With the System, I Became a Game Planner

I am the author of "Blood Butterfly Record". I was very excited after reading your long review. So come back and read your book as well. I also read a chapter, and it felt like it was not like reading a book, but like watching a movie. Every word felt like it was spoken by a living person. Although I don't understand the setting of this kind of book, I find it very attractive. Maybe I also want to have such a great talent, which makes people want to read more. . I originally thought your writing was not good, but after thinking about it carefully, if you use too written vocabulary, you may not feel as if you are on the scene. Anyway, I learned something. Cheers, and please support me in the future.

The content of the past three chapters tells a love story of a second-tier character? Are you kidding me? Well, you said before that the two-line Wu and Xu are respectively the main perspective, so is this definition of the second-line okay? From a personal point of view, if I don't expect to be the only one in planning in the future, I won't even be a second-tier person... It's not that I hate POV writing from multiple character perspectives, nor do I hate writing realistic plots, but you are going too far with it... Forcibly delaying the plot, slowing down the rhythm of the quite compact dungeon guide, affecting the continuity of reading. The characters who have not been established are forcibly added to the scene, and the characters are created with plots that are almost independent of the main line... Boss, this is the main text, not a side story. This character is not that popular yet... What is the plot of these 3 chapters? If it was closely related to the main plot, I would have tolerated it, but in the end, I just made a blind date story and complained about the industry? This is to watch the battle of wits between sand sculpture players and 🐶 planners, not to watch the story of urban love and entrepreneurship... I know that I want to introduce these two characters later to add to the game design, but can it not be so abrupt? It is best for Wu Lai to lead the real planning line. At least he is still the nominal protagonist in the article. There is no problem in playing a planning c. Please be sure not to let the character wander away from this alone. If you want to write about reality, it is best to be closely related to the game itself... To be honest, the plot at the beginning is not very attractive. It is just a time-killing thing when fishing. Later, when the bug appears and Xu shines, I decided to follow this book. In the end, I felt that I was eating it in the last few chapters. The blank paper is boring... What I want to see is the happy daily life of sand sculpture players, I want to see the battle of wits and courage between 🐶 planners and sand sculpture players, and what I want to see even more is the responsibility of sand sculpture players. When the world needs heroes, they can stand up... Brother, come on...

I saw the author's advertisement on Zhihu and came to take a look.

It's worth a look, I'll give it a try.

Some personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like them. First of all, the branch plots are closely integrated with the main plot. This is the most basic requirement for web writing. If it is separated, it will create a more coherent reading. If there are two more chapters, I think there will be people who will point out the cross. If this branch line is moved back to when these two characters are preparing to join the planning team, it will not be abrupt. Secondly, this type of book basically wants to see the sand sculpture operations of the players. On average, the protagonist returns to his soul in two or three chapters, refreshes his existence, and explains his growth. Then, the sand sculpture players' sand sculpture operations are actually more effective. One is not enough, but two or a group. Secondly, I have read this type of article, and this book has a sense of familiarity with the promotional video. I suggest that instead of following the common Shenma update log, you can try to use CG instead. It will not be a problem to write at least two or three chapters here. (Keep the previous description, I think it's OK). Finally, you can actually do things boldly. My favorite one right now is the copy operation you described. I think when reading this type of article, you don't look at how good the protagonist is at fighting, but at how silly the players are, how many touching stories there are, and how many imaginative new ways of playing the game are. I think this type of book belongs to the semi-group portrait category. The widespread popularity caused by the group portrait is a very important and exciting point, and it is also a main way for the protagonist to show off.

The writing is still very good, the rhythm is cheerful and joyful, I will keep following it 🌹

Just invested and got three yuan, so happy

100 People are too few to test, and the game unfolds too slowly

It feels pretty good. You can take a look.

Can Chapter 20 also be on the bestseller list? ? ?

What about the work? I want to see the race and occupation profile

Four days...

Don't you, the authors, feel guilty if you don't update 70,000 words on National Day?

The settings of Wu Xia and the assassin sister Shi Yu are hehehehe

I strongly hope that the author will write a setting chapter, which will systematically talk about settings, such as occupations and main characters, so that readers can sort out the plot more quickly. Writing is not easy, so please give it a try (ง •̀_•́)ง

One chapter will be updated in a few days 🙂

Come on, author, I like the game world you wrote.

Urging, urging, urging, urging, urging, urging.

Updated ten days ago... Is it cool?

I just saw this book and looked at the table of contents. It is updated every week. I might as well give it a try.

Emmm... I discovered this novel yesterday and subscribed to all the chapters today. After a closer look, it turned out that it was updated two days ago. Do you think I am desperate? Schrödinger's eunuch, I'm convinced...

It's been a long time since I read this book. It turns out I'm tired of it.

It's been off for a week. Please update soon.

I also found it on Zhihu. Mine is a little different in style from yours.