The Sound of the Pipa Disappears, and No One Has to Worry

The writing is good, the narrative method is good, and the story is attractive. It's a pretty good novel, especially the prologue, and the following chapters, it feels really good. However, it is impossible to say that there are no problems. The first point is too long-winded and I don't know where the focus is. The second point cannot be divided into paragraphs. If these two points are solved, the performance will not be bad while maintaining stability. Ah, here comes the point] Something needs to be paid attention to. A book like this is enough to eat ashes at my uncle's house. Maybe I'll check it out someday. (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑) So, work hard (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑

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