. The early power system and fighting description are weak. But if you don't DNF it, you can still watch it. The plot is not bad, at least it is quite imaginative and very innovative. The overall emotional line is very interesting. Because of John Wick's jokes, I am inspired to be a scumbag. The Shura field with several women was very interesting. The emotions are similar to those in European and American action movies. I can accept the movie, and I can barely accept the emotions in the novel. And the male protagonist is really a scumbag. But the scumbag is aboveboard and aboveboard, which is still interesting. The power system in the later period is pretty good (at least some of it is not bad stuff), and it's pretty good among Marvel fans. At least it can be seen that the author has been working hard to control it, and there is no big collapse. If there is a bright spot that may also be a poisonous point for some people, it is that the protagonist is not the kind of person who is super powerful alone. He is considered powerful in the Women's Federation, but he also needs the help of his teammates. At least I like this better. The main reason for the Love Women's Alliance movie is the story of a group of heroes. All in all, the book is still very good, with new ideas and ideas. Come on, author.

It was okay at first, but at the beginning of Chapter 197, the poison wore off me, pull it, pull it, pull it, . . . . . . . . . . . Farewell.

The lack of authority is embarrassing and boring. It is better to attribute the power to oneself. This is the core of Qidian's article.

As a ten-year player of Poison Milk and a loyal audience of action and science fiction movies, I am very pleased with the entry point of this novel. 🤭 very cleverly combines several action movies with their own violent aesthetics (ps: it is also very friendly to book friends who have never seen it. The author has included notes. It is really hard work and I highly recommend friends who have not seen it to take a look. It is really good). It explains the character background of the protagonist and the setting of YY abilities in the future. (Just mentioned Leviathan and Soko I guessed who the two brothers and sisters were when I read Wia, and I could only smile knowingly.) The ability value setting structure is not broken, unlike the previous American comics or Marvel series of light novels, which are full of shock or a relationship with Tony. (Why is Spider-Man the most popular superhero?! It's because he's down-to-earth. Ordinary people can be yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyidududu. Com). I also hope that the author will get better and better in the future. Seeing that I've rambled so much, people who understand still understand. . . I believe that the author is also of the same mind, so I would like to say one more thing in the end, please update as soon as possible ps: Starting from the background of Leviathan, there are really not many American comic novels that intersect with Black Widow and others from another perspective. Come on, author💪

I just want to know if Vision appears according to the plot of Avengers 2 after Wanda becomes a witch, will the brother-in-law of the protagonist agree?

Let's talk about the feeling after reading more than 30 chapters. As a DNF gunner, if you are Goldfinger, shouldn't the gunner's early blocking and knee-hitting be bugs? Blocking can block a skill or attack. Even Baby Xuxu's bathing pool can be blocked. Adding a knee to push back such a powerful thing will make the water better.

