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Let me talk about the title of the book first. I thought it was an ancient romance, but it turned out not to be the case. . . Then there is the overall framework of the story, which is divided into three volumes. The structure is clear, but the problem is that it cannot withstand scrutiny if you look closely. Particularly, some descriptions feel long and stiff. Maybe they will get better later on. Usually everything is difficult at the beginning, but it will be fine once the writing goes smoothly later on. There are still some issues that I have written in this chapter. It is recommended that you pay attention to the details and some typos. There is also the characterization. I have read Chapter 4, but the character of the heroine and the character of the kitten have not been revealed yet. For example, in an article about a boss, first of all, the boss is charming and arrogant when he speaks and acts, and he can be remembered immediately. Or the heroine is silly and sweet. Even if it is not clearly marked who said this sentence, the reader can immediately think of him. (This is just an example, not to discriminate or praise Ba Zongwen) Your overall writing style is a bit too tame, and the conflict setting is not particularly strong, especially the emotional conflict (this does not specifically refer to love), so I feel a little sleepy when I read it. Because I have only read the first four chapters so far, I will give these suggestions first, and I will continue to pay attention later. Code words are not easy, come on! I believe you will get better and better as you write.

Hello, author. Your ideas are very different from other authors, but some of the content in the process is a bit over-scheduled. However, I am more optimistic about you and hope to communicate with you at any time. I wish you will complete your first writing and achieve good reading volume. If necessary, please contact me. I very much hope to work with you to complete such a perfect novel. I'm optimistic about you.

To put it bluntly, I have no expectations after reading your book. The free chapter is not as interesting as your acceptance speech. Probably you put all the spoilers of the story into the introduction. The introduction + detailed comments already know what kind of story you want to tell. Needless to say the rest. If this path continues, the only thing worth looking forward to is the fourth volume. Ah! ? I would like to give you a personal opinion and summarize the plot of the story in your own way. It would be better to change the title of the book to "The Love of Three Worlds". Stop it here... Then... Please continue with your performance.

After reading it, I thought it was probably a female video, but I thought it was very good. The writing is delicate, without the pretense of being a fairy, and it can depict the appearance of the characters more to express the personality of the task. The writing is really good👍

I read more than a dozen chapters in one go and found it very interesting! To be honest, all this book lacks is a few recommendations! When the recommendation comes, the results will be overwhelming! Come on, author! Don't forget to add some essence!

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Return visit has been bookmarked, keep up the good work

Come on, stumble upon it, all subscriptions are encouraged.

You need to subscribe to one chapter of my chapter, mutual fans, thank you very much

Thank you so much. I have collected it and read it slowly.

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If possible, write about the psychology of the characters... Girls have delicate minds... When I read the article, I felt that these people seemed to be indifferent to life and death...

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