I vomited. More than three hundred chapters. It was okay in the early stage. The messy pot of stew in the back looks terrible. Please don't just combine a bunch of movie plots to become your original creation. The Apocalypse X-Men made me want to vomit after watching it, and the Skynet Terminator literally spurted out a mouthful of blood.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Away from the protagonist. Head full of women? A big wave of power breaks out in various countries, okay? It raises the average combat power, right? As mentioned earlier, in the later stages of Wakanda's global war against the Frost Giants, where are the people, the country, and the Black Panther? Cut? This Rainbow Bridge TP is nothing to write home about. Can't Rainbow Bridge be teleported together collectively? And millions of Frost Giants are too many. I think your alternative New York war (or American war) is better than this global war. I made a lot of complaints. The most uncomfortable thing is that the protagonist has no sense of existence. He keeps messing around. Not to mention that you are the mastermind behind the scenes. The entire laboratory has been forgotten. The underground intelligence system is not involved. He is not involved in such a good opportunity as being born in the dark world. Winston at the Continental Hotel does not control the cooperative brainwashing? You are really weak in developing the power of death. How can you make a death mark on your heart? Ancient One, Odin. Don't you want to learn a few secret skills? You don't even bother to control your power. You treat yourself like a magic ammunition depot all day long. Biubiubiu, you still can't deal any damage and can only clear minions? During the fight against Lao Fei, your magic pistol couldn't even penetrate a glacier wall, so you made a piece of trash? As mentioned before, the skill of shooting several shots per second is to hit a place. One shot is not enough. Five shots are too failed to be used as a gun. How about a Holy Light Sword in the back to chop off the dick? How many inheritances are there in the sword? It would be good to have some holy light skills, or it would be good to have the big sword's own skills. If you want to have a good-looking and exciting plot during the war, and highlight the protagonist, you can either try Holy Light Healing or Daddy Invincible. Either the Holy Light clears the field or the Great Sword of Heaven or something, the final game will determine the outcome, and then shout a loud name to the audience, brother, the King of Frost Giants, Lao Fei, is dead, I, the fourth son of Odin, announce the end of the war or something. Isn't it handsome? Isn't it cool? Why is the red-haired face fruit so ridiculous? It's because he is domineering. The Beast Assault style also shows that the protagonist is reckless and strong, and there is no trace behind it. There is only an ordinary superhero who goes with the flow and is completely integrated into the Avengers. The theme and style of the book are not very clear, so what makes it attractive? My senior brother is too steady, and his strategy is outstanding. The most important thing is stability! Stable! The highlight of this book is that the protagonist is a scumbag. It's better to die on a woman's belly than to have that Marvel book with ex-girlfriends all over the universe. Russell's Marvel movie "The End of the World" is awesome. It stands out from other people's sketches and is almost invincible. It's still worth watching. The protagonist is the person who is the most eye-catching or has a major outstanding performance in each plot copy. Create a sense of immersion, otherwise readers will not see the fun. The timeline and world line of this book are too messy, the scope is too messy, the plot is too messy, and there are so many villains that the author cannot control at all. Wasn't there a chapter a year and a half ago? It was a complete waste of time. Go to Asgard to build a spaceship, take people to expand the dungeon, and explore the Marvel world. Do you have to die on the same earth? Don't take advantage of it. Mashiro has come to Marvel. You also said that you have the authority. You are completely the reserve team of the third-level boss in the future. Odin also wants to place a bet in advance. Then you have no subjective initiative at all and are completely drifting with the crowd. What a mess the divine blood and soul crystals are. He also said that Odin is preparing for Ragnarok, so what he wants is for you to help Asgard. You swear by your authority and so on. Not to mention completely protecting Asgard, you can always protect the inheritance of Asgard. I think Odin totally accepts that. Then rely on Odin's rich man to push it to the second divine drive. Make a system mission or something, accept a test, and then realize what you are, what is the heart of a strong person, what is the path of God, what strengths do you have, and what skills have you developed? Give readers an explanation to establish your stage and position in Marvel's power system. You can be shameless when facing women, but under normal circumstances, you should also highlight the masculine charm and domineering character of the protagonist. In the Hela part, you take off your clothes every now and then? Are you a fool or a fool? I won't answer the following part in the preface. I'm afraid Hela will kill you, so please give me a clear head. The fourth son of Odin was not for a clown. The future holder of the power of death, the Speaker of Death, is like a ridiculous clown. You should say what you say on any occasion, and you can talk nonsense when you meet others. Hela has a character like the arrogant slaying queen. If you use your identity as the fourth son of Odin to explain the situation, will people not give you face? You can lick shoes because of the chuunibyou, and it will pass with a smile in your heart. There is also the one who says all day that he is low-key and not pretentious. Please🙏, don't write this kind of thing and tell the readers. When you show up to show off, you have to do your part, otherwise you are not the protagonist. Invisible pretentiousness is the most deadly. The protagonist lacks AOE, control skills, and magical power control skills. He has a magical body, but he still can't fly. It's ridiculous. Ebony throat is so handsome with his mental power. The power of death does not touch the soul at all, and the soul attack is too funny. And the divine body is still a trace. Don't write a death god? A small power controller? And at least explain how to grow into a third-level boss. Is Odin sleeping? From Hela's side, the eldest princess still doesn't understand this secret? One or two sentences and then elaborate on it to give readers a general understanding. And build a kingdom of death, your own kingdom of heaven, etc., And finally become a third-level boss and take over Midgard's cycle of death. Kick Murphy out or work together or something. How many years has the devil king lived? His pure anger is all fake. Only benefits can attract them. The protagonist kills a clone and then lets the villain fight him? What grudge?

After reading Chapter 40, I guess the author has never played DNF. The skill only has a name. In fighting, you just name a bunch of skills, and then the enemy dies. No skill effects are written. And this author also wrote about using a stepping gun to climb the wall? ? ? ? If you have never played DNF copy skills, please check the skill description. This is a rubbish book about having relationships with various female characters to attract people. It has been reported.

Great book, be careful when driving and don't get in there!

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This book is really enough. It was okay in the early stage, but it started to fall apart once I had divine power. The second evolution has to force the plot. Four master ninjas holding Edelman alloy swords almost hacked the protagonist to death, and then escaped without a trace? The protagonist's so-called power of death and divine power in heaven only show the extraordinary properties of reducing Liao and healing. Mark of Death killed Mephitus Spuna once, but could not kill the Ice Giant King. This is the so-called relative sure hit and sure kill. Not much to say, but in summary: the protagonist's strength improves too quickly, and then the author adds a buff to the protagonist that makes him weak when encountering weakness, in order to make up for the word count or for the sake of the Yuan Xiao Theater. With the impression of reading the book in the early stage, forcing myself to endure so many chapters really made me sick! Vent, benevolence is in the eye of the beholder and wisdom is in the eye of the wise. Don't disturb me

At least half of you trolled the author. I was very angry. Don't the other half of you have mobile phones?

It's not that no one has written about DNF + Marvel, but there are really not many who have written like this. The book is out of stock. I jumped in without reading the comments. Now I feel like complaining. I thought about it, forget it, and just read it if I want. If you don't read this, there are other ones. The main thing I want to say in this post is that many people complain that the DNF system is weak? Please, please go find out before you say this. Which universe have you ever seen where people can play with time and space? Where can people play with black holes and singularities? In which place can people summon evil spirits to draw people? Where can the clergy punish their own gods? Where are the dimensional walls used like ordinary large military weapons? Where is the swordsman who can blast out lava and wash the ground with one sword? Where can a nuclear bomb be used as a conventional strike as easily as throwing a mine? Where is the particle weapon used as a cool down ultimate? Where can a blind man use thunder? Where can a young man come back from the dead? Where can a magical girl synthesize new elements by herself? Where can a sniper ignore the space and be sure to hit? Where are the demonized people who only want to seek revenge from gods? Wait, wait, wait~Finally, where is the god who appears from time to time to create the world? Marvel? It can be said that if it weren't for the dog's planning, we would have hit Kahn long ago! If you think about it carefully, all the mistakes are Celia's fault! We should have saved that goblin back then!

I really can't stand it anymore. Stop fucking with brotherly love. Family ties are like the sea. You are a killer, not those retarded novels. The boss of some killer organization is your adoptive father. What are you doing? Isn't the Red Room a typical agent killer organization? It's emotional. If you are told to kill you, I will kill you. Do you think it's playing house? In your own novel, the person who dies is either someone else or yourself. Stop making yourself look like a mentally retarded person, and force the protagonist to mature.

Why does this book become more frustrating the further I read it? Obviously Marvel, time travel, and system, shouldn't the combination of these words be synonymous with cool writing? It was fine in the beginning, but later I saw the protagonist facing such pressure, and it felt like the protagonist was going crazy.

There are too many ties, the protagonist is tied up, and it always feels not satisfying enough. What readers want to read is a refreshing article, not some bullshit relationship. Of course, you can have feelings, but you don't need to spend so much space to write it. A refreshing article, a refreshing article, a refreshing article. Say the important things three times.

I saw Chapter 270, only two words, I feel aggrieved.

To be honest, the idea is quite good, integrating some other film and television content into American comics, but if the writing is not good, it will easily become boring, and too many things will become confusing. Without a main set of content, what is this world? With the strength of S. H. I. E. L. D., It is difficult for many things to survive, and with the supernatural beings in American comics, many forces have to be shuffled. It cannot be said that the Continental Hotel is written so well. The result is a group of mortal killers, but once there are supernatural beings, can the Continental Hotel still be the Continental Hotel? What will SHIELD and HYDRA do with the Continental Hotel?

The plot is okay, and the fighting is written like Shi. The same rapid shooting, step shooting, roundhouse kick, knee kick, instant kick, moving shooting, random shooting, all skill combinations, regardless of whether the scene is suitable or not. Then such a series of skills are thrown out without description, and it is all up to the reader's imagination. Has the author played it? I was still talking about level 19, and then there was random shooting and automatic shooting.

I felt relieved when I saw so many people saying it didn't look good in the comments. I won't say anything else. The author pieced together the contents of many movies. This book has a very large world view. Writing a world view that is too big is the easiest way to write a book that will collapse. Especially if you write many movies in one world, it will basically collapse, not to mention a DNF.

It has been completely written down! The author has completely let himself go! Goodbye (ー_ー)!!

So, in the later part, even the career is gone, the golden finger is gone, and the author has lost his writing skills?

The first ten chapters were so painful to read, the protagonist's behavior was very inexplicable, and the author's arrangements were also very disturbing.